Hello Dale Ricky
The title caught me. Sometimes, I wantneed to hear those words again. I gleaned the ones that resonated with me today. I laughed at a few. Anyway, thanks for this item.
Walking into a pole or off a curb happens when looking back.
Gossip will tell you what was heard. Logic tells you what to think. Wisdom knows better.
When it's your circus, control your monkeys.
Unexpected results don't equal failure.
Common ground can't exist if only differences are discussed.
A problem really isn't the problem. The reaction is the problem.
My favorite is the last line Always take a light when soul searching.
You reviewed something in my portfolio. Thank you.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
What I liked the most! "We may have gotten older, but we shall NEVER grow up!" yes yes yes.
I was going to tell you That this feels like poetry with out the shape of it .....THEN I looked up there and it is listed as prose and that gave you the right to write it anyway you want. Good Job.
You reviewed something in my portfolio. Thank you.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
What I liked the most! It's about your cat. He comes and goes as he pleases. I like that. I dare not put a cat door in my window because other stray cats and critters would use it. My dears do come inside now and then but it is by invitation only.
I am a dog person without a dog and stuck with 15 cats at the moment. I am still looking for homes for them.
Your poem made me smile. Thank you.
I noticed that some of your letter "i"'s are capitalized and some are not. And some lines (sentences) are punctuated while others are not.
I visited your port today. This item was one of a few in your port without ribbons and bows and it was at the far bottom of the page.
After reading this, well written essay, I had to snoop around and find "Arrival In Frankfurt" to make sure your life is still moving along well. You have been blessed. WHEW .... Cancer is such a wicked thing!
I liked this essay because it documents your journey of discovery, treatment and cure of Multiple Myeloma.
You reviewed something in my portfolio. Thank you.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
What I liked the most about this "A contemplative walk in the rain" poem is the pace of these six stanzas.
Style and Voice: Your words allowed me to take a virtual, leisurely walk/stroll with you in the rain.
Even though you were in a meditative state I heard you. :)
Thank you for these 24 lines that took me where "gentle mosses grow". I saw some angry growing moss is Washington state. lol
You must have reviewed something of mine. Thank You.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
Overall Impression: Excellent writing! This is an entertaining poem.
Style and Voice: The patterns of both rhyme and meter are spot on.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
Overall Impression: I understand longing for a romantic connection, thinking you found it only to be disappointed. Your poem is very relatable to me, another dreamer.
Style and Voice: You have a polished style.
Grammar and Mechanics: the words old and cold and dry....to discribe a kiss had me pondering...What? but ok it's your dream so anything goes, right?
Suggestions: Nothing...
I felt sad for the dreamer, especially after reading another poem of yours about Kisses.
Since this has already been published, I don't know what to say except congratulations and well done.
"Originally published in Pure Inspiration Magazine. As this was one of the most well received true stories published in that magazine,
it later became the lead story in the anthology, Thin Threads - Stories of Joy & Inspiration, available at online bookstores"
Hello HDC I am looking around your port.
Did I read it right that you are new here? Your port looks great.
This is the second item I've read here so far. This poem is powerful and insightful. My favorite lines are:
Right and wrong are two halves of a whole.
like two sides of one coin that tortures the soul.
I am afraid the answer flew over my head. I did not hear the question.
About the subject of the poem...how do we know right from wrong? I may be judgmental because ... I know at a deep inner gut feeling (without being told) Anyone should know, maybe, even headhunters have some ethical reasoning. (I would hope.) Or perhaps my God-fearing mother beat it into me, but perspective yes for me it is either black or white.
You must have reviewed something of mine. Thank You.
A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.
Overall Impression: I like this poem.
Style and Voice:Layla
Your name is Arabic and Hebrew too.
It says everything to know about you.
I was pleased because that Isn't everything to know about this child, your granddaughter. You told us more. This poem told me more about you than Layla.
You cherish her and admire her academics. She keeps you on your toes. And you have high hopes (for out of this world aspirations) for her.
Your blog is my favorite here. Your words are always thoughtful and wise. You are my diffinition of a deep thinker. I will be reading your responses to the prompts in the future. Thank you for your consistent writing. You are a word-warrior.
Hello Minnie
Your poem Missing piece is relevant to many people. You are a unique individual, and I am happy that you are strong enough to walk away from others when being with them forces you to change in ways unacceptable to your core principles.
You fit here at WDC.
I would capitalize both words in your title. What if I belong
to a different puzzle. This requires a question mark.
I would format this differently if it were mine. Centering it on the page and giving each thought a line of its own.
I loved this poem from the first line. oh so good.....yep....I, too, am familiar with the joyful experience you wrote about in stanza three. I am not a painter but during the lonely days of the pandemic, I followed a tv artist and painted a picture of a waterfall, with someone bathing alone near it. waste deep...I added bluebirds and squirrels, foxes and flowers into the forest scene. Your poem reflects that moment in time.
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What I liked the most! "We may have gotten older, but we shall NEVER grow up!" yes yes yes. 
