The Drama was very good, The Romance was solid. Your strength lies in the description of Characters and scenes. It still needs some editing. You need to be as descriptive in your fight scenes as you are above.
Martial arts terminology needs work. The story was original, I have never read this side of BTVS universe ie Buffy turned. the ending was alittle vague. Thank you, Kevin82
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