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Review of Who Me???  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Who me, please read
to see the trees below
come alive to cheer you,
walking and talking now
in a language not known.
Too afraid to wonder why
a tree would talk to you
to tell a story in a poem.

Bishop Pine, you are requested
to invite the Japanese Cedar
and the Chinese Weeping Willow
to dine with the American Sycamore
at the home of California Laurel.
Out west, where Western Catalpa
is waiting with Silky Camelia,
the second sister of Hackberry,

to strike a deal with Black Oak
and his wife, Snowdrop Tree.
The petrified cousin of Black Locust,
scheming with Toona and Chusan Palm
to plant a Sycamore and a Mountain Gum
in the way of the invitation parade,
along Grey Birch and Hop Tree.

The crossing, where Silver Lime
will form a line of Coniferous Trees
that will confuse the crowd to panic
and bump into White Ash. Her friend
poor shy Magnolia gentle crying away,
while comforting little trailing Rubina
now in the way of the crowded crowd,
trying to see who will lead the parade.

Am I blind to the light through the trees
where I see eyes staring down at me,
strapped to this bed so bare?
Waiting to see the parade;
the trees waiving
peacefully now,
the color
green nature, thinking about you.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe a friend.
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1177
Review of Burden  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In the town of weeping
they find you sleeping
hiding in the snow
below the ground
the wind blowing
violently
burdened
by the weight
falling on the town
where will they find you
to go and tell your parents.

A poem review.
I'm sorry -" Jammer" - A Dutch word for I'm sorry.

Simply Positive Review.
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1178
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To pray a prayer
I need the snow
in my mind.
to find
a friend.
Prosperous
in words to guide
giving me strength
to transcend above
to the glory of the Lord

Her words in a prayer
in the valley of the shadow.
Inspiring me to review in a poem.

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by embe
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1179
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To dream a haunting face
they need eyes to shoot you
your child to hide in a bath
waiting for help to Russia
to see the springtime new
their hiding with the Jews.

A review in a poem
inspired by Momo.
My Face Will Haunt You.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe
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1180
Review of My Passy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a passy for a child
so Richard can sleep in peace
from lack of sleep till two in the morning
before he hit the road to run away and explode
for thirty two years, until a new passy was needed
for his daughters two year old son who cries at night.
A sorry tale of woe, for many a parent to remember yesterday.

Inspiring this whining review in a poem by embe.

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1181
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To kiss Princess Zelda
Prince Goby needs a potion
for her beauty to appear
before the King.

But Paul her lover
breaks the glass
her face now ugly
to marry her Paul.

A tiny poem
inspired embe
to review Sarah.
A writer of note.

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1182
Review of Filling Holes  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Upon a day years ago
I met Alex
in a review to me
as a newbie on the block.

Now my turn to write
a review
for filling holes
metaphorically;

deeper and deeper
across the landscape
never to see the bottom;
embe searching for Alex.

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Review of I Don't Know Why  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I don't know why
an Angel flew down from the sky
the LifeFinder
in my life with a review to encourage
my future life.

The review of your lyrics -
So hard to say goodbye
every day you make me cry.
Goodbye, goodbye from embe.

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Review of Fiendish Delight  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
To be hunted by the moon
a fiendish delight
of the appirition in the night.

Beware her fangs
your flesh ripped in strips
for a bite to eat,

in the nights dark whispers
unsolved mysteries;
the corpse tied down to die.

Inspired in a poem
by the judge embe.

Rising Star Review.
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Review of The Dance  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to fly fast twisting and twirling
bobbing and weaving
from being a fool
to re-enter
the story.

A poem
for a lady fair
stepping on my toe
the raccoon to remind me
wasting her time to review it over again.

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by embe the fool.
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1186
Review of The winner  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To hear their screams
I cry in pain;
the wealth I seek
seeing children starving.

A man with no feet;
I hide his pain
in my wretched game,
the fortune of fame;

my bank to burst.
The beggar at the gate;
I know not his name
to bury my shame.

inspired by this tragedy,
a poem by Bella.
Now reviewed by embe.

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1187
Review of Sunset  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To master the sunshine
a sliver of hope is needed
to shine in the darkness
before the mirror in the sky.

The new moon arrives
peeping out - it seems
watched behind the trees
a lady clad in a siver dress.

Inspiring embe to review
her bite size poetry today.

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1188
Review of Grandpa's Still  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
O to be the king on the hill
from dusk to dawn
nobody trespassing now.
The Pit Bulls
roaming around the hill
to the shady crew,
hiding away from the brew
grandpa made;
brewed on moonshine hill

for embe to taste and review
slurring words on this page.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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1189
Review of Acrostics  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wake upon a cloud
seeing Big Ben chime
a loud sound in time
for me to thank Acme

her helping reviews
to change my life
from a newbie
once upon a time

lonely without a friend
now to see her stars
shining for me
in words to improve.

May these simple words
ring in your heart
from embe
in appreciation.

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Review of tears and rain  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to read a poem by cymrunian wallace
a journey in avoidance of pain
inspired by the welsh poets.

embe, a poet inspired to suggest
five times three lines as below:-
easier to read this fab poem.
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Wet weather saddens so many mortals
Many morals wish with faith for portals
Portals put there to transport travelers to exotic environments

Environments from forests to tundra’s, to jungles, jumping to rivers, to ancient settlements
Anywhere to settle our minds from the dreary days of rain

Rain to some, shows us under the deepness of our hearts the pain
Pain that we keep to ourselves even though it hurts
Hurts so badly that God sends rain showers that spurts

Spurts the pain away but we still avoid
Avoid and ignore our inner pains is void
Void because like nature God makes tears and rain to heal

Heal our own souls so to keep our health and to heal
Heal the earth each continent with in its own time
The rain too revives and also heals the land in good time

Because both Nature and man are creations of God
So the tears and rain are not to be avoided because avoidance
Avoidance is in the end ignorance.

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Review of Friendship  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To find a way to happiness,
I turned away to pray
to read a poem
by Jyothi Rao.

Her words of friendship
written in her youth;
the love to see
if it is true;

the moon to swoon
below the stars,
shining now
for me.

Inspired to review
in a poem
by Jyo.

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by embe
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Review of Oblivious  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Peace awaits the warmth
the dawn awakes old
in mysteries untold
lingering still
the night to return
hidden in darkness
a shadow light frightened
to blackness
hidden in the dew
the far side of the world.

Angie Harris inspiring me
to review in a poem
from her words.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe

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1193
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A tick for TikkunOlam
his poem to shine
to see our God
reveal his truth
that all men
may bow
the knee
praying.
Where will I be
without you to save me
created as a human being.
Your judgement that truly reigns.

Inspired to review in a poem
embe.

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Review of OLD SOLDIERS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a mind of a warrior old
his memories
for many a man to see
him in service
to the flag upon the pole

fluttering.
The troops to salute
standing proud
in service to honor
the fallen brave.

Inspiring me
to review in a poem.
"Old Soldiers"

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by embe
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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O to be a fool
forsaking your love
in a world of power games;

booze, blondes and contracts
to play guitar in a band all night.
Beth waiting in a diner with a hamburger;

dreaming of yesterday -
Your promise, I will love you forever;
playing it softly to touch your lips again.

How sad this story,
for me to review in a poem.

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by embe.

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Review of A Future Bright  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
When I wake in need to read,
I dream a poem, by Hunters Moon
hiding away his name, to be Ken
seeing a bright future in a flower
all yellow, face turning to the sun
seeing me writing this review,
in a tiny poem, shining five stars
to read it again when feeling low;
the flower shining to light up my life.

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by embe.
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1197
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I once met a friendly man
travelling in Mexico
with his wife for a companion
to hold his hand
from striking two American teens
with skate boards
to show off on the cobblestones
nearly falling off
to hurt dentoneg on the head.

Inspiring me to review
in a poem, his story line.

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by embe.
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Review of Sea Runner  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To see a Sea Runner.
You need to view the words
written by - nfdarbe
living in - "Not Far from Darbe."

A writer of note
that I am reviewing
in words to say -

Tales are told in taverns
of water creatures
drinking their ales,

inspiring me to tell this
in a poem review.

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by embe.
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Review of BUTTERFLY WINGS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wake the day
to see Sherri in a rose
posing o so beautifully

to fly up high
spreading her wings
a butterfly flying away

to bear some gifts
the world in despair
yearning for peace

the wars to cease
everlasting love
sprinkled by Jesus

on a lady I know
to be a saint
her arm healing now.

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by embe
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Deep in the woods
so strange and vast;
the darkness to scare
a lonely desolate soul
seeking the unsearchable
within the screams of insects
illuminated by the rays of the sun.

Shining on Kaili,
a superstar with vision
to write a poem in verse, beautiful
near the nymph-cycadas on a carpet geen.

Her poem inspiring me to write this -
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