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1001
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
No need the fear, Thomas
to write of poetry
so beautiful
in a field.

But for me, I sometimes see
the field all broken and torn
in a world falling apart,

as you describe in sympathy
the flowers in decay
buried to die.

Your message of hope
for all to read -
"Hiding Beauty In Decay"

Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
1002
1002
Review of Magic, Is It Not?  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To look listen and feel
the smell of rain
on my face.

Magic, is it not
by Clarissa
the poet,

I remember
yesterday
long ago.

My heart
in that cage -
Broken pictures off the wall,

healed in time
this review lovely
in the weather of time.

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1003
1003
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
While walking along a country road
so sad a boy, now a man
with memories,
hearing a voice so sweet a sound -

"Don't stop believing in me
your Countrymom
with a pen in my hand,
walking beside you to guide you
with this pen to write,
one line at a time
seeing the beauty of it there -

Poetry on a page
for you to smile again,
no more the pain
from yesterday's tears."

Today I can enter a contest
without fear of failure,
My Countrymom to guide me.
embe.

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1004
1004
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
So wise the counsel from a man
unwanted and single
who will wish for anything to cure
other people's pride
the lack of forgiveness in the mind
searching all alone
being the black sheep in the family
lost and confused
where to now and cry myself to sleep
a dream come true
rising high in a memory to live alone
in a review by embe
understanding the pain of confusion.

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1005
1005
Review of Just a Fairytale  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just because you can
in a song of sorrow
to sing your song
a sad lament,

the one who hurt you
a coward being a man
a bastard to lie
seeing you crying,

there in a fairytale
that should've been you
singing a new song
free from yesterday,

in a poem review
lovely to read
your words
by embe.

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1006
1006
Review of A Place With You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a river to rise in Jericho
a place for you
so true to be in love with her
in a sweet poem
flowing along for your desire
to kiss her
this new dream in your arms
with flowers
rose petals and raindrops
from the sky
floating slowly waving goodbye
in a dream
a beautiful place below the stars
in a poem review
by embe.

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1007
1007
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To read of holocaust
by Noa
is a sad day in my life
for her
brave to write about it
now in mind,
remembering the stories
in the press
so hard to believe today
by many,
who say it is fabricated
as a lie
not for us to believe it
the truth.
To these fools I swear
you bastards,
you were never there
dying starving
alone with the children
the father's dead,
for trying to save them
in a poem review
honoring them by embe..

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1008
1008
Review of Homesick  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh to home my mind returned
to see my family once again
memories of a heart
will race away
the time
sun setting
low below the clouds
a firery red horizon in the morn
my tears flow freely there to cry.

A poem review from embe
lovely for Intuey the poet
to write the scenery
of home.

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1009
1009
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
For Thomas to be astounded
at a performace of his poem
is a mystery for me
to conclude -

That he is forgetful
to remember that he is a poet
of note for many
a writer like me -

With a poem review lovely
for him to read today
or maybe later
in his study.

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by embe.
1010
1010
Review of Tapestry of Light  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Within a tapestry I see
his majesty renewed
a rainbow in the sky,
weaving away time
my love there
for my Savior,
blessed in wisdom
with a ton of care for me
in a poem review,
inspired by Callie Seren
the poet of note.
Tapestry Of Light
a delight to read out loud
his voice so tender
for you and me.

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by embe.
1011
1011
Review of Stealing Psalm 40  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To be saved is an act of grace
for a soul from a pit
now onto a rock
with eyes so wise
seeing it now to write a review -

Elijah Jones a poet of note
to remind us in words
his life story told
so eloquent
his words.

My sincere thanks
embe, in appreciation.

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1012
1012
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To be reminded
of who we are
supposed to be
in a land of freedom,

is the question
posed to those of us
who immigrated
to a land far away.

Who and why
will have to answer
have we lost our way
to speak a language,

waving hands
in confusion there -
Who will help me
understand myself?

Maybe embe
in a poem review
with a view in my mind
living far away in Africa.

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1013
1013
Review of Be Not Afraid  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
How beautiful his garden green
a scene as seen from a window
down to the earth below a cloud.

The Rose Donnin with faith today
be not afraid in a poem so lovely,
a snapshot of death never to fear
with faith each approaching day –

Go boldly forward to your goal,
fear not the possibility of death
in a poem review by embe -
My appreciation for your review.

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1014
Review of HER PATH  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)



With yellow roses and a wedding ring
she cried as he faded away
all around her was gone
lonely on a bench
in a satin dress
crying alone
near the ocean
craching so loudly
the sound a memory now
close enough to touch a heart
so handsome his eyes looking down.

A poem review for a Yello Rose
lovely in the sunlight.
by embe.

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1015
1015
Review of Canopy of Weeds  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To show emotion in a fit of rage
is the courage to tell it straight
like an arrow in a heart
to bleed the poison
from a soul.
The one you hate
who stole your light
for being an individual
hoping for a single ray of hope
trying to find the purpose of life.

A poem review
for Umbramaster
a poet of note.

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by embe.
1016
1016
Review of Her Tears  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If only in that moment
to listen if one cares
for the fear of failure,

crying out in the dark
by one who speaks
the fate of her mistake,

with tears falling down
the need to cry out loud
why do you never listen,

to my voice unheard
a haunting memory
in my grave a farewell?

Here in a poem of hope
reviewed in kindness
by embe.

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1017
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When you are tired and weary
with no one to love you
remembering
yesterdays
sadness.

Follow your heart
and read a poem
by our Countrymom
the sage with words of comfort,

in her mountain of memories
to brighten your world
and smile again
with a heart
on fire to live life all over again.

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1018
1018
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The unfinished symphony
in her living memory
a voice of another,

she would never sing
what she had heard
in the dream of being,

there in the summer
pierced by the rays
warm upon the earth,

casting a shadow
her new destination
a purpose for reason,

in a poem review
lovely to review
by embe.

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1019
1019
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To see a valley behind a wall
your hiding place for a heart
a soul on a journey of sadness
in a world of contrary existence.

Read a lovely poem by allison
where everything has a pupose
as you dream to sail on the sea
in perfect harmony now set free,

running in the wind of freedom
gathering the knowledge of life
forever knowing every season
set free by the will of nature.

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1020
1020
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a bird to be a mystery
you need to follow him
into a cave
to a wall
a puzzle
appearing
the entrance closed
this is crazy
no puzzle
here
for me to see on the wall
changing now
into a bird
now a man
confused to dream
where am I
a puzzle
in time
to be solved I'm home
in a poem
reviewed
lovely to confuse
by embe.

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1021
1021
Review of (Bud)ding Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To plant a rose
that blossomed
yellow smiling,

a tip of red
glowing
shining,

the sunset
a Caribbean
laughter.

You need
Nikki
with a smile,

by the balmy sea
floating with a friend
sipping blue reef tea,

the friendship
now turned
to love.

A tiny poem
reviewed
lovely.

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by embe.
1022
1022
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
For a Mother to find peace
from dementia
she needs a son -
Chuck to pray a prayer
unlocking her memory,
a Mother so happy
talented and bright,
her eyes a glow
seeing her son
swinging up high
playing a game ,
look Mom
the sky is so blue
just like your eyes
smiling for me -
Drifting from reality
to the abstract
still remembering you,
In a poem review
lovely by embe.

One tiny error
"escapefrom"
space needed -
escape from.
1023
1023
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be below the snow
the light of the sun
falling cold
within a sestina
the format
by a poet supreme
Jace the sybaritescribe
lovely the life
of writing a poem
the magic in the snow
new flakes
ablase in the falling light
reviewed by embe.

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1024
Review of Divinity's Prayer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a raven Angel to write so well
you need a poem from her
lovely as the dawning
of youth in a child -
nearer to be
in a prayer
reawakening now -
in a dream her night in silence
things relevant and most worthwhile
in a poem review by embe,
with thanks to read -
Divinity's Prayer.

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1025
Review of Love is Forever  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh to wish upon a star
God on high
smiling
on a rose
yellow for me to bow
my knee
in praise
love is forever from me
for a review
the warning
ships beware the sea
the sailor
so lazy
where are we in a storm
to die
unsaved
without a prayer to pray
in a poem
a reminder
trust in God to save you.

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by embe.
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