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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Now where will I find a favorite song
to sing for my Athena Lynn,
from long ago
by embe?

With memories
being a rising star
they are mine forever,
to review when I find you
that is the imprint in my life.
I will never ever forget
that brought me joy
Rising star review.
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Review of I Feel Tall Again  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
With these ten lines for me to read today,
dear Yellow Rose honoring our veterans
returning home to take the hurt away.

Trust needed to let the past say goodbye,
together forming a bond all could see
the vets know they will carry on.

Feeling tall and strong again,
standing under a oak tree
equine therapy helps.

Reviewed by embe
lovely in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
In this moment in time
silent shadows to survive,
declared itself as my heart
the singing muse is born.

White room changing
dancing this dream,
in musical magic
the soul's creation.

By our poet of note
the dearest turtlemoon,
reviewed lovely by embe
in this fine scenery below -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The Eagle  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Reading the daily news
Yellow Rose weeping her tears
whispering a sad song for Eagles.

Waiting the dawn gliding circling, diving
over distant hills, green the trees swaying
will they survive or become extinct forever?

Our lovely poet to expose the evil in mankind
reviewed by embe the glimpse of nature,
we do our best to keep them alive.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
to spot a poem by embe
in the year 2009 August,
reviewed lovely by Heather
our fine poet of note today.

With crash scene witness
trying to cross the road
this collision occurred,
ambulance would arrive
and I saw her legs twitch.

In this the scenery here
simply positive review.
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Review of Bare  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this creative moment in time
words that would never pass my lips,
until this pen in hand, will now be freed
by embe in this review for our dear Stiles.

Watch the print then take the lead
for all the world to read this poem,
to explain me in rhyme
Quill Nominee!

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of BORN A MIRACLE  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most wonderful moment in time
he arrived on a day known as Christmas,
this most brilliant night star lit up the sky
for Mother Mary and the Angels to sing.

This most prized gift bestowed upon us
the son of God was named as Jesus,
drums rolled by the crowd did cheer
for our dear wonderful poet of note.

Sherrigibson my darling mentor
a beautiful lovely friend for life.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Dear Wastebasket  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time to reflect
I'm mad at myself for scratching
all writing ideas throwing them away
possibilities and wild crazy things here

This setback's only a temporary thought
soon you'll be off my paper duty
anger out on the trashcan
by our poet of note -

A*planning*Faith
reviewed by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Behold your beauty day by day
from birth to death and in between,
animals the birds and bees, and trees
beneath Gods clear blue sky with clouds.
People will survive through life with a smile
beauty has other forms away from you and I,
by our poet of note on this page, Nevis Moore.
Reviewed by embe in the scenery below -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The Job  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this first moment in time
for today the job was done,
walking into the cold dawn
signaling safety at home.

With my mundane tasks
severely ignored shoes,
realized in that moment
by our fine writer of note.

Reviewed lovely by embe
for on the job cdschmidt,
in this scenery below -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for your children’s future,
is it the smoke that I see
instead of the big blue sea?

Once you were so beautiful
that gave us fresh breeze,
on my shoulders forever
by our poet tvambili.

Reviewed by embe
with one suggestion
for your final last line -
I will never let you down.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Night Dancing  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
the mind confusing you,
it’s time to tell someone
finding out you are alone.

Hear that you don’t feel
an eye roll the loud sigh,
it creeps upon you slowly
close your eyes and see it.

Charlie Abney our fine poet
reviewed lovely by embe,
simply positive review
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Review of Spark  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
as I wait for your call
that can decide my fate,

why can't you define me
the need to be understood
while you keep your silence.

Or is it a call that fuels the flame
by Melinda our poet of note today
turn the ringer off, and end this game.

By embe in this review lovely on a page.
Simply Positive Review with this scenery.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a sad moment in time
black and white don't mix
when in Australia long ago.

Jumping off the Bridge
by our writer of note
Kate cabby cat.

Reviewed by embe
so sad the injustice
inevitable in those days,

with aboriginal settlements
until that wondrous day
freedom to live anew.

Gods word in truth
ordained and sanctified
with the scenery attached -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
if only I had more time
to catch a moving train.

My life down the drain
doesn't mend a heart
her voice in the echo,

you had to stop me
the train pulling away
so sad your searching.

Being too late this time
by our fine writer of note
darling Kelli McCracken.

Mystique Antiques Novella
reviewed by embe in the scene -
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Review of She Had to Endure  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a sad poem in time
Mother passed away
of a dreaded disease.

It was not easy
raising us three
as young boys,

she had to endure
working long hours
of most difficult labor.

The years have passed
for Magoo our poet of note
reviewed by embe in his words.

The factory has closed forever
gathering dust in the breeze
for this final scene -
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Review of Retrospective  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
the Carlsbad Caverns,
our destination here
on this vacation.

Julie quipped
on the plane,
to El Paso.
in a Piper Cub.

Over the desert
then before that,
calling Don Two
Our poet of note.

reviewed by embe
enjoying this flight,
simply positive review
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
never date a girl
who writes
of life.

To change her life
with no-names
now to rest
in peace.

With her imagination
the what if’s
and lucky
you.

Trying to impress me
a girl who writes
flowery words
for embe.

Our dear Roch Lazarte
a fine writer of note
with my review
lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Wishes  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time so long ago
while moist air caresses your face,
look at the beautiful scene below
the sound of a whistling bird
on a summer’s eve.

Reviewed by embe
for our fine poet of note,
dear Dottie in June 23, 2002
would you like this to come true,
keep your faith from this day to day.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
ten years is a decade,
hooves thanks anon!
our fine poet of note.

Reviewed by embe
I am so fortunate,
as a true friend
in time of need,

It's about her
with reviews,
to improve
my poems.

God bless you
and your family,
and basset hound
lovely in the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of V-Day  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
In this moment in time
to dine with soledad_moon
or maybe Elisa Popsicle Stik.

Reviewed by embe with one star
let's trash this useless writing now
it's just an excuse on absolute crap.

Why did a fool rate it two stars
only one was requested
simply positive review.

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Review of My Hope  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time with kindness
time slips away for a longing of peace,

freedom to love, to give, and to share
by our dear poet of note, LifeLessons.

For the love of our wonderful children
in your fine words nurtured to love,

reviewed by embe, my welcome
in this simply positive review.

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Review of I am an Echo  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time I am an echo
embe with a lovely review for Aundria,
our dearest poet of note on a page.
I dream of standing in the glow
as I try to walk in the light.
Will my cry be heard
or will silence fall?
No never if we pray today
with the Angels in my ear,
coming out these shadows,
for Lighthouse Poetry Contest
in this my Simply Positive Review.
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Review of I am  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am blessed to have a friend
who understands God loves us
despite our unfaithfulness at times.

Lack of caring when wisdom is found
touching heaven's angels I hear them call
seeking ways for my love that God abounds.

May your poem for lighthouse poetry contest
be the inspiration for many readers to find faith.
Simply Positive Review by embe your friend.
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Review of Utopia  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Dan,
Welcome to writing.com with a lovely short story,
a breathtaking sight--in more ways than one.

It simply tells me this is something
her eyes open in my mind,
on the soft earth.

I think your ending spoils the scene.
"A devilish scowl fades to black."

Maybe something more romantic -
"The sun shines on their wedding day."

Kind regards from embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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