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Review of In My Attic  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In my attic with the broom
sweeping away memories,
trying to reason with it today
there's a canyon in my mind,
and when I arrive I remember
to review lovely the poem by 2be,
our poet of note from writing.com
ready for some awesome music,
this must be the child laughing
one of the Angels I've heard of,
take me to my destiny today
I am ready to walk that way.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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827
Review of At Midnight  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
When midnight calls
upon the moonligt shore,
I hear the bay silently sighing
come dance with me at midnight,
tears glisten down my cheek
with a lovely review here,
the ambivilent poet
sure to rise soon
the poet of note,
writing at midnight
with the dancing waves,
come sing with us at midnight
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Division  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment moving through me
I find you here in a tiny poem
2bemar a poet of note
lovely working it out
with stars above
in a review
by embe
been there
so sadly broken
with words of hatred
beaten bleeding on the floor
yells flying bouncing unknown.

Simply Positive Review.
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829
Review of Shell  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
the shell I live in,
deep inside
must I hide
a living hell,
satan on attack
will i ever fight back,
a prison of sin
hoping to win
with a prayer,
embe praying for me
to win one day,
in a poem
so lovely
reviewed for Cianter.

Simply Positive Review.
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830
Review of Revelation  
Review by embe
In affiliation with Two-in-One Poetry Contest Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)

The first love a revelation
by Ken the poet of note,
with words wondrous
impressions today,
embe to review
five stars shining
brightly on this page,
the magic of true love
by General Rose of Iron
two-in-one poetry contest
sure to be a lasting legacy.
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831
Review by embe
In affiliation with Two-in-One Poetry Contest Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)

O for a breeze on a brigth sunny day
Solaris LeRouche the poet of note
her pen to sketch a random man
filled with beauty for everyone
Amore! Amore! Amore!
by embe with a pen
reviewing lovely
the rain stops
wanting more
with a smile
poetry in motion
on a Roman road
two-in-one poetry
my review by embe
the bright stars above.
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832
Review of Faces  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Faces on the floor
what for a shadow
endless in the night,

fate unknown today
fading in my sight
the image embe,

reviewing a shark
our poet of note
in words lovely,

cacading there
soul laid bare
wanting more,

poetry in motion
behind the door
the stars shining.

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833
Review of Hope of a We  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hope of a we is the slow
sliding shape below
this way round
my way

embe in a fine review
lovely for calypso
the newbie
for me

soon to be a rising star
writing day by day
in contests
a winner

monthly over many years
with reviews kind
and helpful
smiling

Simply Positive Review.
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834
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My welcome to Ladygrace
in a review lovely for a child,
a face that smiles so bright
pure divine a blessing there.

God's gift to be born healthy
praying to him so innocent,
in this world where we live
so many orphans weeping,

who will visit and adopt us
in a poem review by embe,
having adopted Simone
always smiling every day.

Simply Positive Review.
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835
Review of Silent Seduction  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

I see in a moment of pleasure
silent seduction in my mind,
sensuous thoughts of him
caught in mid-blush now,
the splendid smile
silver crown,
this man
I love
so dearly,
married now
being my husband,
in a lovely review by embe
a friend for life on writing. com

Rising Star Review,
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Review of LITTLE TO NOTHING  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Thank you, Dear Sherri,
your poem reflecting my thoughts -
I pray that the nightmare ends with prayers
for all who read your sensitive portrayal of bipolar.

Herewith my memories exposed,
my daughter in a haze
begging me -

"Dad don't visit today
voices ringing confusing
my desperate plea,
seeing you weeping
in fear to scold me,
all screwed up
dark to dream,
lying awake
ashamed,
the arguing
when and how
will it go away,
my bipolar
the curse you see."

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The flower of love by Tim Chiu
a tulip in his hands for a lady fair
such a blessing humbly affirmed
with your vision so vibrantly alive

feeling closeness in her dream
will she marry you tomorrow
if we go bowling every day
not to slip your decision

arriving in time in a limo
dressed for the wedding day
dark the suit with a grey stripes
bowling shoes brightly polished

by embe in this poem review
lovely the write for a poet of note
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of FORGOTTEN  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Forgotten by Yellow Rose
she sits alone in her room
sweeping away the memories
finding little to smile about today
would she change it if she could
praying for her God to take her home
never again will she be alone in heaven
reading a tiny poem review by embe
lovely in a garden green the scene
above her head is a new cross
she peeps to see her Savior
God bless her soul forever.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Anonymous to say the least
rhymer hidden from me without a bio block
but famous to bow the knee praising God almighty
even when prayers are unheard with cotton in our ears
poor souls only offering tears as he looks at us with a frown
a poem review from embe for a poet of note rhymer rhyming in my mind.

Simply Positive Review.
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840
Review of Life As It Is  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Life as it is in this lovely poem
determines where we stand
reading our newbie MsKitty
the life we have is fragile
so delicate to touch
saying goodbye
fading away
but no never here
for a new poet of note
reviewed by embe a friend
welcoming you to writing.com.

Simply Positive Review.
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841
Review of Sleep's Image  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment of time
to sleep an image,
the thoughts of me
by stricuckoo,
in a poem lovely
for embe to review,
my night ending
my day begun.
Awaiting again
sleep's image,
now in my mind
a super write,
by a professional.

Simply Positive Review.
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842
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To fight for freedom
so far away from home
the fields of memories roam,
let us not forget our loved ones
honored in a poem, reviewed by embe
for Marti Stevens our poet of note I met today,
for all who fought for freedom to free our souls,
praying a prayer to God his vision of heaven our home.

Simply Positive Review.
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843
Review of all in my mind  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
All in the mind
rising from obscurity,
a soul decays crumbling
falling apart in front of my eyes,
but what if this is a scene of a dream
there in a thought of my own inner conflict,
reading a fine poem to review for eccentricities
welcome my friend, may you write many more poems.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In a moment of confusion
Cheddar the cat by her side,
Gwen trying to sleep all day
dreaming Christmas dinner,
depressed in a letter to her
mentioned by her mother,
beholden to her family
this sad tale of woe,
reviewed by embe
in sympathy
for Paige,
a fine writer
her Christmas Letter.

Simply Positive Review.
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845
Review of Genie as a gift  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Genie as a gift for the birthday kid
sad to say it was supposed to be
by someone else in a thought
instead of joy it brought death
all fingers pointed at me
in my golden lamp
trying to apologize
to embe in a review
for rhmn being R. H. N
the poet to tell a sad tale
C’mon it wasn’t my fault at all -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

To be alone towards tomorrow
striding lonely across the field,
I turned towards her in the sun
of a summer’s breeze drifting,

pulling down a cloud passing
tendrils of light dancing brightly,
in a poem reviewed by embe
for a poet of note our Cburke.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Our Poor Mailbox  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

O to be a mailbox shaped like a barn,
standing perfectly strong in the snow
longing for the summer to rise again,

far from the lonely snowpough driver
disguised as a new scrap metal thief;
can you think of a sadder mailbox story.

Reviewed my embe to dream the scene,
lovely by the writer of note, our Picodoll
down by the post office waiting for mail.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Fireworks  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Emotional encounters
where fireworks fly
high in the sky,
sparkling for embe
swept off my feet,
reviewing lovely for Amay
the fine poet of note.

Sparks flying
high in the clouds,
pyrotechnic explosions
there in my mind,
a crackling trail.
Oh, look at him
the fireworks shining....

Simply Positive Review.
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for entry "Englyn Unodl Union" 
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

Ten syllables with the rhyme
in time for the first line,
then six syllables
in the second
line in time,
for the A rhyme
by the poet of note, nfdarbe
is a wonderous scene,
for many a poor poet
like me, embe
in appreciation
to review Englyn Unodl Union.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The sun shines a light in the sky
below the shadow of the moon,
hiding away heavy on me
my hitchhiking days,
a distant memory
I cannot see,
the passing cars
promised to save me.
This review lovely for Andrew
a poet of note in words of wisdom,
for embe to study punctuation
not my speciality in poetry;
but willing to learn
from a memory,
of this friend.

Simply Positive Review.
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