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Review of Sacred Presence  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Sacred Presence by Kings." It is an inspirational type of poetry that tells of how Jesus Christ brought meaning and forgiveness to a lost soul. He cast away your gilt and fear, he made you feel his love and gave you what you needed to hold yourself high.
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your short story, "Ringing in your head." It was easy to read and realistic. I felt bad for Bryan, out getting drunk because Amber didn't want to marry him was my impression. The end was a pleasant surprise. He had asked Amber's sister, Joyce to marry him and she said yes. All Bryan could think to say was, "Ohhhh...kay."
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, Spidey!

I just hacked into your port and read your true story,"The Gift of Goodbye." Did you win "The Writers Cramp?" The short story is certainly good enough. It is very sweet that twin Girls were born on Pa-Pa's bithday. I loved the closeness they had with their Polish grandfather. The ending was bittersweet. A gift of goodbye is a great gift.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review of Hysteria  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Spidey! This must be the third time I've reviewed your work. I just finished reading, "Hysteria." I like the way it flows and the way you have the first letter in each line. I don't remember what that style is called. The poem has your usual flow and unique choice of words.
Keep Up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Webs  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, Again, Spidey,

I just finished your poem you wrote for the Micro-fiction Contest, "Webs." I found it to be an original subject. I am also interested in spiders and feel bad when they eat insects, but that's nature. I like feeding grasshoppers to those real big spiders! I really did like the surprise ending, "I found you!" he growled, and I cowered in the corner, helpless in his trap."
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of World War 3  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "World War 3." I find it interesting, the style. I don't know much about poetry, which is why I try to read as much as I can. The rhyming pattern:a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c sounds difficult to write. I think that someone who writes poetry has an unusual gift from God.
Lesley


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Review of Schizm  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, Darka,

I just finished reading your interesting poem, "schizm" I liked it very much. It did seem a bit crazy and I wondered if it was written by a Bipolar person, like myself, or a schizophrenic. I have spend some time with them when I was in the hospital and you captured the thoughts and feelings of a schizoid very well. I write stories about my Bipolar adventures.
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Eden  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello,Spidey,

I just finished reading your poem, "Eden." The words flow and fit together well. The tone is one of depression. The last part says it all, "I try to capture it like a photograph, but the film never develops and I remain hopeless." That is a very good way to put it!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with Happy Place Contest Members  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, Hamilton,

I just finished reading your powerful piece of poetry! It really blew me away. When I saw "nature" as one genre, I had to read it because I am a real animal freak. But when I read the first verse, I thought it might be over my head. But I concentrated and drew mental pictures, and was a bit like the Greek Mythology, but on a more realistic note. The words became less thundersome and tapered down to the gentleness of the last verse, "She smiled at him and lingered there, her red hair like a solar ray. And then she swam out in the sea, it's her we celebrate today."

Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of LOTS OF WORDS  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hey, there !

I just finished reading your stories and poems. You are blessed with talent. "Listen to others--" You wrote that you had a special gift for poety. You belonged to the "New Horizons Academy and you really did well and took away what you would leave at school,
Keepon doing it!


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, I just finished reading your humorfull accounts of you and the rest of th family. I thought it was so funny that your family iived in Italy. And went to pubic school. I'l bet that was challenging. The poem sums it up: "May memories in the mind. If they were bad, may they be forgotten in time. Never lose the gift to share a few lines.Of joy and laughter from your heart so fine."

Keep it up!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished your short story, "Hooves of Fire." I liked the length which includes just as much or more than the tedious longer items.I thought the ending was so funny. I didn't expect it at all. The bull typed the verse and when he finished, he just had to eat the pages he typed. "It was the best story I ever have eaten.

Good work!
Lesley


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Review of Brainstormers Sig  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, there, Deanna,

I really do like a lot of the lovely art work you now have. I sent my URL so you can read of my joy and other wise. The last time I went to the hospital, I didn't want to leave. I made a lot of friends, the food was wonderful and we took our meds after we ate. I didn't even know it was Thanksgiving until we were served the traditional food!

Your Friend,
Lesley
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Review of Brainstormers Sig  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Deanna,
We have been such strangers and i don't know why. It is probably because I haven't been in contact lately. I was in the hospital twice and had a mess to clean after I came home. We've been planting and working so hard before summer comes around. The temps here are wonderful.

I had my 15 year old cat to sleep last week. She has hypothalimis problems and the medicine wasn't helping. I felt like she was in a better place.

So sometimes, I rarely cut on my computer to check my email.

Your Friend,
Lesley

ps How much is the registation fee and how to I get it to you? I want to be a part of "The Brainstormers."
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for entry "Easter Traditions" 
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well, BBW,

I just finished your piece about your Easter Tradition. It is a lot like my Easter. Momma bakes a big meal and the girls still love Easter Egg Hunts, although they are 13 and 12. My sister adopted them from China when they were little babies. The eggs are plastic and filled with prizes.

Your Friend,

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Hello,
I just reviewed your WDC Technical Support site. I am surprised we only have sixteen members. I thought there would be more. I just wanted to thank everyone involved in the Support Groups that they are doing a great job and have helped me out a lot of times.
Lesley
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Review of Boxer Pup  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Maryann!
Your boxer image is so cute. Boxers are such great dogs. I love the little bandana. The groomers give Tinkerbelle one and she takes them off when we get home. I am als glad you didn't have his ears done. I have seen how the vets do the procedure, and it is awful. Also, the "ear job' is very painful for a long time.
Yours,
Lesley
ps I want to enter my whales as a sig, but can't figure out how. I will try some more and hope you might help some.
L.
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Review of A Fine Blade  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your story, "A Fine Blade." I liked the characters and the plot. Poor Brand didn't understand the magic he held and it was his downfall. His sister,Pedra, begged him that he should keep Elton's sword and not just sell it at the market.
It was sad that Sentinel was stolen by the group who wanted the magic sword. "In the end, it didn't matter."

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Money Isn't Every thing." It made me feel sad about people who don't have any monry for groceries. But the family will work hard and the family will survive.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, old Friend! I had a few minutes to check to see what I've been missing, WDC! You have a catagory for everything! You also have a lot going on. I always talk about you to my family. I say, "My Friend, Maryann this or Maryann told me..". Seriously, I admire your energy and using your skills and make it seem like, "Oh, yeah, that.."

I have to go outside and crawl into my sleeping bag. We have a tent in the yard. It's something like country folk in the city, sometimes I like to rough it even if I can see it outside my window.

I was trying to find a way to tell you about putting 15 year old terminally ill Ruf to sleep today. I haven't forgotten your losses, but it was something I had to tell you first. The Vet didn't charge me and we have a unique rapport. He knows because I am a vet tec, animal control officer and animal rights and Animal Consultant. We joke around about different drugs, how certain medications work the best. I've assisted him on a couple of surgeries on my two bunny boys. He had never done it, but I pleaded and told him how easy it would be. He did some research and talked to another specialty vets and we sailed through on a nice breeze and cool water!

So now, Ruf is in a better place. She was so damn sick, it made me feel sick. She was a gorgeous ball of fluff when I brought her home from whatever shelter or police Dept. I was working for at the time. Maryann, she was the lightest shade of charcol tabby and always and forever, she will keep those deep and sweet eyes. They are the color of a butterbean. I'd better get going now!
More later!
Love you!
L.


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Review of "Thank You RAOK"  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I was just surfing around on contests and activities and your site came into focus. I think that is one of the things that makes R.A.O K. All of you do so many kind things for us is almost too much. I don't know how Y'all can handle so many projects. I don't need an upgrade unless you can help me get my yellow suitcase. I lost it over a missunderstanding over a year ago and I have done well and I am proud of what I have done with WDC and I want to keep trying to make our world (WDC)less stressful.
Keep up the good work!
Love,
Lesley
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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
While looking present moment, the King noticed a pattern in the shapshots in the information of the camera' card that was recovered. even affer delitiing the items. The murderer though she knew what to do and how to stay, counted on the photos being erased. When the pictures, after many other tests was converted to the seasons they represented. The poems were easy to read the number and subject.

I plan is to add the story to my collectiom. I have been thinking for a while now, and have several in my mind I will share later.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your short story, "From Under the willow Tree." The story started out peacefully, with Fae relaxing and sucking on a peach pit. It became a big spooky to find out about all of the "haunts" that Fae was able to see. At first, I thought she'd stumbled upon an old graveyard. The ending was a surprise to find out that Bucky was the evil one and the others were trying to warn her to stay away.
Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Acting  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi, Bob county,
I just now finised your short story,"Acting." You had me fooled. I really thought she was on the "casting couch" and was trying out an opportunity to be a porn star. I laughed out loud at the end of your funny story. It probably can happen anywhere! I am glad Jaspher could help her out, in more ways than one.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Bob!

I just finished reading your cool story, "Is Tom Cruise a Fascist." You are right on the mark about Scientology. I think it is to control others and deny what is right, ie: The refusial of medical care. How many have died? I think the pharmacutical companies are more out to sell drugs to line their pockets. Some of us truly need medication. I am Bipolar with ADHD and take a lot of different meds. I've tried to gradually wean myself from the drugs, but suffered one bad mishap after another. I finally had to spend five days in a hospital.

I do wish these foolish people could think for themselves and use common sense. I read the first book and thought is was a way to control others. I prefer reading Lao Tzu's work, "The Tao Te Ching," and several of the new translations. My favorite is "The Tao of Inner Peace." Anyone who wants to improve themselves and help save the world should include the Tao in their different readings. If I don't read some of the Tao everyday, I think about the verses I know."

Good Job!

Lesley

ps When the Jesus Freaks knock on my door to read me their scriptures, I say, "I am a Sage of the Tao."They walk away, confused. Why didn't one of them even ask about the Tao?


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