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Review of Anniversary  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

I have to say that I'm deeply touched by the impact of my feelings while reading this. The cold reality of missing someone and the reminder date. The emotional impact is amazing what you can do with words and how you make the meaning flow like butter. You have such wonderful talent. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome poetry. I hope life is treating you well!

Take care,
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Review of Work in progress  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jonisapanda Author IconMail Icon

I like poetry that can flow and share a moment or thought. I am not a huge stickler of style or all the technical names of poetry. It is best when it forms from the heart and you can at least see or undstand the emotions of it. You have a couple thoughts in this and I like the wording. Thanks for sharing your talent. Welcome to Writing.com.

Write on!
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Review of Dear God  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Wyn - missing III Author IconMail Icon

This is a Simply Positive Reveiw,

Oh girl if God could talk! Can you imagine the conversations? I know he is real. I can feel him in my bones and I have had to listen for a long time to get him to leave me a message, but if I take the time and listen to the world spin around me, I know it is because of him. Faith is something you believe, you don't have to see. I hope he was able to answer your call. It's hard to believe when you are surrounded in darkness. The light has to come from within.

Write on!
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Review of Pigeon Parade  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HelloHarry Author IconMail Icon

This is a Simply Positive review.

Oh what have we learned in nature? The male bird is so colorful. He has to do all the work to get the female to pay attention. Makes you wonder what is real?? I love that you feed all the birds and do the piegon's keep the other's from coming? I just wonder how much noise you must have. I have a little dog that makes so much noise we don't get the birds like we used too. I miss it. Thanks for sharing your backyard with all of us.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello semineurotic03 Author IconMail Icon

Oh I think we need to talk, Richard....Just how old are you? I think it's time you took a little drive down to the hosptiol and had your brains checks. I mean you know they have medication for this kind of memory loss. LOL Creative writing at it's best! Thanks for sharing a funny moment.

Write on!
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Review of For Uncle Lloyd  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello AngelGirl Author IconMail Icon

Uncle Lloyd must truely have been a special man to inspire such heavenly dovation and to make the stars shine so bright. I love the connection between earth, death and forever in the sky. I can not think of anything that could make this a better poem. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Mr.Monk- GPs for the poor Author IconMail Icon

Is is destiny or destined? I am not sure, but I think that one word is the only one I stumble over. I love the flow of this and the image that life is a walk in the park, sometime you get the good end of the park and other times you get the night so fun walk in the park. Anyway to end up with love is the greatest of all endings. I love them to raise up and obey God. That is so true for me. I want my kids to live by a greater being then just me. It is nice to see you writing again. Welcome back MUSE.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Joy Author IconMail Icon

It is my pleasure to offer you a Simply Positive review,

What fun to watch history in the making. I loved your line...Faded men crowd into excitement;
their paths crossed in exile, retired,

It's a wonderful way to describe elderly retired gentleman. I can see so much in just this. I don't know how to play chess, but I have been around a block or two to understand the pieces. You do a wonderful job of bringing the game alive. Thank you for that!

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Passenger Author IconMail Icon

What? Are you talking about? A red jem or a ruby that can bring the dead alive? I am telling ya, I gave this a 5 star because you caught my attention with the brilliance, but I do think I am lost on the meaning. Poetry can mean so many different things and only the writer really knows the real story. Interesting to say the least!

Write on!
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Review of Joy's Guestbook  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Joy,

Thank you so much for inviting me to your Quest Book. I love it! Congrates on your Trophys. You are showing off the goods and I like that! We should brag about who we are and what we are doing. I think having a quest book will be a place you can always visit your friends and know what is happening when your not here. So here is to lots of signatures!!

Write on!
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Review of The Jazz Festival  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Connieann,

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I like your twist on this picture. It is more about the couple and less about the "romance" and I like that.


2. Easy to Read. Oh you got me with the twist. I think this could have been a very scary outcome and I'm glad you didn't go down that road. It is so amazing how fast kids can get away. I like the lesson in this.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. I only found one, in the line were Joey is saying sorry to his sister, you have made amends, but I think you mean make amends.

Great job and good luck in the contest!





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Review of What I Know  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Star*HI Em returns to writing Author IconMail Icon

Now this is what I call an awesome poem. You had me really thinking and enjoying all the little surprises, but who is this? Someone you really know or YOU? I love that you tricked me at the end. Perhaps that is the best part, do we really know? Or do we have the rest of our life to figure it out? I say thanks for sharing and keep writing!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Summer Recreation  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Sticktalker Author IconMail Icon

It is my pleasure to give you a Helping Hand review, however...I am a little shocked that no-one invited me to this game?! And just when did all of you have this party? Where was I? I could have helped you keep the kids under control, Or something. You are so creative and what a fun way to celebrate the games we play at the Paper Doll Gang. You do rock and I can see why Hannah adores YOU!

Write on!
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Review of Storm Music  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Fyn Author IconMail Icon

It is my pleasure to give you a Helping Heart review,

What can I add? This is a poem about the nature of life, the storm of living in the moment and not taking anything for granted. The good the bad, the ugly. It is all here in very eloquent words. Life is a storm that must be lived. I loved the flow and vision of your words. Thank you so much for sharing them! Perfect 5 stars!


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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Angelica Weatherby- Octoprep Author IconMail Icon

This is a Simply Positive review,

Okay, let me get this right;..You like fish? You know they come from deep water? You think maybe fish can tell you something that you can not learn from man? I don't know if I'm getting that all right, but fish have been around a heck of a long time, so maybe they do know how to get a long. Or perhaps there really is something about the food chain to think about. Anyway, I am glad you shared your fish and keep sharing!
Write on!
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ShiShad Author IconMail Icon

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This poem needed a cute sig! Man, after 20 some years of marriage, I have been here and done that! I don't even know if we even send valentines cards anymore. It just lost it's magic along the way. You think it will never happen. So happy and "in-love" So sure, that what you have is going to be brilliant forever. Well I have learned the hard way, that only happens if you put everything you have in it. And some days...we are just too tired to care. It sucks but it's honest. Sad for sure! I admire this kind of emotional poetry and I am glad that Simply Positive highlighted it. I think I need to try harder!!

Write on!
Michelle
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Review of Firefly/Serentiy  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hi denimguy Author IconMail Icon

Okay you can call me crazy, but I have no clue of what or who this is even about. I think I might be living on my own little planet Shellyville for a long time, I don't get out much and science fiction tends to scare me. So I still wanted to come over and rate something from Showering Acts of Joy. Sorry I am so clueless!

Write on!
I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon

Okay it was not easy finding a poem, I haven't reviewed! I was surprised this little celebration of happiness skipped me befofe. I tell you this is a fun poem to read. I can relate to it and understand that it was written for a contest, but it would stand alone even with that. It is what I like best about poetry, it allows us to celebrate those special moments in our life. Thank so much for sharing your talent with me and everyone here! You rock!!

Hugs,
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Review of Sidney's Poetry  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon

You tell Ms. Sidney she has a FAN! I love nothing more then kids that can express so much about life in words. Poetry is something I wrote all the time and kept all my poems in a hotebook and I wouldn't trade one thing in my life for those poems, they are little pieces of me. I think Sidney will have some huge collection of wonderful words to share with the world. You should be so proud!!

Write on and Thanks for sharing!!
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Review of (Bud)ding Love  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for bidding on my package. I loved reading your sisters poetry and now it is my turn in your port.

This is so coloful and fun. I love the rythme of it, but I adore the message of two coming together to create something stunning and complete. The Carribean sunset is so colorful in my mind and yet so simple like the rose. Wonderful wording.

Thanks for sharing you talent.
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Review of Fluid Freedom  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Noelle Author IconMail Icon

This is your final review gifted from your sister NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon

I am so glad she invited me to your port. I find your poetry to be so soothing and filled with imagery that I can see and taste. This is a wonderful gift and I am not familiar with this poetric form. I tend to write mostly from impulse. I love the sense of isolation with the sea, and the the power of water can be spilled into the air. Very beautiful.

Thanks again for sharing your talent!!
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Review of Silent Dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Noelle Author IconMail Icon

This is another review from your sister NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon.

I am a mother of two kids and I have never liked night time noise. I have to say the peace of having well kids is joy, and yet after reading this poem, all I could think about were those times the noise was so much better then all the other things I had to do. Mothers peace is hard to keep! Thanks for sharing your poetry.

Write on!
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Review of My Family  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Noelle Author IconMail Icon

I am reviewing you on behalf of your sister NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon She told me you have wonderful poetry, and she wasn't kidding!

What I admire about this poem, is your ability to show in words emotions that are often hard to describe. You place a love that is viewed from a distance. To put your brother-in-laws love for his family so elequently is a rare gift of poetry talent. Thank you so much for sharing that love for all of us to witness.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Steve,

OKay so I had to come over and see who would give a picture a 3 star of homeless man and fake teeth. You are too funny! I do agree about the needle, silly expression.

I passed 30 ten years ago and I am still going...and a 3? Well that is just too funny! Thanks for sharing your sense of humor!

Write on!
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Review of Secrets  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Kuro Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for sharing your secret of poetry. I think in the second line you mean, my lips and not mine, but hey I could be way off, I just think it sounds better. Some poetry is spoken and some is whispered. I do believe we all have some secrets but they are hard to keep when they belong to others. Write on!
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