When a vision appears
deep within a storm
to change your life
believe in him
good news today
to share with others
and confess your sins
even when mocked
or shouted down
in the storms of life
now a cleansing storm
from sin and back to God
by faith in Jaiam's poem -
"The Storm"
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To wake a dream remembering a face
lined with flashes a patch of dreams
waking in the Miami lights
my memory of her
my mother
smiling
apologizing there
the bribe to pop the pills
walking away from my sheltered home
my left foot leading me rooted in Tianjin.
This touching poem inspiring me
to review lovely in a poem
for Dahlia Noir.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
My guess is that Alice is a guest at the school
to tell a tale of woes woven into a billowing dress
disappearing into a cloud sailing away into the air
far from the sound of the piano being played loudly
by Filomina trying to impress Oto the music teacher
that she loves him come what may in the rose garden
where embe sits to write a poem review of days at school.
Simply Positive Review.
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To love your mother more
is the joy that you see
as a child to hold her
with love that is real
from the Savior
who sent her
to bare you
her baby
now a child
turned to adult
realizing you lost her
that wonderful love for a mother.
Inspiration to review in a poem.
"Woman" - by Easycruz.
Written with deep emotion
of love lost and found in a family.
One suggestion -
She is woman -
Sent by God.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
To see within the mind
the corragate sky
a writer in time
to impress
with verse
passion bursts
fierce to consume
the desire of a review
for another writer
not so notable
in a poem
but satisfied
with the result
to review this poem.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
To gasp for air
you need to run and jump all day
losing your mind
playing barbie dolls with scissors
a room in a mess
when you have kids who play away
your only day now
this Sunday to go to church and pray
they sleep all day
peace at last to clean up the mess.
Inspiration needed from embe
to review this comedy of errors.
Simply Positive Review.
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To be a world where the sun never shines
is a wonderful dream
of nights and days seen all around me now
in the dense skies,
where forests are forbidden for the monsters
roaming around.
But in your world
it shivers with hamlets being burnt down
in the wrath of war,
bombs blasting away man on earth dying
lying in graves,
while we are living never fearing the end.
Inspiration of how to live a life in this poem review.
A fine write, by Free-ster.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
The waiting of the dawn
outside my window
I see the trees
you and I
the same two
sleeping beside you.
Our boys arms outstretchd
flying there to dream
mom and dad's
yesterdays
sadness,
soon forgotten
after the wedding
to live life anew with us
no longer to mourn their loss.
The inspiration for this poem review -
SWPoet a writer of note.
Rising Star Review.
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The cost of loss
cannot be controlled
when the will to live with a convict
is the choice of the rose about to be compost
not realizing the pain that a father must bare out of love
to care there on his knees to God in prayer, please save my rose?
Now why have I written this review for Dan Sturn the father crying
deeply the pain in his heart of hearts. "Please return home
my darling daughter, all is forgiven in heaven
as I bow my knee in prayer for you."
God's answer. "embe write this."
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For me to write upon the wall
for everyone to see,
I need a poem
from Gupta.
A doctor
with a note
the prescription
my eyes to weak to read it now.
The truth I choose to laugh it off
with comments abusive
the end prevails
in ignorance.
Why me to wail away
the abused in my mind
my head the ostrich in the sand.
A poem review inspired by Dr Gutpa
the writer of note, to help others
like me.
embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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O if only my journey
a vast continent
India
to touch and breathe
and feel my skin
tingling
the orchestra in me
city streets of sounds
calling
the train I hear whistling
why not stay here awhile
to live
with a sensual maiden
maybe to be married
with child.
A poem for Utopian
the eyes to see India.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
When the river of life
sweeps you away,
you need a cliff
to hang onto,
or a bird
with wings
to cover you,
the fear within
seeing far below
fields of spring,
a pathway to freedom
below the clouds
of self doubt.
My Savor,
his life
in me.
Inspiration
to review in a poem,
lovely by River McKenna.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O to find my way home
driving my little red truck
the destination unknown,
having been away so long
the goodbye in my memory
packing my bags that day.
Planning a new start
my heart pounding
there in a motel,
I lost my way
in a room,
the ceiling
staring down,
a mark on a map
this hollowness in me -
"Which road leads me home
in this poem review by embe?"
Simply Positive Review.
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To read my poem
don't say you have my back
a childish attack,
my feelings won't change
for what is said,
my thoughts of being ignored
a frienship lost,
to lie and cry the question why
to hurt anyone,
so deliberately there wihin me
this disease.
A poem review for a Lady
her honesty in words
to save a friendship.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
The courage to proclaim the truth
is seldom found in man
so full of sin
to brag
who needs a Savior
your Christ upon a cross
to die bleeding lying dead in a cave.
As for me and my family
reading Jaiam's poem
so full of grace
believing.
Knowing the truth
God declared it in the beginning
his words our only hope of salvation.
May God bless you in Christ,
Dear Jaiam.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For Sally to be fearful
writing a poem
to music
in the candlelight
is a delight for me
to review
her poem
lovely for a lover
for him
to know
you are the one
so silent
my fear
seeking your face
will you
love me
waiting there tomorrow?
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by embe.
To celebrate a birthday
you need Legerdemain
to scribble of love
for writing. com,
her domain
five years now
writing away late
all alone in the night;
helpful reviews for poets
with verse that rhyme
in time to say -
We love you
dearly -
"Happy Birthday"
A tiny poem review;
may you live forever.
"God to be your guide"
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe and all who love you.
To fall in love
the character not the person
you played your part so well
to fill the holes
your fear of failure within you
when everyone sees you fall
the camera's eye
lovestruck fans adore you
the way I fell in love with you
it wasn't you at all.
A poem review for the writer
Michael Stewart
a poet of note for - The Actress.
Simply Positive Review.
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