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1051
Review of Most Inseparable  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If the truth could be told
of conflict being wed
with a view of love
for money,

you need to be hermit
and admit it won't work
and only end in tears
with a war of words.

Being close together
is more pleasurable
proving that true love
is not based on wealth.

If you don't believe it -
read poems by Tim Chiu
his wisdom in words
reviewed by embe.

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1052
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To Tim Chiu,

The philosophical genius
reviewing my poem of faith
in words seldom heard or read
so beautiful for me to weep away
yesterdays sorrows now healed in faith.

Thank you my dear friend
the poet of note
for me to read
and review
in return
soon.

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1053
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Nature in trees
bending on knees
posing a pure form

praying meditating
there in the clouds
the raindrops

falling down
upon the leaves
golden green

swaying gently
dancing together
in the breeze

a color of light
shining down
from heaven.

A poem review
lovely for a poet
Khaki.

Simply Positive Review.
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1054
Review of GOD'S GARDEN  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When one feels sad and low
to her garden we must go
to see the flowers
all in rows
from Countrymom
the gardener on her knees
happily planting with fertilizer
in the old field
with cold and rain
her hard work not in vain
God's creation for our dear lady.

Simply Positive Review
for this most inspiring poem -
He's a mover and a shaker!
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1055
Review of After Dawn  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
SeanFear to believe in a name
your parents must have been poets
seeing the dawn of your birth under the stars
to write alone in the crowds is all I see in your name
beautiful on the horizen the face that of Angels smiling
in a poem review so lovely to read and write by embe.

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1056
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be or not to be
a class king
signature
for February
March and May,

two thousand
and ten counting
down to eleven
in January
next year maybe
the King will say -

A paper doll gang
the leader a teacher
Prof Moriarty
with a degree
to review
a fool like me
embe, in appreciation.

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1057
Review of Spoken With Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spoken with love
the heart to say
Valentine's day,

O my dear me
where will I hide
from the mall,

crowds abound
in the aisles
spending wildly,

next weeks pay
on a crazy gift
for Valetine day.

No need for me
Kitchenaid mixer
from my hubby,

but a poem review
from him my love
and kisses sweet..

Simply Positive Review
for lovely Who Me -
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1058
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My yellow rose with a heart of gold
seeing a tiny daisy
hiding away
wishing evermore -
Won't you share your color with me
before I wake up
seeing
this is only me -
Dreaming my heart to love you now
in a tiny poem
a review of the flowers in the fields.

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1059
1059
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

To a dear soul I met today
Patricia A. Colucci
the writer of note in words
remembering
in the depths of her heart
to ask a question?

Why am I so alone now
laced in pain
trying to see you again.
My dear father
holding your straw hat
hugging me.

May this tiny poem review
comfort you -
Your kindness in words.

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by embe.
1060
1060
Review of Only words  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Only words to cast upon the wind
written with thoughts
of yesterday,
my existence
shared with another
to fill my heart with happiness,
your presence
hidden in my mind
a thought of your touch that day,
the gift of knowing
your loving heart
being the ever part of you and me.

A poem review for Luvleepoet
inspired by her tender love poem.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
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1061
Review of A Father's Love!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
To walk in the forest green
seeing a beautiful flower
Gods Jaiam in a dream,

her fathers love to forgive
with everlasting grace
her sins washed away.

The new dawn rising
her smile so lovely
to bow and pray a prayer.

Inspiration for a poem review
Jaiam the poet from God
sent to pray for sinners.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.

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1062
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sixteen steps to heaven
in faith, hope and charity
the greatest of these three,

unto others we must do
praying on our knees
our father in heaven,

come now to save us
his love everlasting
Christ upon the cross.

Inspiration for a poem review
by embe for a poet of note -
Iamfrank the writer.

Simply Positive Review.
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1063
Review of A Damned Old Man  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
If Harry were damned
he would be an old man
to write a funny line in time
for his mule to dance around
so cool a mule now mellow
in a field of brown hay
where are my shoes
buckled to repair
by Old Corny
the blacksmith
laughing at Mac
let's roll one in the barn
with rock music to get along
and sing a song
sweet and low
sweating
too fat
in a poem review
embe laughing
lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
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1064
Review of Melody of Madness  
Review by embe
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When the wind blows a winter's memory
the symphony there in my heart
my true love buried away
deep to lie in peace
I feel her presence
in this moment
my thoughts of her
the music in my mind
dancing with love in her eyes
the momentry light as darkness calls me.

WDC Frontliners Group
reviewed by embe
a fine poem
by Ken.


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1065
Review of Dark Vows  
Review by embe
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In thirty five words
with a trickle of blood
the dark moom arrives
mezmerising a thought
a tantalizing tune in rhyme
for a lover's embrace to kiss
a caress with lips to sing a song.

35 words I have used
no more may I write
another word
to review -
Ken the poet of note.

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by embe.
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1066
Review of Canyons of Light  
Review by embe
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
For the promise of light
we need the darkness
hiding in the street
awaiting the dawn
a lambent glow
the scale
on the window
morning raidience
awakening the sun
to shine a light bright
on Ken the writer of note
inspiring me to live life
in thanks to be alive.
to write a poem
review.

WDC Frontliners group
by embe.


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1067
Review of MOONLIT KISSES  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When a broken heart from the past
appears in a dream of loneliness
to cry away yesterdays fear
why the reason there
no moonlit kisses
to love and hold
forever
two souls
weeping sorrows
seperated divorced
doesn't matter anymore
trying not to lie to myself again
you will always be the love I need.

Inspiration by our Countrymom
for me to review her poem so lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
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1068
Review of Tears like rain  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For Jayden
tears like rain
falling down low
unseen from everyone
battering against the window
a place to hide shielded from fear
a different person in a dream
from the outside world
a memory of you
tears like rain
Inspiration to review
lovely the poem
by Jayden.

Simply Positve Review.
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1069
1069
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To Dr M C Guptu,

Thank you for defining the difficult subject of Islam in the world of terrorism.
We can view much of this on TV, but never really understand the deapths of confusion, given by misleading statements by opposition parties following their own agendas.

The statement by the Prime Minister of Australia, is clear cut and strikes at the heart of the problem.
Accept us for who we are, or Leave.

Sad that a country life America, so affected by terrorism, cannot apply the same rule.

Innocent law abiding hard working folk, having to bare the brunt of this.
Their dear children sent to fight a war they cannot win, only to die for nothing.

embe, confused reading about this madness.

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1070
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To hear the music in your mind
a sense of passion
play me now
in time
the Obeo
low and dying
a violin haunting me
dancing teasing the keys
stepping on the ivory
white and black
then pausing
a flute fluttering
sullen match with music
in my mind to review in a poem
this special poem -
by m a White.

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1071
Review of Live Agelessly  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To live agelessly
read a poem by Dollzel
with words of wisdom

in a world of shame
for many a soul
who give up on life

instead of defying age
so clearly defined
in this lovely poem.

Don't worry, be happy
pray every day
may God bless you

to find new friends
learn how to love
pursueing happiness.

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by embe.

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1072
Review of Turtle Wisdom  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Where upon a pillow I lay
praying for a miracle
I saw a walkinturtle
sent from God
so kind a soul
with words of widom
written lovely in a letter
a message of love
to pray for others
lost in their sins
dying unsaved today
Inspiring me
to review in a poem
P. M. Walkinturtle.

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1073
Review of Unholy Sand  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sunny not pleasant here
another Gaza day
for a family
blown away
dying in a hole
why for being in the way
WhereI like to draw
the catastrophy
their terror in a pane attack
I cannot forget
building castles in the sand
by Bill Morrison
a poet of note
reviewed in this poem
by embe.

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1074
Review of The Box  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
From the ashes of yesterday
a light to shine a new day
on a daughter with a pen
to write a poem of love
so lovely for a mother
far away to cry
why only now
the teenager
to love and hold you
dying inside every day
remembering you as my baby.

Inspiration to review in a poem
by embe.

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Review of Winternal Beauty  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To see winternal beauty
you need irisheyes
siobhan
on the bridge
so beautiful now
the iced lake frozen there
on the land
a better view
with a naked eye
warm arms around me
I truly knew
what love was
and it was beautiful
my thanks to you
for writing it
so lovely.

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