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Review of Grandpa's Maxims  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hello Dale Ricky Author IconMail Icon
The title caught me. Sometimes, I wantneed to hear those words again. I gleaned the ones that resonated with me today. I laughed at a few. Anyway, thanks for this item.

Walking into a pole or off a curb happens when looking back.
Gossip will tell you what was heard. Logic tells you what to think. Wisdom knows better.
When it's your circus, control your monkeys.
Unexpected results don't equal failure.
Common ground can't exist if only differences are discussed.
A problem really isn't the problem. The reaction is the problem.

My favorite is the last line
Always take a light when soul searching.


A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Evelyn,

My name is Evelyn too! I see that you are new here. Welcome to our world of the awakened writers. haha

The writer in me understands the compelling urge to put an idea out there for feedback and connection. I am happy you are here.

I think the stranger in your dream is yourself. You want to learn more about you. You brought yourself here to find your voice.

You woke up feeling alone. You are not. We are with you. Keep writing.... and keep dreaming.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"A month-long, community-oriented challenge
designed to help you plan your novel before writing it."

YES Please!


Ok
Ready?
Set?
GO!

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Review of So, Dance!  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a return review


*Heart* What I liked the most! "We may have gotten older, but we shall NEVER grow up!" yes yes yes.


I was going to tell you That this feels like poetry with out the shape of it .....THEN I looked up there and it is listed as prose and that gave you the right to write it anyway you want. Good Job.



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Review of Sylvester the Cat  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Mary Ann MCPhedran Author IconMail Icon


This is a return review


*Heart* What I liked the most! It's about your cat. He comes and goes as he pleases. I like that. I dare not put a cat door in my window because other stray cats and critters would use it. My dears do come inside now and then but it is by invitation only.
I am a dog person without a dog and stuck with 15 cats at the moment. I am still looking for homes for them.

Your poem made me smile. Thank you.

I noticed that some of your letter "i"'s are capitalized and some are not. And some lines (sentences) are punctuated while others are not.


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Review of Hot Pursuit.  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ~SilverMoonCranberry~ Author IconMail Icon



I was snooping around your port. I don't why...and I found this FUNNY item as a newly edited piece.

You had me laughing out loud.

I noticed these ? issues?

, she turns on her heel. decides to walk at a faster clip. Unfortunately, the turkey does the same.

turkeys had found thier way…. their

a banshee, and runs ..spacing


I enjoyed this and hope you enter it somewhere. Good Job!

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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
iKïyå§ama Author IconMail Icon

You have been blessed and honored here!





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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann Author IconMail Icon
Your review group is

I am proud to be a member.

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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jim,

I visited your port today. This item was one of a few in your port without ribbons and bows and it was at the far bottom of the page.

After reading this, well written essay, I had to snoop around and find "Arrival In FrankfurtOpen in new Window. to make sure your life is still moving along well. You have been blessed. WHEW .... Cancer is such a wicked thing!

I liked this essay because it documents your journey of discovery, treatment and cure of Multiple Myeloma.


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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Detective,
This is a return review

*Heart* What I liked the most about this "A contemplative walk in the rain" poem is the pace of these six stanzas.

*Check2* Style and Voice: Your words allowed me to take a virtual, leisurely walk/stroll with you in the rain.

Even though you were in a meditative state I heard you. :)

Thank you for these 24 lines that took me where "gentle mosses grow". I saw some angry growing moss is Washington state. lol


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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a Return Review

You must have reviewed something of mine. Thank You.

A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.


*Check2* Overall Impression: Excellent writing! This is an entertaining poem.


*Check2* Style and Voice: The patterns of both rhyme and meter are spot on.


*Check2* Grammar and Mechanics: No problems


Thank you for sharing this wonderful work of art.





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Review of Nothing More  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a Return Review

You must have reviewed something of mine.

A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.


*Check2* Overall Impression: I understand longing for a romantic connection, thinking you found it only to be disappointed. Your poem is very relatable to me, another dreamer.


*Check2* Style and Voice: You have a polished style.


*Check2* Grammar and Mechanics: the words old and cold and dry....to discribe a kiss had me pondering...What? but ok it's your dream so anything goes, right?


*Check2* Suggestions: Nothing...

I felt sad for the dreamer, especially after reading another poem of yours about Kisses.







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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
{user: hibiscus} This is a wonderful way to honor Amethyst. Thank you for creating this in and out!
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow thank you for these wonderful trinkets Princess Megan Snow Rose Author IconMail Icon

I love your creations.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello amy-Finally writing a novel. Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for the trinket. I *Heart* WDC too. The banner is great. I will visit ruwth Author IconMail Icon hopefully there will be shop...fingers crossing here.

I love having fun in the sun and raffles too!

I do have a question about rule number four.

4)There will be a daily draw, so keep alert and pay attention to the Newsfeed for the winner announcement.


Really? Why? Just send the bucks if I win okay? I do not want to have to check back to collect.

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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello foxtale Author IconMail Icon

Since this has already been published, I don't know what to say except congratulations and well done.

"Originally published in Pure Inspiration Magazine. As this was one of the most well received true stories published in that magazine,
it later became the lead story in the anthology, Thin Threads - Stories of Joy & Inspiration, available at online bookstores"


This is a feel-good read. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
hahahaha love it
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Review of Right VS Wrong  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello HDC Author IconMail Icon I am looking around your port.
Did I read it right that you are new here? Your port looks great.
This is the second item I've read here so far. This poem is powerful and insightful. My favorite lines are:
Right and wrong are two halves of a whole.
like two sides of one coin that tortures the soul.



I am afraid the answer flew over my head. I did not hear the question.

About the subject of the poem...how do we know right from wrong? I may be judgmental because ... I know at a deep inner gut feeling (without being told) Anyone should know, maybe, even headhunters have some ethical reasoning. (I would hope.) Or perhaps my God-fearing mother beat it into me, but perspective yes for me it is either black or white.


Great poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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Review of Layla  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a Return Review

You must have reviewed something of mine. Thank You.

A personal karma motivated mission I set for myself upon entering the land of WDC is to give return reviews. (Come to think of it, it isn’t an original idea.) And it doesn’t hurt that rewards and friendships sometimes follow.


*Check2* Overall Impression: I like this poem.


*Check2* Style and Voice:Layla

Your name is Arabic and Hebrew too.

It says everything to know about you.

I was pleased because that Isn't everything to know about this child, your granddaughter. You told us more. This poem told me more about you than Layla.

You cherish her and admire her academics. She keeps you on your toes. And you have high hopes (for out of this world aspirations) for her.

*Check2* Suggestions: Keep writing! Well Done



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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cozy place to visit. I love quotes too. Thank you for setting this up in such a welcoming way.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Joy, Happy WDC Anniversary!

Your blog is my favorite here. Your words are always thoughtful and wise. You are my diffinition of a deep thinker. I will be reading your responses to the prompts in the future. Thank you for your consistent writing. You are a word-warrior.
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Review of Missing piece  Open in new Window.
Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Minnie Author IconMail Icon
Your poem Missing piece is relevant to many people. You are a unique individual, and I am happy that you are strong enough to walk away from others when being with them forces you to change in ways unacceptable to your core principles.

You fit here at WDC.


I would capitalize both words in your title.
What if I belong
to a different puzzle.
This requires a question mark.

I would format this differently if it were mine. Centering it on the page and giving each thought a line of its own.

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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Huntersmoon, I found your poem on Read and Review.

Speak, Lily, Speak! is a perfect title for this poem.

Lily is a wonderful communicator. No wonder you love her so much.

Your poem has 11 stanzas of four lines each with a rhyme pattern of AC, BD and is a delightful read.

Stanza 9 made me laugh. Thank you.

I enjoyed this very much.
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Review of Teensy Tiny Tales  Open in new Window.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love your folder called Teensy Tiny Tales This short story labeled: horror, fantasy, sci-fi made me laugh out loud. Well done.
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Review by AnotherDreamer Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem from the first line. oh so good.....yep....I, too, am familiar with the joyful experience you wrote about in stanza three. I am not a painter but during the lonely days of the pandemic, I followed a tv artist and painted a picture of a waterfall, with someone bathing alone near it. waste deep...I added bluebirds and squirrels, foxes and flowers into the forest scene. Your poem reflects that moment in time.
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