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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is truly sad. Education is the cornerstone of the advancement of our species.

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Review of One Hot Day  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

My child is only two and a half, but this brings to mind the battles I may have to wage in coming years. I'm preparing to fight for my kid all the way!

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Review of SIRE  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I've certainly had a similar figure in my life, though I have to say he came to me through different circumstances.

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Review of Ol' Big Ears  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a very fun concept. I love second person stories, too.

Try avoiding forms of the verb “to be” such as am, are, is, was, were, etc. This is known as passive language. Using more colorful verbs can greatly strengthen your writing.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This sounds like a very intriguing tale. I keep imagining Pearl from Steven Universe, though.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I love second person fanfics! I would have written mine this way if it wasn't against the rules on fanfiction.net. For the mum and dad, I recommend they use Honey, Darling, Dear, or something along those lines when they address each other so you don't need to pick names.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I used my internet browser to translate this to English, so I will not comment on the grammar.

This was a very pleasant read. I went to New York about 15 years ago, and I can't remember much of it, but I did get to see Blue Man Group there.

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Review of The Monkey Snored  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This reminds me of the many long walks I took after my first love left me.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

That sounds like a very lucky coincidence. I'm glad you had a great time with your book!

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Review of Mosaic Masochism  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is very sad. I recall many years ago that my ex-boyfriend told me about a similar news story but never once mentioned mental illness.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is wonderful news! I'm always glad to hear about advancement in sciences.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This reminds me so much of my twenties. I'm facing a different set of struggles now, but I am glad the struggles of my twenties are behind me.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I used my internet browser to translate this to English, so I will not comment on the grammar.

I know this is a kink for some people, but I find it sad that people associate comfort and feeling safe with things like diapers and pacifiers when we did not have those material things for most of our evolutionary heritage. Have you heard of elimination communication? It's when a mother pays enough attention to a baby to put them on the potty (or another appropriate place to release waste) when they need it instead of ignoring them and letting them soil a diaper. That's what all humans did before diapers were invented. In our society, we start replacing genuine love and affection with objects from an early age.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale!

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

That's a quite disgusting story. I wonder why those students thought they could get away with that.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review of A new adventure  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the good work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is wonderful news! Thanks for bringing this to my attention.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a delight to read. Thanks for sharing this wholesome tale!

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Review of Rapper Man  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I recommend using shorter paragraphs for easier reading. I think this will appeal to a select group of people who are already familiar with Logan Paul and Jake Paul. I also have no idea who KSI is.

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Review of Time's Disgrace  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of "tightening"  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I'm not familiar with this fandom, but this is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I'm sure you will weave a magnificent tale!

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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