I see in a moment of pleasure
silent seduction in my mind,
sensuous thoughts of him
caught in mid-blush now,
the splendid smile
silver crown,
this man
I love
so dearly,
married now
being my husband,
in a lovely review by embe
a friend for life on writing. com
Rising Star Review,
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Thank you, Dear Sherri,
your poem reflecting my thoughts -
I pray that the nightmare ends with prayers
for all who read your sensitive portrayal of bipolar.
Herewith my memories exposed,
my daughter in a haze
begging me -
"Dad don't visit today
voices ringing confusing
my desperate plea,
seeing you weeping
in fear to scold me,
all screwed up
dark to dream,
lying awake
ashamed,
the arguing
when and how
will it go away,
my bipolar
the curse you see."
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Forgotten by Yellow Rose
she sits alone in her room
sweeping away the memories
finding little to smile about today
would she change it if she could
praying for her God to take her home
never again will she be alone in heaven
reading a tiny poem review by embe
lovely in a garden green the scene
above her head is a new cross
she peeps to see her Savior
God bless her soul forever.
Simply Positive Review.
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Anonymous to say the least
rhymer hidden from me without a bio block
but famous to bow the knee praising God almighty
even when prayers are unheard with cotton in our ears
poor souls only offering tears as he looks at us with a frown
a poem review from embe for a poet of note rhymer rhyming in my mind.
Simply Positive Review.
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Life as it is in this lovely poem
determines where we stand
reading our newbie MsKitty
the life we have is fragile
so delicate to touch
saying goodbye
fading away
but no never here
for a new poet of note
reviewed by embe a friend
welcoming you to writing.com.
In a moment of time
to sleep an image,
the thoughts of me
by stricuckoo,
in a poem lovely
for embe to review,
my night ending
my day begun.
Awaiting again
sleep's image,
now in my mind
a super write,
by a professional.
Simply Positive Review.
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To fight for freedom
so far away from home
the fields of memories roam,
let us not forget our loved ones
honored in a poem, reviewed by embe
for Marti Stevens our poet of note I met today,
for all who fought for freedom to free our souls,
praying a prayer to God his vision of heaven our home.
Simply Positive Review.
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All in the mind
rising from obscurity,
a soul decays crumbling
falling apart in front of my eyes,
but what if this is a scene of a dream
there in a thought of my own inner conflict,
reading a fine poem to review for eccentricities
welcome my friend, may you write many more poems.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment of confusion
Cheddar the cat by her side,
Gwen trying to sleep all day
dreaming Christmas dinner,
depressed in a letter to her
mentioned by her mother,
beholden to her family
this sad tale of woe,
reviewed by embe
in sympathy
for Paige,
a fine writer
her Christmas Letter.
Simply Positive Review.
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Ten syllables with the rhyme
in time for the first line,
then six syllables
in the second
line in time,
for the A rhyme
by the poet of note, nfdarbe
is a wonderous scene,
for many a poor poet
like me, embe
in appreciation
to review Englyn Unodl Union.
Simply Positive Review.
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The sun shines a light in the sky
below the shadow of the moon,
hiding away heavy on me
my hitchhiking days,
a distant memory
I cannot see,
the passing cars
promised to save me.
This review lovely for Andrew
a poet of note in words of wisdom,
for embe to study punctuation
not my speciality in poetry;
but willing to learn
from a memory,
of this friend.
Simply Positive Review.
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To read this fabulous poem;
in deed a masterpiece by Oasis.
I need to review it as a poem by embe.
Still loving this music in my mind
Hiding from souls sorrow in fear
The shame of thought in lyrics
Invisible tragedy was within
My life has passed me by.
Though inner life was richer
Nourished in silence profound
I sought the glamor of the theater
The nature of the work my impressions
Hence my art was bold and violent a sign,
Being proud and timid detached
Resenting every intrusion
Never in public view
Now fading away
Into music of old,
Playing orchestration
My baton directing melodies
Joyous the opera with tenors singing
Measured alive in spirit of songs vibrating
Relative to time the music there never dying –
Could this lover’s confusion within me
Be more deliciously enhanced
By moonlight from above
The music in my mind
Envy and jealousy,
Since the beginning
It was never Beethoven
Scribbling furiously on the floor
The score was always on my mind
For me to publish it was my symphony.
Simply Positive Review.
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YellowRose in a moment of truth
the need to write to the troops
may you hear our prayers
carried on the wind.
Loved and respected here
families waiting at the airport,
you know God will bring you home
in this poem review by embe
for our poet of note.
The caring soul wise in words,
wondrous good news to celebrate.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of truth,
brown eyes skywards
with a voice to cry why,
these footprints for me
cherishing my ancestors,
with blood sweat and tears
clearing a path for the future,
love and peace to be their shield
in a poem review for a poet of note.
Mangadude the image of hope for lost souls.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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For LdyPhoenix to cry her dream
a life caged lonely in the castle
the walls built from stone
another destiny
freedom flying high above
clutching white satin and lace
casting off cursed glass slippers
in a poem review by embe
the need to say it loud
happy birthday
dawning a new beginning
may your fairytale life come true.
Simply Positive Review.
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To dream a mother's garden
a tale told lovely by Cassandra
with flowers in fields golden yellow
bright heads above the soil in sunshine
a testament to life, death, and rebirth
for embe to review before winter
our new rising star appearing
with many more fine poems.
Simply Positive Reviews.
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O the need for more ambiguity
unbound by rules of punctuation
eliciting squints of consternation
that bring antonymical clearness
to embe in dream with a review
in my mind words wooly vague
becoming a free range poet
the readers unsure of me
confirmed by Missjudy.
Simply Positive Review
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Oh! to review so lovely a poem
by Ignotum a three part piece,
triad in my mind
ignorance
enema,
a new life
procurement
wiped clean,
understanding,
knowledge abounding now,
please mother create a new me
to write of life anew,
in happiness
I believe.
Simply Positive Review.
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