What a poem and what a philosophy !
What a wonderful expressing given !
I eagerly search for such poems
And never stop my tireless striving
I will try my level best to trace
Such a noble one with will-power
So far I have never failed at all
As surely a beautiful poem surfaces
A small structure with great sagacity
Words are aptly placed like Shakespeare
Wonderful way of narrating one's emotions
A matchless poem that is truly brilliant
The poet has guided me so remarkably
I feel I am now newly born with joy
A perfect patch is shown by the poet
And I am now confidently moving ahead
Thank you poet for opening my eyes
Your kind and philosophical words
Have given me hope to be trustful
May God bless you to write further.
Christmas is a holy occasion
As the whole World enjoys fun
This poems gives many news
With regard to Christmas joy
Sacred Jesus celebrates gladly
Along with all His birthday
Jesus was born in a simple family
But, blesses all with love duly.
Truly a great write about mothers
Here description is indeed classic
I am sorry for the person indeed
Losing mother is such a shock
That too at age two- very hurting
God Himself has done this cruelty
Who knows what He actually thinks
Very sad and giving extreme sorrow.
The poetess has wonderfully expressed
Her agony can't be by anyone redressed
She can have another child, if age permits
Of course she has had the worst of all hits
She has written a poem with great skill
Her rhyming pattern gives enormous thrill
She has framed her words so beautifully
It is appealing to the mind so thoughtfully
Perfect structure gives a real puzzle
The poem has a meaningful muscle
Despite agony, she could finely write
That shows her mind's great might
The poem gives tears of course
As she has written with real force
She has suffered a separation
And she gets somehow consolation
The poetess is a brave lady
Poem makes her mind steady
She must pray and forget
As prayer is a safe outlet
Advising is very very easy
To do that, all are busy
If we step into her shoes
We will know her blues
What a tragic news is this
As it removes fully bliss
God alone must protect
As His mind only is perfect
I adore now her description
Praising is my only option
A simplified expression
Of God-given depression
She must write more poetry
To totally forget all the worry
She must entertain all of us
So that heart won't get puss
She possesses the dexterity
To create poems with ability
She must use it as an outlet
And peace, she must get.
A positive definition of pain
Lot of knowledge, we gain
Our mind turns damn fresh
Toward optimism, we rush
A lovely poetry that inspires
Confidence, mind acquires
I can call this as a beauty
Appreciating is my duty
Keep it up my dear poet
You are great, I now bet.
My dad used to beat us
And he used to scold
We hated his presence
We enjoyed his absence
He made us worry
We were afraid of him
He never talked
But, always mocked
He spoiled our future
He used only criticism
He never left home,
Or denied us things
Food, clothing, shelter
He provided surely
He gave us money
To pursue education
He never ditched us
His behavior was harsh
This poet, I truly pity
As he left for good
I feel damn sorry
But, the poem is fine
What a poetic gift
As he could rhyme
With a lovely skill
And a great meaning!
I am sure the poetess has covered everything
Her poem is simply working like a sprinter
She talks about an ant then soon zooming
To express a mountain with great zest
She has penned a beauty using 12 lines
Very skillfully written piece giving peace
She writes like Wordsworth using nature
And suddenly teaches like that Longfellow
Reading gives great satisfaction to the mind
As God and creatures and nature take part
Brilliant poetry with kind emotional ideas
I salute the poet by surrendering my heart.
A very novel way of remembering native place
The poet has penned a poem finely differently
That in fact gives us a recollection of our own
A continuous poem in a superb free verse
It has sprinkled delicate emotions excellently
Mind is forced to spend some time merrily
By reminiscing the past with great affection
I must give a word of patting for this poet.
After a very long time gap, I read a perfect poem
The rhymes are superbly arranged to please
The topic is common, but it is always pleasant
As mother alone makes every soul arrive here
The poet has expressed only the truth clearly
His ideas will always hold good till world's end
For poem like this only, I search every site
Thank God, a nice poem is at last located.
A golden tribute to this divine feeling called 'love'
The poet has carefully chosen words and placed
He has finely combined rhyme and meaning
One comes to know the value of true love now
Minimum words are used with great talent
And the poet never struggles to explain
He authoritatively narrates love's greatness
I must acknowledge the grace of this poem.
This poem perfectly depicts human psychology
An innocent soul normally deeply loves all
Most of the people after a stage just exploit
They think that you can't live without them
The more and more you adore them kindly
They get a feeling that they are damn great
They are enormously proud of themselves
Ultimately they degrade you senselessly
I am delighted by this brevity immensely
It is teaching true wisdom very eloquently
I admire the poet for his nice contribution
I am educated and improved by this write.
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