mota's (l8te4dinner) Reviews

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#3399325

Review of A Love that could not be

Review by mota

Rated: 13+

| (2.0)

Wow, so what I got from this in short, was he turned off his apathy for feelings beyond sexual.

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#3399323

Review of A Day on the Farm

Review by mota

Rated: ASR

| (3.0)

This has a lesson in there. It wold also make a funny cartoon.

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#3399319

Review of The Softening

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like the visuals this presents.

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#3399230

Review of First Time Around

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Wow If I may be completely honest, this poem is like you took all the jumbled thoughts right out of my head and put them on paper. i know what this feels like so I truly feel for you Lecy. whom ever you write to I hope it moves them like it moved me.

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#3399227

Review of Had I Known

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Wow, love the creativity here. I am inspired thank you.

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#3399223

Review of Don't Break Away

Review by mota

Rated: 13+

| (2.0)

This is cute it sounds like teenage love, no pun intended. Or perhaps the making of a song?

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#3399153

Review of Unnamed 1

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (2.0)

This is nice. I'd like to see you add onto it, if you don't mind me saying. Where did they go from there? How did they meet? Why did he need to talk to her about them ? Did he put her off? What happened? How much time apart did they have? Why did they spend that time apart?

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#3397870

Review of Mother

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like this .... The beetles! Cool

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#3397866

Review of True Friends

Review by mota

Rated: E

| (2.5)

This is nice and simple.

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#3397710

Review of Glass Cities- Chapter 1- Raw(No Editing)

Review by mota

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

Wow this reminded me of resident evil. I mean that in a good way no pun intended. It has the making of a movie. As a newbe I am not comfortable commenting on the body of this writing. The story line itself however leads the imagination, thus making it interesting so far.

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#3393685

Review of Monster Justice

Review by mota

Rated: 18+

| (2.0)

I found it hard to keep up with who was who. Maybe building the charters more and even the story line? Just some suggestions...

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