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Rated: E | (1.0)
A nice, fair, and polite response indeed but I do not find the form, I think, the form is missing, this methinks should have a format and response might have been filled in but it is a direct response, I do not understand, maybe I am missing something, sorry, I could not relate to the object of this work; I’m in a dilemma in rating this work.
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977
Review of The Open Bottle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
So creative, thoughts nicely expressed, fun retained, humour flashes, who cares moral in making fun, discoveries know no bound, knowing the unknown is human trait; you have shown fun and joy is above everything; I enjoyed the read.
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Review of Aquarius  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good and bad qualities, personality trait and characteristics of the zodiac sign Aquarius are well depicted in rhymes; I liked the positive and negative attributes of the sign; I never know if these are correct or true to believe in astrological influence.
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979
Review of A Poet’s Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A reality approach is evident, poets desire is logical and apparently realistic, they wish to write most profound only if proper thoughts found but in manifestation they find subjects are not clear to them; sometimes, they find their muses are absent or take the flow off; only a few could write what they think to the fullest of their ability; very well expressed vividly; I enjoyed the read
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A realistic view about a brave woman is depicted here in brief, she cannot fight like a warrior or soldier in the field, though; but she continues fighting, someone inspires her to do and encourage her to bear pain, and she cannot win, she is remembered a brave woman for her endeavours; an interesting story; it was a pleasant read.
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981
Review of Epiphany at Dawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
A courageous, appreciable work done; epiphany at dawn witnessed, changes in the environment felt and realized the act; again, experience of feeling and pondering of epiphany bound changes shared; however, poet has enjoyed the changes and beauty relates to epiphany; it is endeavoured well as expressed, I find there is lack of coherence in flow of thoughts; the three parts of the poem do not maintain harmony of thoughts in expression.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This acrostic speaks something more in some interesting aspect in commemoration of WDC’s 18th winning year; this is a nice appreciation of WDC in their services and contribution toward promotion of creative writing world and help bringing talents in writing across the world; well done. 050918 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber Author IconMail Icon


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983
Review of Choosing Happy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You have pinned the right word, clearly and convincingly expressed, everyone wants to live a happy life but it is not so easy, we forget and waste time, because life is what we make it; we cannot remember this in every moment of living, we think after taking action, and suffer the consequence; the lesson for choosing a happy living is well worded in rhymes and reasons in a free flow of thoughts, I liked and enjoyed the read.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
One feels good declaring about his or her wish to go viral on social sites today on this internet age, but you vow not to be a person that everyone does wish, rather you never wish to be a person like that of a picture perfect model; your preference is clear what do not want to be; well said this passive advertisement of personality promotion or projection.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
At last, you asked your star Vega about your marbles, clearly and confidently in the garden, still in the mood of dreamy and madly state of mind; this is well said, I enjoyed the read and the story narrated in a free flow of thoughts.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
So many things to learn, children could be taught interestingly, nicely expressed each animal and creature; it is a very well composed, rhymed, and there is a good flow of thoughts, clearly and naturally worded with good visual portrayal all the way.
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987
Review of Exercise Bike  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Done a good work; it is brief but interesting; your passion for bike helps you; even at room you exercise on your tricycle; I enjoyed the read, the rhymes, the motivation and the exercise; the sixth line of the poem, I think is not so coherent and I find there is a little break of smoothness in expression.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good thought about the male tom, Goober, assumption about him is cherished well as expressed, he is confident of qualifying the ordeal, man sometimes exploits or controls over others, especially pets or animals, as Goober was neutered; we underestimate innocently; this is well exposed, a good lesson taught; I liked.
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989
Review of Saving You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I knew poets are good composers of words, but I find you are a good man indeed, how courteous, you have a great heart, your wisdom sparks in your approach, attitude, words and art of expression, a nice promise, a good beckoning, and a great word of making a relation, in togetherness we all grow, the viewpoint is well exposed; I liked and enjoyed the read, a poem so live and refreshing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Man is free to wish; mostly we all want more out of life and even more of life beyond mortal life; you have softly and simply expressed your wish in good alliterative and rhyme and in a free flow of thoughts; I find the last four lines are not so coherently expressed, and again in the sixth line use of the word ‘all’ is not understood and it reads somewhat odd, I think; otherwise, this is a nice work done.
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991
Review of hour glass  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You have found a loving friend and you wish to grow friendship, you have expressed well, I liked the endeavour; I do not like the last two lines which are not freely flown and clearly expressed, I think the last two lines might be expressed in four to six lines to get the whole a pleasant read; I mean, the last two lines may be broken and expressed in four to six lines.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done this acrostic poem so nicely, positively and confidently, service and opportunities WDC provide are praiseworthy for creative development of minds, all have been invited to join the site and celebrate the birthday; I have enjoyed the originality of approach and art of dedication.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Again you have seen, Nature’s cruelty to animals, a big cat takes away the meal that a mother cheetah brought in for her cubs, but the cubs died, we all are helpless; Nature’s cruelty continues; I have enjoyed the read in rhymes, a free flow of thoughts is evident; thank you for sharing this with reference to your watching TV programs on Animal Planet channel.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well said, God is omniscient; He picks his flower from the perfect bouquet on the right day from the right place; you say goodbye to your special cousin on the special day 4th July; this is a nice work done, there is free flow of thoughts all the way; spiritual thoughts are linked and related.
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Review of Happy?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Sometimes you must speak out to let others know, we understand when we are told about something; well said, you do not wish to see him or her happy but you at the same time wish to be happy and evidently seeing other happy only you can realize how much sad you are, rightly worded.
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Review of It is Dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Feeling of depression at the dark state of environment and in dark state of mind, there is helplessness and one cannot get to achieve the target or sense of happiness remains at far, this is well said, hope brings in a ray of happiness at the finding of light; nice is the sharing of experience.
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997
Review of the barn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a routine activity in a barn (a large building where livestock is sheltered for operating a farm), animals are locked away there, evidently, may be it is their breakfast or lunch time, to serve them food, meat is coming; the view is well described and in a nice link and order; visual portrayal is good enough to follow.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Sad, really I find you suffered a lot; credit goes to you indeed, you managed to escape the facility where you were being experimented on, how inhumane it was, at least I could guess how awkward it had been with you; methinks you are not yet free to write the story. God bless.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It is a good work done using your acronym for the ACROBATICS, it is nice to see you do the required action for bodysurfers but you also do not like repetitions and feel scowling; but I do not find singular use of the letter ‘O’ and ‘Y’ but in words like ‘Bo-dy surfers’ and By-passing; in that way you serve the purpose and practice of acronym.
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Review of Day to Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Nice it is to know when one keeps a positive attitude toward living; truly, life means and begins with struggle for survival; one who is powerful is not always the winner; one who keeps fighting after failure is the real person to deserve for wining; strength to keep going on is most sought for quality we expect; it is a nice work done, inspiring for life.
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