This item really taught me a lot, especially the part about writing side stories with the main characters in it. Also, I like the parts about showing conflicts.But what to do if we’re stuck on a longer work? Like I could really use some help with my NANO novel. I’ll come back again to this article to learn more. Thanks for sharing.
Hi there,
I was rummaging through your port for something to read, and landed on this.
This looked like a perfect, sweet tale of love, the woman silently keeping track of her man. I love how the atmosphere unfolds with each line. However, I wasn’t expecting the story to end the way it did. Yes, the man cheated, she could have just taken the high road and broken up, but cyanide? That seemed a little too much for me!
Enjoyed every bit of it, write on!
Happy account Anniversary!
Hi Sonali,
Reviewing entry "Smoke Signals"
Flash fiction happens to be one of my favorites, as it is short, sweet and simple.
I love the way you’ve portrayed all the scenes, I can visualize the concern on the little boy’s face, wondering if his Daddy would die. And the mom’s a clever one too, she didn’t try to answer his question herself. I’m glad the story ended on a positive note. And as always, I applaud the simplicity of your words.
Keep writing!
Got this on Annete’s parenting contest forum and knew I hadn’t read it. This is such a heartwarming tale, I can completely relate to this. Why do mothers always become so concerned early on, by the way? I’m glad all went well in the end.
I like the way you begin with a nice music I like the way you’ve mentioned your writing goals, that would help other writers around here too. I hope you never decide to close your account though.
I feel so sorry for Beth here, and even for the little boy who didn’t even get a proper chance at life. However, where was the girl’s partner when the fire happened? Was she a single mom?
I really didn’t expect the ending to be the way it turned out, yet, I really enjoyed reading this story. Keep writing!
This is a different kind of story where money doesn’t exist. And if the women around the world were as attractive as the woman as the central character here, maybe life would have been a little different. Enjoyed reading this. Keep writings.
Hi Hi, big bro,
So the uninvited guest is a coyote, huh? What was it trying to do, attack the dog? The dog seems interesting, give it to me, to pet for a day or two. As always, I was spellbound by your descriptions, and this story is of a perfect length for me. I can relate to the barefoot sensation very well.
Take care.
Hello there,
I'm reviewing in connection with: "I Write in 2025" as your entry was right below mine.
I am not much of a poet, so I'll not comment on the technical aspects of the poem, the line, rhythm, I'll leave that for the poem experts.
What I can sense here though, is an elderly person looking back at his accomplishments, and what he failed to achieve. He's looking back at a reflection of himself. Nice way of portraying that picture.
Hello,
I’m doing this as part of I write, as your entry was right below mine.
I haven’t read such a story where I could visualize almost everything so clearly. I liked the way you portrayed that kidnapping scene. The character Sullivan has qualities of a good husband and detective. The word choice was appropriate, the language was easy to follow. Every word was worth reading.
Write on!
Only you can think this way, otters and fishes are like eagles in water! So what happens when the eagles actually devour those fishes? The fishes would swim deeper into the water to avoid the predators? I loved reading this, as always!
I am a teacher myself, and I was intrigued to read this. I could completely relate to the sentiments here, students actually become our children while we teach. I’m glad you didn’t give up when you felt like, that would actually be depressing for you.
Keep writing!
Your entry kinda set me thinking. My Mom’s over 70, and Dad’s over 80, and I’d never want to leave their side, come what may. Obviously, this experience might have been awkward for you, but didn’t you like it when you got to see your girl? I like the way you incorporated the past experience with the present.
Keep Writing!
Hey Bro,
Why does red always have to be the angry one? I adore all the personalities you’ve given all the colors. But I think white should have shone above all, instead of being shy. I’m glad finally all the colors could work together to paint a masterpiece.
Keep writing!
All well with you? How come I didn’t notice this before? It’s such a delightful little tale, took all my footache away! How is Anne turning out to be, now? More confident, compassionate? Or naughty?
This story just made my day. You keep writing, while I’ll keep flying into your port to read.
Hey there,
Reviewing "Bard's Hall Blog Contest June 2025 - Entry #3" I like the way you talk about being a Potterhead, I’m sure many other potter fans feel the same too. Gifting happiness the way you did, requires a good and Jolly heart, and I’m sure you have such a heart. What other things do you do for or about Harry Potter?
Hello there, big brother Noisy Wren
Finally I finished reading this, and this is really one of my favorite book items here on WDC so far. Every single entry put a smile on my face. Noisy might be small in size, but he’s a courageous little bird, and I love the fact that he finally won the contest.
Keep writing!
Hahahaha!
Happy account anniversary! So, internet addiction can turn us so sick, right? I feel sorry for nurse Legly here, she seems genuinely concerned about her patients, which is a rare quality. I wonder how the doctor treated the patients, though? What was the antidote?
Hey Sonali,
I was looking for something to read and review in your port, and thanks to "I Write in 2025" and "The Bard's Hall Contest" , I landed on this one. You seem to have many other writers in your family, is that so? You seem to have a lot of fun going to meet ups.
Keep writing, while I keep reading!
Hi there,
I was looking for something to read and the Random Review gave me this. I agree with the lines here, sometimes life throws lemons at us and we go:”Why me?”
This poem shows us hope, tells us to take life one step at a time. I like your choice of words and the format, the font choice is easy on the eyes.
Write on!
Hi there,
First of all, welcome to WDC! I Completely agree with most of your points here, but if love wasn’t a good thing, maybe life would lose all its colors, right? We can’t control others minds, but we can control ours, and we require love to give us a reason to live.
Keep writing!
Hello there,
Happy WDC anniversary.
This is a very short poem, but I really like the sentiments expressed through this. I could almost visualize the US flag while reading. Veterans should never be forgotten, that’s like forgetting your own country.
Keep writing!
Hi there,
I was looking for something to read, and landed on this. I can completely relate to this, as I'm in a similar situation as the woman here, the reason why I keep running away from marriage. I wonder who Christopher was? an angel in disguise maybe? I really enjoyed the ending here.
keep writing!
Hi there,
I love the combination of memories and the sound of the camera going click! Seemed like I could hear the sound as I read. I was wondering why the father-son bond was so bitter? The story has a nice flow, quite easy to follow. Thank you for the happy ending there.
Keep writing
Hi there,
I came humming into your port to find a good read, and landed on this one. I like this nice, flowing tale. And does age really matter when it comes down to love? I love the fact that she didn’t feel odd when he came in a wheelchair. The person matters, not the appearance.
Happy account anniversary, write on!
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