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Review of Two Worlds  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Turtle!

I just finished reading your poem, "Two Worlds, a cry for escape. It reflects what is happening to the world today and what will happen in the future. I am upset about all the wildlife that has all but disappeared. I belong to a lot of nature and conservatory groups. We are fighting for the wolves to be put back on the endangered list. I sign a lot of petitions. I always like your work.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Percy,
I just finished reading your monolauge, "Andromace's Dilemma," I enjoyed read about history and thought you piece displayed the Battle of Troy in a realistic way. The woman in the story must be very strong to be able to endure what was happening to her.
Keep on Writing!
Lesley
ps please forgive my spelling. I haven't had breckfast yet.
L.


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Review of Predestined  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello, Feather Duster.
I just finished your poem about, "Predestined." I liked reading it and it made me feel spritual. I don't know if that was what your poem meant. I don't write poetry, myself, but I like reading it because poetry always makes me feel something.I enjoyed your poem very much and it made me feel like we are all predestened.
Lesley


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Review of Stupid People  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, bob, country,

I just finished reading your short story about "Stupid People." I thought Sneator Freddy was really "on the ball" with his ideas. I also liked how he met up with the Guardian Angel, Rhoda. She was instumental in helping Senator Freddy with his budget ideas. I agree about stupid people. I just read a book of how America is "dumbing down."
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Fragile  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Pat Nelson,

I just finished reading your lovely poem, "Fragile," I really did like it. It made me think of how fragile we are, here on earth. "I see His image now, in the rocky, uncut borders of the river and the cool, shimmering water of His calming glory."

Yours,

Lesley


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Review of A Close Call  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Aelyah,

Your name reminds me of "Clan of the Cave Bear." I just finshed reading your short story, "A Close Call." Dochia and Stan are so aggressive! I wish Dochia retorted her witty answer. I wonder what she was going to say. She did have a close call!
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Warrior,

I just finished reading your poem, "Behing Closed Doors." Apparently, or so I think it is a bit sad and true. We human beings seem to close the door a lot. I've done it, myself. Luckily, the door always opens, eventualy. I dont see any glaring faults, except my typing.\
Lesley


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Review of Fraidy Grady  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, SoCalScribe,

I just finished reading your cute story about, "Fraidy Grady." It is descriptive and well-written as well as fun to read. I can just picture Fraidy Grady working up the courage to face his fear of the water. He should be able now to face other fears, as well.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Iva Lilly,

I just finished reading your cute story, "O Happy Day," It reminded me of how I felt about going to church, especially when it is crowded on Easter Sunday and Christmas. Those are the only two days I go to church and take communion. I am so glad that, " Jesus washed my sins away..." Just a suggestion... I don't think you need a comma after Jesus. I did enjoy your heart warming story.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, once again!

Your poetry is so romantic. I enjoyed reading "My Wants and Needs." your introductery quote, "What words could I use to tell you of the love you have brought to me," made me feel how much you are in love with someone. "With God's Blessings it will always endure."
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Koyel,

I just now finished reading your poem, "Happy Ninth Birthda." It must be a tribute to your son or how you felt on you ninth birthday. I have not read "Chained Haiku," but the style is really interesting. I don't write poetry but love to read it because it takes a lot of thought and talent.
Lesley


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Review of P.S. I Love You  
Review by Lesley Scott
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Lynn,

I just finished reading your short story, "P.S. I Love you." I was and will always be a big Beatles fan, too. I loved their hair, "At least it isn't greasy." I wanted to write them fan mail, but we collected Beatle Bubble Gum cards and everything that was "Beatle." I liked the end of your story about Jesse being a guy.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Patient Dreams  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, KIngs!

It seems that I have read a lot of your work. I just finished your poem, "Patient Dreams." To me, it is romantic that you love your wife so much you dream of being with her at night and think about her during the day. As much as she is loved, I would like to believe she will return to her husband.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Seldom Spoken  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Kings,
I've read and liked other things of yours. I just finished reading "Seldom Spoken" and you are so right about true love. I agree we should, "Give it our best and love one another." I do my best to "fight fair" when we agrue. Most of the time, we are friends, lovers, husband and wife. You reminded me how strong love can be.

Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Spring Rains  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Harry,

I just finished your Haiku, "Spring Rains." I don't write poetry, but have read a number of Haikus and it seems difficult. You must be very good to write a Haiku. My husband tried and it turned out good, according to myself. I love, "Spring Rains gently fall, convince the flowers to blossom. Life seeks nourishment." I did enjoy reading your Haiku style.
Keep On lWriting,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your story, "I Didn't Know Buffaloes Could Fly." I never understood why the spicy chicken wings came to be called "Buffalo Wings." I know about real life buffalo. I raised one from a small calf. When he decided to run and play, he would swaps sides with no effort. He was flying. I wrote a story about him and even have our photo in my port. I did enjoy reading about your love for spicy chicken wings.
Lesley


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Review of Anomanunka  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, again, Turtle,

I just finised reading your Indian Legend, and the story of "Anonmanunksa." I love reading stories about the Native Americans and their customs. I feel ashamed for what the white man has done to such a noble race. Your story was toutching when Anomanlnka only wanted his wife back when the Chief offered him anything he wanted.
Keep on Writiing,
Lesley


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Review of Paths  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Turtle,

I just finished reading your poem, "Paths." I have read some of your work before and always liked it. The poem you wrote is very spirtual for me. I read a lot of spirtual books, including Lao Tzu's teaching in the "The Toa Te Ching." the Toa has been translated almost as many times as the Bible and I have read several versions. "The path to peace is tolerance."

Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Aelya,

I just finished your short story, " An Ice-cream Story." I found it funny and so true about we humans with our weaknesses. I don't eat much ice-cream, myself, but I understand what it is like to get hooked on these "Daytime Dramas." I used to watch four or five, but now, I don't even cut on the TV.

Keep on Writing,
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, Prosperous Snow,

I just finished reading your short story, "Pretend You Enjoy It." Somehow I don't think that is exactly what Aunt Clara meant at the time. It is so unselfish of you to get into your husband's hobbies. Doing things together does make for a long and happy marriage. Great advice!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Sires of the moon." I am very interested in Native Americans' culture and history and know about "The Trail of Tears." Your poem was moving and captured my attention. I don't write poetry, myself, but love to read it whenever I have the chance.
Keep On Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, again,

I just read the new version of "The Basement." It is such a scary story, it gives me goose bumps. The way it was written is really cool. You really have quite an unusual imagination. It is one of my favorite storys.

What did you do with the ant story? I liked it a lot. Did you delete it and purge the 55 word story?

Yours,
Lesley
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Review of NO ONE!  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, Jaiam,

I just now finished reading your poem, "No One!" I can tell this girl means everything to you and holds your heart in her hand. Love is a wonderful gift and we should all be lucky to find just the right person. Some of us are still looking!
Lesley


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Review of Brother Wayne  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Heelo, again!

I just finishedreading your poem about your brother, "Brother Wayne." It is a very emotional poem and it made me remember how many soldiers were affected and many died. I lost several friends and those who came back were never the same. "Rest in Peace, Wayne."
Lesley


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Review of Respect  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Old Warrior,

I just finished reading your poem, "Respect." I liked the way the words flowed and the message that it carries. We all have the right to choose and have within us the means to create eternal bliss. I also agree with the first sentence, "It's hard to see and tough to judge, this thing we call respect."
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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