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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. Someone who realizes that he or she needs God in their life. And finds it. Gods love is probably the most taken for granted thing in the universe. Which I think is very sad. At, one time or another people that do not believe, will realize like you did that you do need God in their lives. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this inspirational poem. And keep hiding His word in your heart.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Nice originality and imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery of a warrior dying before his beloved one, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a heartwrenching poem. :( I wanted so badly to extend a hug and offer words of comfort, but what can someone really say? I'm sorry doesn't seem to cover it. For what it's worth though, I am deeply sorry for the amount of pain and suffering you've had to endure. No one should have to experience life under such a heavy shadow. You leave the reader with strong images and a firm grasp on what it is like to endure the most brutal of days. I, too, suffer from depression, so I know of what you speak. You have put a good message out there on how it feels to have depression. I think that writing difficult pieces like this one about depression and that put your feelings out there are something every writer should pursue at least on occasion. thanks for putting the message out there. You really wore your heart on your sleeve. My hope is that a lot of people get to read this poem, so they will understand what it feels like to have depression. A lot of people just don't understand what people go through when they have depression. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading your poem because you have put your heart out there and expressed what it is like to have depression. Great Message!! One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You have painted a lovely picture of someone who is in love. Just lovely. I really enjoyed reading this because of the great imagery and it was well written. Nice job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: First off, in the first line you can see (center and right) the same thing in the last line with the word (right and center) My suggestion is to go back and fix this in your poem. Also I found a few mistakes with capitalization. In the 4th stanza, you need to capitalize the word (I) also in stanza 6th you need to capitalize (i'm) also in stanza 7th same thing (i'll), again in 8th stanza (i'll}, also in last stanza the words (I and i'll}. My suggestion would be to use the spelling tool. I use it with all my work and find it to be a gem of a tool. But, this will not reflect on your rating.
Overall: What a beautiful poem and tribute you have written to your friend. This is a poem about your beloved friend. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your friend, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love your friend very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. , too, was blessed to have a special relationship with my best friend, so understand of those things of which you speak. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Although, this was a sad poem, I enjoyed reading it. Very nicely done!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Overall: This is a poem about your beloved mother. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your mother, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love your mother very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. I, too, was blessed to have a special relationship with my mother, so understand of those things of which you speak. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. Very nicely done!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. About someone who wants and yearns to be seen. Although this was a sad poem, none the less I enjoyed reading it.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. I always like to see acrostic poems begin with the first letter in bold or a larger font, so that the words it spells out are easier for the reader to see. I just think it's more attractive that way.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice poem you have written here. Wonderful! You've painted a picture of what it is like to be a sorceress. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality and imagination, too. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Wow, at first I found this poem to be very sad. But, in the end both of the children grow up and turned out okay. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I really enjoyed reading this poem because it was so well written. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice poem you have written here. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. As I was reading this poem, I could just imagine the little old cactus tree with cigarette cellophane covering that cactus. What a smart idea to use that to decorate the small cactus tree. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: First off I would like to send you my deepest condolences and my prayers go out to you and your family. What a nice poem you have written here. A tribute to your grandpa. Good imagery about your grandpa, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed this poem because it came from your heart. Great Job!!!
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions to make this poem any better.
Overall: Thank you very much for sharing this. I think that writing difficult pieces like this one that put your causes of concern out there are something every writer should pursue at least on occasion. There are so few ways to make people more aware and more involved in putting a stop to such atrocities, and this is one of the best avenues to incite change upon. You definitely have a true gift with words. You certainly belong here, you have great talent. I really enjoyed reading this poem because it was well written and put out a message that needed to get out there. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!! This poem certainly deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: First of when you do an Acrostic poem, usually the first letter is in bold and in a different color. If you do not do this is all runs together and does not spell out the word you want to pop. Example: Do you know how many times I toiled for you?
See how the (D) just pops out at you.
My next suggestion is on punctuation: A strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. I think that with a little work this poem could be a great poem. This poem deserves: ,
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a pretty good poem. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a lovely poem you have written here. Expressing how you feel about someone special in your life. You truly wore your heart on your sleeve in this poem. Which was just lovely. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I can really relate to this poem. I too suffer from depression. It is not an easy thing to live with. As I was reading your poem, it felt as if you were speaking of me. I know it must have been hard for you to write about this, but, a lot of people do not understand depression. They just think that you can just pull yourself out of depression at anytime. Which is not true. You conveyed the emotions of what depression is like. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this because it is so informative about how it feels to have depression and was a great message that needed to be put out there. Very nicely done!! This poem deserves: .
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Title: Fits the content well.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: I found this poem to be very sad and full of hate for God. What a sad, sad thing. Just brought a tear to my eyes. To think someone is that mad at our Lord. What a sad situation this person is in. But, again only my opinion. My hope for you is to someday find God, and let him back into your heart again. But, that is your choice to make, not mine. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that caught my interest
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Gods love is probably the most taken for granted thing in the universe. Which I think is just a shame, if only people would put God back into their hearts. The bible says that He is Love! Thanks for the poem! And keep hiding His word in your heart. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is good.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Speaks of a person speaking of their life and struggles they are having in their life. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is with punctuation. My suggestion would be to place a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion. But this is only my opinion, only you know what is right for your writing.
Overall: All in all a good poem. You give a lot of description in this piece, which I really like. You bring a strong image to the reader's mind, as well as a subtle emotion on dealing with scammers and first loves. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Word Choice: Word selection is good.
Suggestions: My suggestions are on form and punctuation.
First the form. In my opinion I think you should use this form for your poem: The sensation,
The feelings,
A ever lasting love song.
A burning sensation,
Loneliness in a crowd!
My suggestion on punctuation is a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: A poem about different feeling we all have. You conveyed this message very well in your poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem But, I think with a little work this could be a great poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem . This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a lovely poem you have written here. Speaks of love you have for someone special and are given them a flower to show them your love. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Wow, what a beautiful poem you have written here. Utterly amazing! This is a poem about the one you love. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your love one, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love your loved one very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite lines or phrase (though it's hard to choose) were:
A flower forever,
Shall not die whatsoever.
With steadfast cores,
My love shall forever be yours.
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. Perfect way to wrap up your poem with such lovely words. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. One in which I highly recommend. Kudos to the author!! This poem certainly deserves: .
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
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