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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Two-in-One Poetry Contest Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
When the moment arriives,
thoughts of suicide in the mind
now unleashed wild and frantic,
who will save me at mercy's call
the light of the child of innocence?

embe with thoughts, the waste of life
in a sad review for feelings expressed
by Summer Wind, the writer of note
writing about this difficult prompt,
entering the two in one contest.

Two In One Poetry Contest Review,
by embe.
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Review of I AM  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment the deepest part of a soul
the physical desires of the flesh,
you are love and we are one
stripped bare,
there by the candle glow
a breeze blankets you in warmth,
under the sun embe with a review lovely
recognisind our writer of note,
dnadream
dreaming the scene,
the crashing of the waves haunting you.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of He Shows Me  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of thought, time is precious
she shows me, on the shore of life
so strong it glares

the vision with time, over the years
patience, wisdom, softness,
in a poet of note

Christina Daltro, on holiday in Rio
in thought, her new book
from memories

my Butchie wherever he is... he knows
I wish he would read it,
embe in this review.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of She's So Cute  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of time she's so cute
wanting mommy's arms tonight,
she won't cry but she'll let me know
she loves to hear a poem again,

the bond that no one can ever break
hearing stories of her Little Bunny,
by her mommy the best poet of note
reviewed by embe lovely to read.

Showering Acts Of Joy Review,
my thanks to Dutchessbarbie.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment of thought
my day started normally
but not moving forward,

alive with many others
wanting to get out today
reasoning in the mind,

there with my partner
smoking like the rest
reading a lovely poem,

by our Jeanne Sparks
the fine writer of note
reviewed by embe,

a message within
the plight of death
seen in the scenery.

Rising Star Review.
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the fine scenery
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Review of In My Attic  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
In my attic with the broom
sweeping away memories,
trying to reason with it today
there's a canyon in my mind,
and when I arrive I remember
to review lovely the poem by 2be,
our poet of note from writing.com
ready for some awesome music,
this must be the child laughing
one of the Angels I've heard of,
take me to my destiny today
I am ready to walk that way.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of At Midnight  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
When midnight calls
upon the moonligt shore,
I hear the bay silently sighing
come dance with me at midnight,
tears glisten down my cheek
with a lovely review here,
the ambivilent poet
sure to rise soon
the poet of note,
writing at midnight
with the dancing waves,
come sing with us at midnight
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Division  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment moving through me
I find you here in a tiny poem
2bemar a poet of note
lovely working it out
with stars above
in a review
by embe
been there
so sadly broken
with words of hatred
beaten bleeding on the floor
yells flying bouncing unknown.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Shell  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
the shell I live in,
deep inside
must I hide
a living hell,
satan on attack
will i ever fight back,
a prison of sin
hoping to win
with a prayer,
embe praying for me
to win one day,
in a poem
so lovely
reviewed for Cianter.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Revelation  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Two-in-One Poetry Contest Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

The first love a revelation
by Ken the poet of note,
with words wondrous
impressions today,
embe to review
five stars shining
brightly on this page,
the magic of true love
by General Rose of Iron
two-in-one poetry contest
sure to be a lasting legacy.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Two-in-One Poetry Contest Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)

O for a breeze on a brigth sunny day
Solaris LeRouche the poet of note
her pen to sketch a random man
filled with beauty for everyone
Amore! Amore! Amore!
by embe with a pen
reviewing lovely
the rain stops
wanting more
with a smile
poetry in motion
on a Roman road
two-in-one poetry
my review by embe
the bright stars above.
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Review of Faces  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Faces on the floor
what for a shadow
endless in the night,

fate unknown today
fading in my sight
the image embe,

reviewing a shark
our poet of note
in words lovely,

cacading there
soul laid bare
wanting more,

poetry in motion
behind the door
the stars shining.

Rising Star Review.
 
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Review of Hope of a We  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hope of a we is the slow
sliding shape below
this way round
my way

embe in a fine review
lovely for calypso
the newbie
for me

soon to be a rising star
writing day by day
in contests
a winner

monthly over many years
with reviews kind
and helpful
smiling

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My welcome to Ladygrace
in a review lovely for a child,
a face that smiles so bright
pure divine a blessing there.

God's gift to be born healthy
praying to him so innocent,
in this world where we live
so many orphans weeping,

who will visit and adopt us
in a poem review by embe,
having adopted Simone
always smiling every day.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Silent Seduction  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

I see in a moment of pleasure
silent seduction in my mind,
sensuous thoughts of him
caught in mid-blush now,
the splendid smile
silver crown,
this man
I love
so dearly,
married now
being my husband,
in a lovely review by embe
a friend for life on writing. com

Rising Star Review,
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Review of LITTLE TO NOTHING  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

Thank you, Dear Sherri,
your poem reflecting my thoughts -
I pray that the nightmare ends with prayers
for all who read your sensitive portrayal of bipolar.

Herewith my memories exposed,
my daughter in a haze
begging me -

"Dad don't visit today
voices ringing confusing
my desperate plea,
seeing you weeping
in fear to scold me,
all screwed up
dark to dream,
lying awake
ashamed,
the arguing
when and how
will it go away,
my bipolar
the curse you see."

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
The flower of love by Tim Chiu
a tulip in his hands for a lady fair
such a blessing humbly affirmed
with your vision so vibrantly alive

feeling closeness in her dream
will she marry you tomorrow
if we go bowling every day
not to slip your decision

arriving in time in a limo
dressed for the wedding day
dark the suit with a grey stripes
bowling shoes brightly polished

by embe in this poem review
lovely the write for a poet of note
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of FORGOTTEN  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

Forgotten by Yellow Rose
she sits alone in her room
sweeping away the memories
finding little to smile about today
would she change it if she could
praying for her God to take her home
never again will she be alone in heaven
reading a tiny poem review by embe
lovely in a garden green the scene
above her head is a new cross
she peeps to see her Savior
God bless her soul forever.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Anonymous to say the least
rhymer hidden from me without a bio block
but famous to bow the knee praising God almighty
even when prayers are unheard with cotton in our ears
poor souls only offering tears as he looks at us with a frown
a poem review from embe for a poet of note rhymer rhyming in my mind.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Life As It Is  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Life as it is in this lovely poem
determines where we stand
reading our newbie MsKitty
the life we have is fragile
so delicate to touch
saying goodbye
fading away
but no never here
for a new poet of note
reviewed by embe a friend
welcoming you to writing.com.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Sleep's Image  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment of time
to sleep an image,
the thoughts of me
by stricuckoo,
in a poem lovely
for embe to review,
my night ending
my day begun.
Awaiting again
sleep's image,
now in my mind
a super write,
by a professional.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
To fight for freedom
so far away from home
the fields of memories roam,
let us not forget our loved ones
honored in a poem, reviewed by embe
for Marti Stevens our poet of note I met today,
for all who fought for freedom to free our souls,
praying a prayer to God his vision of heaven our home.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of all in my mind  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
All in the mind
rising from obscurity,
a soul decays crumbling
falling apart in front of my eyes,
but what if this is a scene of a dream
there in a thought of my own inner conflict,
reading a fine poem to review for eccentricities
welcome my friend, may you write many more poems.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In a moment of confusion
Cheddar the cat by her side,
Gwen trying to sleep all day
dreaming Christmas dinner,
depressed in a letter to her
mentioned by her mother,
beholden to her family
this sad tale of woe,
reviewed by embe
in sympathy
for Paige,
a fine writer
her Christmas Letter.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

To be alone towards tomorrow
striding lonely across the field,
I turned towards her in the sun
of a summer’s breeze drifting,

pulling down a cloud passing
tendrils of light dancing brightly,
in a poem reviewed by embe
for a poet of note our Cburke.

Simply Positive Review.
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