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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Old and disabled
the warrior of old
to tell his story
of the lonely
soldier
proud
to stand
and salute
the flag of liberty
flying upon the hill
the graves to mourn.

My thanks in a poem,
inspired by Oldwarrior.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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Review of Who Knows?  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To know divinity
one needs the time
to dance under the stars
and wander the wonders
of the eternal entity for solace
seen in the eyes of the astronaut
the dimming lights of a lasting friendship.

Who Knows by Grayshift,
inspiring me to review in a poem.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe
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Review of Empty Space  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To know a child
within an empty space,
you need to hear him say -

Why did my father die
when I needed him
to play with me?

Now I'm so incomplete
within the hurt I feel,
frozen in me.

A sad poem of rememberance
by a child to inspire me
to review Expressed Man.

Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Review of Limping  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Limping through life
I feel the pain in me
on the lonely road,
with painful steps
shivering in the cold.

The burden too heavy
for death to be my fate,
struggling to the cross
seeing my Savior there,
waiting to heal my soul.

Your words of faith,
the inspiration for me
to review in a poem.

A suggestion -
"back to my feet" - maybe - up to the road.
"That I now travel with a friend" - maybe - I travel with a friend, my Savior.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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Review of Family Secret  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review for Fadz.

Not an easy prompt to re- inact into a story line, capturing the essence of the family secret.
Garuda the special bird of incarnation, selecting a younger member of the family, to raise from the golden egg the life anew.

This story flowing along the lines of fantasy, a family grouped together.
Waiting for the squawks of the bird landing on the marble floor, lying lifeless. Then as if in a dream, it suddenly bursts forth into a flame, golden red crumbling into ash.

I don't understand why, but I put out my hand to see the golden egg.
It feels warm and now I know it's secret, my life long friend, shining a light on our family.

A suggestion -
"Now we're two states away"

Perhaps -
We need to tavel two states away, for daddy to park the car.....

This super story by Fadz, hopefully to be accepted for publication.

Simply Positive Review.
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1156
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To be a Daisy
you need to bow to God
and love the life he gave you.

There are friends
I have a mind to think with,
that include me in their plans.

My beautiful daughters
and a loving son to walk with,
when all around seems dreary.

To Daisy - married 34 years,
a tiny poem inspired by you -
The lady Daizy Crazy, Mrs. H

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The process of love
threaded in fantacy,
a precarious thing

of sweetest lies,
a promise of love
so softly spoken,

as yet unproven
cleverly hidden,
the garden of lust.

Inspiring me to review -
Dave, a poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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Review of Leaves of Joy  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Within the garden of love
the joy of life, flowers bright
a husband to hold her tight,

smiling upon a happy face
his delight a door to open,
the key for her to hold

the wedding dress,
but the neckless lost
helplessly hoping,

within the leaves of joy
a poem from a friend,
to pray the wedding day.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To grasp one's inner meaning
you need to read a poem
sitting beside the sea all alone
dreaming of how to write
ready to create and hit the keys
that make it so complete
sparked by a thoughtful soul
Inspiring me to review in a poem.

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by embe
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Review of free  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
If Free is from Bored
you need to read this story
told with tears filling your eyes
a vision failing to erase a memory
bursting out of a door falling into a cloud
the rain washing away the fears of yesterday.

This review to remind you -
Read this lovely story, the dawn of redemption for a soul.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of Emonster  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
To m@m.

The emonster there
forever to be
a kismet,

calling for music
hard as a wall
in pain,

to erase the curse
beating now
the pulse,

you cannot escape
hiding away
from God.

This poem review for you,
inspired by your poem, Emonster.

One suggestion -
(I would met)
Perhaps - "I would meet"

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of We are Angels  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Helo Lupus,
Nice to read your poem
In words seeing normal people
dressed in blue with silver buttons
always willing to help out others in need
seeing the Angels in us all,smiling older now.

A suggestion to edit --
(To help those not so well off)
Perhaps --
"Helping those not so well off"

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of Our Beginning  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To ride into the sunset
You need to be licensed
By the local authority
With a plate- 004 WDCI

Your journey now begins
A voice calling your name
Calming to a soul mate
Ride out to our fairy tale

The sunset is waiting
Inspiring me to write it
For a gentle giving soul
Living out her fairy tale

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
For a daizy to grow
you need a o'lantern
to shine a sunshine
on the fields of play
cats with bats to play
friendly rats with hats,

a nine -innings game
until the bell to chime
and clear the field
before fighting again
the same old game.

Inspired by a daizy
a pretty flower
from embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to sing a tune
`cuz...
it's moonlight
above
in the mountains,
a song
to sing of love,

slipping away
visiting
jupiter @ mars,
out back
in the hot tub
dreaming,

seeing
the starry night
a light,
on lips so sweet
to kiss
a shooting star.

Inspiration
to review in a poem
ShiShad,
Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To read the inner meaning
from a poem
by Cyntrolliam.

You need to understand,
his thinking
it in his mind.

The point of reference,
his choice
to explain fornever

his essence,
it's man's desire
for fulfillment.

A second chance
at the past,
to live within it.

Inspiring this review
by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of IN LOVING ARMS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Once upon a time
I met a countrymom
her loving kindness
a treasure to behold

there upon my heart
for me to pray for her
safe and secure
every day of her life

unafraid now
in the darkness
to write her story
dark in the past.

If you are lost and lonely
without a friend to help you
like me three years ago
pray to God to find a friend
a countrymom from heaven.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of A Far Off Land!  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
To see across the water
that far off land
a cross upon the hill
for Jesus to die
my sins for me forgiven
in the far off land
my soul in a mansion
now saved
where the journey ends.

Life is what you make of it
when inspired
by Jaiam, a friend of mine.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To read a poem by Lawrence
the wind dancer..
dancing to weave a story
in lyrics lovely...
the wind whispering there
or so it seems
tumbling upon the waves.
Is the music I hear
sweet in my ear.

The inspiration of this lovely poem
to suggest a small change
in this line..."dancers dance upon."

Maybe....dancers dance along
before the onyx-eyed ones.

embe, a fan of this writer.

Simply Positive Review
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Review by embe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
O to the folks at Mary's land
your hour to hold strong,
the war for treasured heaven.

A daystar for the Angel of God
in a love letter,
come down for me

the faithful child,
on a road to Zion
longing for home.

The inspiration
of Jaiam's poems
for embe to review,
sharing her Christianity.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The pain within  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes the pain within
is captured in the mind,
a cacophony of sound
slowly surrendering
in the ever-present ache
that I know to be me,

the devil laughing now
in a torturous hell,
a light that will see
the pain within,
not my doing
to wait the light.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of Let's Publish!  
Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My congratulations to you, for this wonderful idea that will benefit the members who are now listed above.

embe, to care for you in this venture.

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Seeing the writers in the sky;
their banners flying, high - five for success.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To whisper a note
in words to embrace
you need to feel her skin
in reality of the air you breath
to light the fire within your heart
in waters deep to cleanse you fantacy
misunderstanding your intention
in words you don't want to hear
however softly to be spoken
until soon they are gone
in this game
of silence.

Inspiring me to review
in words of a poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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Review of A Stolen Child  
Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beneath the black moon
your face in darkness
hides the sun
seeing not
the child
crying
away
her tears
of sorrows
now no more
the sunlit place
hiding in the night
the stolen child in fright.

River McKenna the poet
inspiring the reader
to read and review
her lovely poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
To love and miss your Granny,
you need to cry until your face is swollen
in the perpetual heartache of a final goodbye;
seeing her there in all your memories of yesterday,
where she would hold you near, from your fears of tomorrow.

My tribute to Kristilove,
who loves and misses her Granny.

Simply Positive Review.
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