I enjoyed reading about my StarTrec buddies. You wrote the story so well, I couldn't stop reading and even re read some of the story. You ought to submit it to the producers of StarTreck! I would love to see that episode!
The dialog was very believable and in character for the members of the crew, as well as the other people in the story. Though it took me a while to read it, I am trying, myself, to write longer, more detailed stories. I have already learned a lot and thank you!
I was surprised with the many newsletters with 5 stars! I just know I will either be right up there with everyone or fall on my face! Well since I am so vain, I guess, I will start climbing up there with everyone!
Though I've yet to read very much, I've never thought I liked Si FY. So I do plan on reviewing, not stroking someone on the head. However, I promise to abide to the Guidelines and make sure the writer is pleased that he did the work and looking forward to writing a better piece next time. I can be good at motivating people, as you will notice.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I am not so talented, myself. I think it would be nice if you mentioned more about the dog and if he lived through the trama. My boss, a Veterinary Surgeon, travelled to New Orleans after Katrina. He told us some horror stories that made me want to weep. I have also had to deal with this kind of thing when I managed an animal shelter. The pets were terrified and a good many were severely injured.
You did write a great poem.
Lesley
I have been plagued by severe migraines since I was in high school. Over the years, after seeing a lot of doctors, they came up with other diagnoses. Finally, I saw a great Neurologist who gave me meds as well as showed me how to give myself shots of Imitrex. Nothing really helped.
When I was diagnosed with Bipolar Disorder, my migraines were not so painful or frequent.It was because he gave me Zyprexa, and an aniti-siesure drug and a wonder drug called Ultram which all but rid me of my trigeminal Neuralgia, a cranial nerve disorder which is dubbed: "The Suicide Disorder" because it is so painful. Some folks can't deal with the intense pain anymore. I can understand why.
I am better now and I hope you will find something to keep you from having migraines at all. Have you ever taken Ultram (Tramadol)? It is as effective as morphine, they tell me.
Anyway, I liked your blog. Someday, I hope to write a blog one day.Any advice?
Lesley Scott
The Non-Human slant is irresistable. I read a lot of Stephen King and Dean Koontz and really enjoy super non-humans. But my favorite non-human is "Gustav," the gigantic huge and ferocious man eating crocodille on "Primeval" The makers of the film made it so realistic and I have seen large alligators move just the same way. If you haven't seen it, watch it. It will curdle your blood!
You are a wonderful and talented writer. Keep up the good work.
Lesley Scott (lesdonks)
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