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Review of One Moment  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dark and intriguing.
I like.
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Review of Xit  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting, yet again! You like the visual aspect of portrayak as well.
Again, I take my hat off to you!
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice insight.
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Review of VOICES  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have talent. Good work.
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Review of Burning Brightly  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done.
Good descriptive choices of words.
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Review of Dear Self  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Definitely a good post.
I liked the emotional aura I got from reading it, you've got a talent.
Keep it going!



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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting way of doing this.
Keep going!
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Review of Ho Hum  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
hmm....creative yes.
I liked it.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
I sincerely wish you all the best from here on out.
Situations like this tear at us from the inside, and there is no way to make the pain subside. The only course (from what Ive learned) is to try and make the most of the time spent with the ones we have left.

Hang in there.

Your post is respectful and bears the mark of a true artist.
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Review of Affections  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Smooth..
Nicely done there!
Keep it going!
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely done.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked it very much. Intelligently composed.
Careful on the punctuation though.
Keep going!
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Review of why why why  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.0)
May I ask : was the lengthy run-on intentional?
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Review of Spew  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
My kind of intelligent offering as well.
Congrats. Very well done.
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Review of Anger  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely worded. Easy to read.
I liked it.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting reading, I must admit.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked it very much.
Keep it going.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aren't cats unique creatures?
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Review of Chains  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
*takes hat off to you*

Outstanding! My Friend, you are in your element and kicking ....well, you got the idea.
Far be it from me to point anything out to anyone BUT may I ask was the
Bill of Rights not capitalized intentionally?
And perhaps give this a thought: how about capitalizing certain key words:
'State', 'Freedom', or 'Justice' for instance, thereby taking them from being the average 'noun' and transforming them into the proper 'perspectives' they truly represent and/or should be. Anyway, I am truly impressed and look forward to reading more of your work.
I give you my word that any future review by me shall not be as windy this one. Your work simply struck a chord with me.

-Lee
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Review of The End  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Harsh.
Brutal.
Liked it.

-Lee

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Review of I Remember  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very well done.
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Review of lonely  
Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your style of writing.
Good work.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I was impressed from the get go. You have the gift.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Highly Interesting!
Very good.
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Review by SaintLee
Rated: E | (4.5)
A little hard to follow, but overall I liked it.
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