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Review of A Foolish Notion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The author has written a story with a tight knot. Till the end of the story, the author could maintain the suspense of the story. The story complete with dialogues will help the reader to understand the loving bond between the son and the mother. The dialogues also help to keep the momentum of the story and they were quite descriptive and help to analyze the characters. The story at the end takes the sudden twist revealing the unexpected end.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Enjoyed reading the story. Dogs are quite playful and they act like our own children. As an author you were able to portray visually the incidents that happened on two different occasions. The little dogs are smart to make use of the situation and enjoy their favorite food. Your story made me smile and understand the fun you had with your dogs.


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Review of A Helping Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Suspense unfolds sneakily without giving a chance to the reader. The author has successfully maintained the suspense from the beginning to the end. While the reader would suspect the brother to be the culprit to commit the crime, the elder brother gets into the loop. The author's choice of words helps to move the story without any loose ends. The author's has successfully maintained a grim tone from the beginning. The end of the story takes a twist and leaves the reader to decide the end.


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Review of The New Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The author has successfully conveyed the message.

"The more John thought he was standing on his own two feet, the more the Lord withdrew." These lines showed the state the world is now in. When the man starts to think that he is sole reason for success, the Lord knows what to do. Gradually he moves away from him and leaves him to suffer. The man when he realizes the power of God and how the holy love occupies his life, the life is a blessing.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An emotionally packed story that explained untold feelings picture perfect. The author has successfully portrayed the growing bond of friendship between the two. The feelings not shared between the two tightens the story line and brings out the pain of the heart. The author has also successfully written the story using one syllable words. The story is quite descriptive for it brings before the mind's eye of the reader the location and the characters.

Thanks for sharing the story.


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Review of You and I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
True! The author has impressively written down the initial feelings of a boy who emotionally gets into an everlasting bond of friendship that makes them believe they are made for each other. True it may be but the feelings slowly fade away leading to a matured bond. Days after knowing each other well, it is left to the friends to maintain that bond stronger and longer. Thanks for sharing this for it reminded me of my friendship with a friend that turned out to be a moral support while I went through difficult days.


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Review of Inseparable  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A well written emotionally packed story that shares the warm of love between a mother and a daughter. The author has successfully shown the distinct differences between the two characters - the mother and the daughter. The author has used the dialogues to show the difference perfectly. The story moves on smoothly and the theme is beautifully built to capture the attention of the reader.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Science fiction is exciting to read but it always takes some more extra time for my brain to understand the theme and the background of the story. The characters usually leaves me baffled and confused and when it starts to settle, the story ends. This story has the tension and the serious tone of a sci-fiction for the dialogues provide the much needed break. The dialogues helped me as a reader to understand the characters well and grasp the climax - how things take a sudden twist and show who is the boss.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The beginning of the story hooked will hook a reader. It hooked me for sure. The story begins with a suspense and the author has successfully maintained it till the end of this chapter. The story has much scope to develop the story line with thrill and unexpected twists in the plot. The language suitably changes to fit in the scenes and it will successfully get transformed into images in the inner mind of the reader.


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Review of Final Waters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The author has shown impressively the unknown bond that exist between the older and the younger generation. The values of life are strengthened in this relationship and as a reader I could feel strongly the emotional love that holds both the grand dad and the grand child. At a time when the world has been slowly forgetting the emotional values of the link that binds the two generation together, the author has shown it in the most significant way.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
After reading this recollection on tornado, a deep sigh escaped from me. The author had given a descriptive account of tornado and that brought before my mind's eye the power of tornado and how it hit the town without any mercy. So far we have not experienced such shivering moments to narrate for years. The author's writing style will definitely help the reader to understand how even strangers come forward to help each other when a natural disaster occurs.

Thanks for sharing!!


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Review of What's Behind Me?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Felt scared. As a reader, I like reading werewolf stories for they need extreme imagination to create the characters, and the story. The author has made this story a distinct read. The dialogues and the description are enough to evoke fear in the heart of the reader. The story flows smoothly like a stream showcasing the writing skills of the author. The story ends with a twist but that also evoked fear in my heart!!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Perfect!! That's what a reader would feel after reading this story. The author has beautifully portrayed the emotional ebb and flow in Madi's heart. The helpless situation of a girl who had an unhappy childhood and the trembling moments of physical abuse from her own sibling are described well. Logan is a character that most of the girls would crave for. The author has been successful in drawing a perfect picture of a caring man who has all the adorable qualities of a heart warming character.

As a reader, the story reminded me the days of my early twenties that made me crave for a man resembling Logan who would take care of my emotional well being.

Thanks for sharing this story.


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Review of Kite Chasing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
As a reader, I let out a deep sigh after reading the story. The author has told an interesting story that justifies love. Carly's suffering and her decision to take away her life reminded once again the sudden death of one of my friends. The author has shown the emotional disturbance the family members would go through if the harmony in the family is disturbed.

Reading through the story, I felt heavy at heart for it clearly showed how helpless Carly's husband felt. The author's writing style suits the heavy theme of the story for he uses standard vocabulary.

Thanks for sharing.


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Review of A Second Chance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

The story inspired me to grab the second chance that has already started to show its glimpse. The author has successfully portrayed the truth through this inspiring story that life always gives a second chance to live on this Earth.

The characters in the story are successful portray of real characters in life. The author has brought in the breath of life through his characters and has distinctly spread the message that everyone has a second chance to live the life to the fullest.

Life always gives a second chance to the person who struggles hard to live a eventful life. Eventful life leaves memories to be cherished forever and appreciate the life we live on Earth.

Thanks for sharing the story.


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Review of Left or Right  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Enjoyed reading the story. Every one in their lives come at cross roads during any moment of life. A satisfied life can always turn into a life without any fulfillment and the human heart could keep on working for something. The yearning will always be there. The circumstances in a person's life decides the happenings. It is left to the decision of the individual to cheat or not to cheat.


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Review of Smile  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Smile. I could not resist smiling after reading about smile. A small smile can do wonders in the lives of the persons who receive the warmth of your wonderful smile. Smiling does not cost much on our part. It can send positive energy to the other person. It can lift the spirit of the person who feels low and the life a dark mystery.

Smiling can be a simple gesture. I feel we need to teach our children to smile and face everything in their lives with a smiling heart.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love reading stories with a happy ending! So, this story is no exemption. The author has built the suspense well to let the story move forward smoothly. The twist in the story blissfully unites the searching son with his parents and make the reader smile with relief. The author's writing style suits this cute story that builds a beautiful story in the end. It is always true - better late than never.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
The story reminds me of the forlorn days of lonely people who want someone to tap their hidden energy and help them face life as it is. A few words of comfort can do wonders. They can bring back the confidence and the willingness to live in this world. The story impressively presented the agony of the blind woman and the comforting words of the man beside her giving the hope to live. Everyone needs such a person in their life.

Thanks for sharing the story with us.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting read. As a reader, I have not read much about the flying saucers and how they would bring the mysterious ET to Earth. May be a scientific innovation or a thought of an over imaginative soul that always love to live in a world of trance up in the sky! I don't know. The article needs some connection between ideas. It looked as if I am reading numerous paragraphs that are not connected together lacking smooth transition.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Overall Impression: Enjoyed reading your story. The story shows some proof that after death still souls linger around and look at things that they love dearly.

Plot: The story starts with a simple plot and takes the unexpected twist with Alicia discovering the skull near the woodshed. The paranormal experience is not something peculiar for people who could feel the presence of dead at a point of time in their lives.

Style and Voice: The author's cool writing style moves the story smoothly and tactfully shows the truth of an unsolved murder. The author could maintain an exciting voice throughout the story with a happy ending.

Scene/Setting: The author is quite descriptive and has been quite successful in building the fear that Alicia felt in the beginning. In the same way, peace comes into Alicia's house once she accepts the dog into her house.

Characters: As a reader I am quite impressed with Alicia and the dog. The faithful dog helps to solve the mysterious death of its owner and find again his place to live.

Dialog: The dialogues help the reader to understand what is happening in the story and how the characters react to Alicia's unexpected discovery of a human skull.

Grammar and Mechanics: The author has taken care.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Really!! I could feel my brain cells heavy with information! Starting with stillness ending with dark matter, the author has linked one idea to the other in an eloquent manner. While exploring the mystery that exists around us in the form of nature, we, the human beings, struggle everyday to rule over the mighty forces that are mightier than us. A good article that made me feel awesome and wonder how long will it take everyone of us to explore that dark matter.


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Review of The Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Life is not a bed of roses for everyone. Most of the people in the world struggle every day to live a life of pain with little gain. The author has brought out the pain and the struggle that slowly builds up the base for the most successful one. Life is always dreary and challenging and to win in the least, bitter circumstances never comes out. The story reflects those unknown pages in the lives of the unlucky who struggle to survive and live a life of dignity.


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Review of Snapshots  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Quite a descriptive one. The author has beautifully written about things one by one linking each to the memories of the past. Initially, I could not write if it is something personal or about something else. Till the end, I could not relate to the main idea that the author thought of discussing in such an elaborate, descriptive manner. The keen observation of things that goes around demands an applause. You get it! Keep writing!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting story to read to your toddler. Quite imaginative and it could be developed further. The story has a simple plot that reaches the twist in the story to reach an unexpected climax. Initially, I thought it will be a story about the animals in the zoo. When I realized that this story is about a ribbon, I could not help smiling! Enjoyed reading your story.


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