Winter walking in the night
stumbling in the darkness
too dim the light in my sight,
surrounded the boggy march
footsteps following closer now
where to with a BB -gun useless,
the shadow one armed following
ripping open the broken kitchen door.
Embe afraid to read any further to review
but maybe if I find the key to lock the door,
meeting the writer -Hatsuda a friendly Ghost.
Simply Positive Review.
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A poem for a Mother beautiful
God's love for a lady precious
The pearl our dear Margaret
Rare a gift now in heaven
Singing praises
With Angels
Remembering
A healing touch to guide
Her family who love her dearly
In a memorial poem by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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Where eternity waits
eternal emptiness
it sinks back
into oblivion
around itself
like a clock on the wall
tick tock
awakening
from a dream
the hour in chimes
where to hear the time
for a poem
reviewed
by embe
lovely the writer Kalistra.
Simply Positive Review.
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My review in a poem, for Cynical Coz
not afraid to write the truth -
"The One That Lost"
Practice what you preach never easy for me
punctuation weeping in a poem of sorrow,
my mind unable to grasp a lie of the mighty
all powerful without mercy for the innocent,
hiding dying in their lodges, skins - of buffalo
covering a nation enslaved, democracy denied
by the rich and famous, where are they now?
Dead their bones rotting in hell, a fire burning
brightly with evil deeds for mankind the devil,
detailing laws with commas and dots, what for?
The uneducated a sign language, leave us alone,
long time our custom from birth roaming in tribes,
riding our ponies to the hills, our children laughing
whooping ancient games of old, now starving thin.
The fields filled with memories, dancing a trance
a mind to madness consumed we are drunkards,
their booze poisoned dark to die lonely in a hole,
locked away beautiful in our minds earth our hero,
fields in words of mercy on high, seeds of hope
signals proud Red Indians of old, blood so bold
the color of living strangers disguised the traitors.
Our souls sold for two dollars to die, tell us why
eagle in the sky seeing a new horizon on earth,
trinkets and beads sold to tourists on the reserve.
Our custom we preserve hiding our dignity here
in this land, the world calls it – “Freedom Now.”
Where are we in the land of paradise road,
hiding away where you shamed our heritage?
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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The treehouse in a picture
the scene from long ago
knarled and twisted old
limbs of oak grey
the sky
lonely words
we never spoke
learning the ways of life
tender in words
our love
for each other
there in a garden green
I clear the leaves
a memory
your headstone
alone I leave the woods
in a poem
reviewed lovely
by embe for Ravenwand.
Rising Star Review.
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Hello Jaya,
So comforting you words
in a thank you prayer
in natures garden
beautifully described
all things wonderful
beautiful here in gratitude
when reading loud
the scenes appearing alive
his loving kindness
in a poem review
for you from embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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In the circle of life
there are many beliefs
as to who is who on earth.
Some in a stone old from birth
created from sand to be a bolder,
tumbling down from the mountain
into a desert dry for the Aboriginal people,
in a poem review lovely for Joseph Lloyd Murchison.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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When late one night
I read a poem
disillusion
by Shane
staring at my soul
a glance
blue eyes
I see now
in a poem review
a night light
that shines
a soul alone
far out into space
no clouds
a shadow
hypnotized
for embe to review
lovely
the write
to read out loud.
Simply Positive Review
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To hide in the kitchen
of a Countrymom
beware the stew
rising so slowly
on the stove
a special brew
with a pinch of salt
stolen from the witch
grinning there
her evil jaw
twisted
in delight
on a broom
flying away in the night
searching for embe
to review
in a poem
lovely the write
from my dear Julie.
Simply Positive Review.
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Joy in the sky clouded
a vision of a cross
rising high
the light from God
his mercy
if you bow the knee
seeing him in a prayer
for Yellow
so brave in words
to tell the world
Yes, he loves me here
in a poem review
by embe the Christian
Simply Positive Review.
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Wombs of war
the victims unborn
what for they kneel and pray
with a weeping heart out of control
innocent casualties untold forever more
the broken heart stories of countless tombs
just a short term win showing future the door
in a poem review for the poet of note - Kmoosa.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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The cacophonous sound
Of children screaming incoherently
As they stumble and tumble into themselves
Like circus clowns
Flying through the air
Reminds me of where I am.
Born in a poem
On the lips of a song
The desperate urge to hold
A child of my own.
This recurring dream
Festers on in my brain
With excruciating pain
As I see the plight of child abuse
In a world gone mad.
What can I do?
Turn and walk the other way
Like so many others do
Or stay and adopt a child today.
What will you say?
‘Try and find the parents’
I have my doubts
They are lost and sad in a world gone mad:
Now we turn to God to pray
That he will change the world today
Where children can laugh and play
And not be hurt in any way;
Come? I invite you
Be part of the solution.
By the power of the pen
Let’s unite and write
And expose this cancer
That grows all over the world
Destroying the legacy of our children
For future generations to come.
Dare we ignore this call?
At our peril, I would say;
Donate your dollars today
Or help out at the Orphanage.
Embe in Sympathy with Amanda Tatum
In a poem review for her poem of abuse
written wisely for others who are abused -
"STOP CHILD ABUSE"
Simply Positive Review
by embe.
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In a scene far away
I see you my darling
my heart beating faster,
a tender touch on my cheek
just for a while there in a dream.
Can I bring you back tonight,
my skin tingling in love
life a magical dream,
your sweet heart in a poem
reviewed lovely by embe.
Simply Positive Review
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For criticism you need to seek elsewhere
never here in a poem supreme
by a poet of note
in a lovely vision
a dream so true in contemplation
the pleasure of thought by embe to review
so perfect a poem
being pleasured thoughts here
where I sit and dream could it have been me.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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