To streak through space
seeing the comet
in a sea of sun
for us,
no more
will we exist
in time for the dark avenger
his nebulous hand
to frighten man
to die -
Who now extends his hand
to God on high
with his nebulous hand
for us to live
forever,
crushed the demon hand
to whither away
dying in the sun.
A poem review
lovely for Squeewockle.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
In the middle of life
who am I
helping out in my mind
by making it
warmer brighter, happier
with endings
that count the most
you're glad
my world has changed
giving all
infinite feelings of love
to everyone
it's good for me to say
in a poem
reviewed by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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Just because I want to pray for you
the Angel in my heart
Sherri the lovely maiden in a dream
I bow down to kneel
my prayer rising high up to heaven
seeing a lovely baby
all pink and rosy wrapped to fly down
born again a mother
my Sherri married with a beautiful family
always kind to others
just because Sherri wants to in her heart
so filled with love
overflowing into a rainbow of happiness
in this poem review
to honor our poet , Sherri the writer supreme.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
As time stood still
the earth a ravaged place
men of war torn buried in space
all but one searching in the ruins
the scavenger as the young soldier
seeing a beautiful young woman
with her rebel badge exposed
his dream blown away
why not die with her
no threat anymore
in a grave to lie
the ditch for two in a memory there
this poem review
for Ken the poet
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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Where upon a pillow I lay
a raindrop on my windowpane,
I hear thunder rolling not far away
with a dismal cloud in my mind,
a bird call to wake me now
hidden words in a poem,
with nothing to write
my pen empty,
the paper on the shelf.
Where o where is Tracey,
the writer of note to help me now
in a poem review by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To be a flower growing wild
you need space to live
in a dream
set free
nothing binding
to tame the bird in flight
teaching her the ways of life
soaring high above you
in the deep blue
of the sky
it isn't meant to be
the dream she restlessly sees
in a poem review
lovely for Lily.
Simply Positive Review.
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In the mists of time gone by
there is a voice of love
for a yellow rose
promised
forever
in faith
the words
by one passed on
just a heartbeat away
my love a strong foundation
leaning on my God
to say I love you
waiting here
in heaven
for you.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
Eternal love in a whisper
a golden moment
of truth
spellbound eyes
aflutter
a heart to touch
in a kiss
six sense awake
speechless
a sensation there
dulled
clinging too deeply
in words
the woman awake
a fake
did make me recoil
in a review
for the poet of note
Dr M C Gupta.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
By the light of moon
the rider arrived
a cowboke
in a bar
his lament
having a drink
crying to D.K.Moon.
My pard now
lying dead
cold the earth
his bones to bury
a memory
to ride
no more,
in a poem review
lovely the write -
Cowpoke's Lament.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To hear the echo there
in the stillness of the night
is a feeling that you can bare
with richness in your heart
to open your eyes in joy
remembering the life
that once was lost
now still present
holding back
the darkness
to live again
forever echoing
resonating new life
in a poem review here
lovely for Jackilyn Rodgers.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To sense freedom
in it's truest form
you need a pen
to reason
a line
in time
for poetry
to shine forth
a path to walk
in body and mind
awakening
spiritual
quest
in life's
promise
a poem review
for this fine write
by blocks_in_writing.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
Sitting by the plumeria tree
so rough and knarled
near a garden wall
by a spiders web
spinning there
in the breeze
the fragrance
of the flowers
when you wake
in your memory
under cloudy sky
in a poem review
lovely by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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To see in time
and write a line
on paper skin
crumpled again
Lee_vhoi_ol
Caerberu
fading now
a memory
my name
I hate
in tears
the last line
bearing love
in and out of words
a bottle spinning
like the sunset
crumpled there
paper torn
a poem
review
by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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For Tim Chiu
to chew on a octopus
smelling his meal
is a clue for Carpenter's offer
to seal the fate of Smalley
by hiring a Navy Seal
named Small
with a speedy vessel
clutching a wave
to net Smalley the Octopus
in time to dine at nine
now a hero for the crowd
he couldn't avoid
writing a poem review.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To tie a red ribbon in a bow
you need to read a poem
all work and no rest
in the cotton fields
without a dress
only a rag
from a loom
torn on the floor
trying to cover your skin
as you ponder why must I live
without money for shoes
working my life away
without sleep
under a tin roof
raindrops dripping
on the ribbon without a bow.
Simply Positive Review.
Inspired by Kathie Stehr
the truth to be known
from long ago.
A tiny seed the bud in bloom
shining in the sunshine
a red rose in June
in the dark soil
to grow
tall with a stem
and leaves of green
for Alarissa the poet here
so lovely her words to review
by embe in a poem
wishing you all the best
as a poet of note in the future.
Simply Positive Review.
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I searched a million miles
for a mountain of pebbles
in January the year 2008
Katherine the poet
I still remember
in a review
for me
a newbie
lost and lonely
she spurred me on
with kind words of comfort
and now I hope to find her here
If only she would still remember me.
Simply Positive Review
with this request
by embe.
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Kota - Clay, where are you
come to stay in my mind
a thought of yesterday
a mouth that lies
about us
now we are faced
always the question
will I be just some person
with feelings for you
like a statue
in concrete
so complete
perfect to love you
in this my love poem
thank you for undersanding.
Simply Positive Review
for Clay Blevins -
His fine write to read
by embe.
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O to be at peace in a poem
by Renee Lange
from long ago
in my mind
so kind
to read -
The right time
with another chance
to ask for a new poem by her
without reason or rhyme
if it becomes our time
in a poem review
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To write of hard times
is difficult
when love runs away
to hide
who will hear me
to smile
a new day dawning
inside me
the words of love
returning
I wish to be strong
again
writing a new line
hearing
a poem review
by embe.
Simply Positive Review -
Lovely the poem by Kelsey.
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