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976
Review of Live  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You express how to live, rather, how we live, and what way we are supposed to live, and for need of living, how we should breathe in, and how our life goes on for living with the basics – receiving, hoping, longing, wishing, loving and more; good thoughts.07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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977
977
Review of Forest Dance  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dance is the matter, dance in Nature, how interesting is the forest dance, who are the participants and how all they enjoy in the movement, flow and sound with rhythms you enjoy describing in rhymes, rhythm and sounds in alphas; nicely synchronized.07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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978
Review of stolen Moments  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The stages of love is well depicted, naturally it began with the interaction, meeting and there after timely engagement passing moments and by degrees it rose higher with hope for growth and maturation and submission, now they praise God for their relations to further bridging of love; I liked the movements and development of love in appreciation.06092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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979
979
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Truly, confidently and passionately, you generalized the viewpoint and stated as well exemplified that passion lies within our heart, and that it influence our expression, activities and keeping activities resonated to others and tries to get man’s wish for self-appreciation; well clarified in a free flow of thoughts; I liked. 06092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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980
Review of MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Unforgettable memories! You now live in memories; your dear and lovable sister is in your memories; you miss her, you continue to love her; the story has a good beginning, sweet flashback, good middle, tragic end; expressively covered the memories. 06092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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981
981
Review of The Last Hello  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Right you are! You raise the question, and you yourself answer, for raising doubt and clarifying it for your satisfaction, the Christmas celebration environment is set in gestural and responsive appreciation also; I like the question you have raised and thrown out to fly in the air as a relative gesture.
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982
982
Review of Sneeze Etiquette  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Good question, raised in the fifth line; etiquette is part of our good manners before others, but you asked a question that relates to yourself, how being a reviewer I can answer you, even if I answer, that’s up to you to accept or reject, methinks, it is good not to respond; but I find the gesture you talk about is not appreciable or I think is not generally practiced by people in general; it remains a part of comedy; anyway, I appreciate your endeavour.
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983
983
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Rated: E | (1.0)
A nice, fair, and polite response indeed but I do not find the form, I think, the form is missing, this methinks should have a format and response might have been filled in but it is a direct response, I do not understand, maybe I am missing something, sorry, I could not relate to the object of this work; I’m in a dilemma in rating this work.
06095018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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984
Review of The Open Bottle  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
So creative, thoughts nicely expressed, fun retained, humour flashes, who cares moral in making fun, discoveries know no bound, knowing the unknown is human trait; you have shown fun and joy is above everything; I enjoyed the read.
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985
Review of Aquarius  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good and bad qualities, personality trait and characteristics of the zodiac sign Aquarius are well depicted in rhymes; I liked the positive and negative attributes of the sign; I never know if these are correct or true to believe in astrological influence.
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986
Review of A Poet’s Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A reality approach is evident, poets desire is logical and apparently realistic, they wish to write most profound only if proper thoughts found but in manifestation they find subjects are not clear to them; sometimes, they find their muses are absent or take the flow off; only a few could write what they think to the fullest of their ability; very well expressed vividly; I enjoyed the read
050918 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber



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987
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A realistic view about a brave woman is depicted here in brief, she cannot fight like a warrior or soldier in the field, though; but she continues fighting, someone inspires her to do and encourage her to bear pain, and she cannot win, she is remembered a brave woman for her endeavours; an interesting story; it was a pleasant read.
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988
988
Review of Epiphany at Dawn  
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
A courageous, appreciable work done; epiphany at dawn witnessed, changes in the environment felt and realized the act; again, experience of feeling and pondering of epiphany bound changes shared; however, poet has enjoyed the changes and beauty relates to epiphany; it is endeavoured well as expressed, I find there is lack of coherence in flow of thoughts; the three parts of the poem do not maintain harmony of thoughts in expression.
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989
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This acrostic speaks something more in some interesting aspect in commemoration of WDC’s 18th winning year; this is a nice appreciation of WDC in their services and contribution toward promotion of creative writing world and help bringing talents in writing across the world; well done. 050918 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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990
Review of Choosing Happy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You have pinned the right word, clearly and convincingly expressed, everyone wants to live a happy life but it is not so easy, we forget and waste time, because life is what we make it; we cannot remember this in every moment of living, we think after taking action, and suffer the consequence; the lesson for choosing a happy living is well worded in rhymes and reasons in a free flow of thoughts, I liked and enjoyed the read.
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991
991
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Rated: E | (4.0)
One feels good declaring about his or her wish to go viral on social sites today on this internet age, but you vow not to be a person that everyone does wish, rather you never wish to be a person like that of a picture perfect model; your preference is clear what do not want to be; well said this passive advertisement of personality promotion or projection.
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992
992
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Rated: E | (4.5)
At last, you asked your star Vega about your marbles, clearly and confidently in the garden, still in the mood of dreamy and madly state of mind; this is well said, I enjoyed the read and the story narrated in a free flow of thoughts.
04092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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993
993
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Rated: E | (5.0)
So many things to learn, children could be taught interestingly, nicely expressed each animal and creature; it is a very well composed, rhymed, and there is a good flow of thoughts, clearly and naturally worded with good visual portrayal all the way.
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994
Review of Exercise Bike  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Done a good work; it is brief but interesting; your passion for bike helps you; even at room you exercise on your tricycle; I enjoyed the read, the rhymes, the motivation and the exercise; the sixth line of the poem, I think is not so coherent and I find there is a little break of smoothness in expression.
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995
995
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good thought about the male tom, Goober, assumption about him is cherished well as expressed, he is confident of qualifying the ordeal, man sometimes exploits or controls over others, especially pets or animals, as Goober was neutered; we underestimate innocently; this is well exposed, a good lesson taught; I liked.
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996
Review of Saving You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I knew poets are good composers of words, but I find you are a good man indeed, how courteous, you have a great heart, your wisdom sparks in your approach, attitude, words and art of expression, a nice promise, a good beckoning, and a great word of making a relation, in togetherness we all grow, the viewpoint is well exposed; I liked and enjoyed the read, a poem so live and refreshing.
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997
997
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Man is free to wish; mostly we all want more out of life and even more of life beyond mortal life; you have softly and simply expressed your wish in good alliterative and rhyme and in a free flow of thoughts; I find the last four lines are not so coherently expressed, and again in the sixth line use of the word ‘all’ is not understood and it reads somewhat odd, I think; otherwise, this is a nice work done.
3/9/2018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber



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998
Review of hour glass  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You have found a loving friend and you wish to grow friendship, you have expressed well, I liked the endeavour; I do not like the last two lines which are not freely flown and clearly expressed, I think the last two lines might be expressed in four to six lines to get the whole a pleasant read; I mean, the last two lines may be broken and expressed in four to six lines.
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999
999
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done this acrostic poem so nicely, positively and confidently, service and opportunities WDC provide are praiseworthy for creative development of minds, all have been invited to join the site and celebrate the birthday; I have enjoyed the originality of approach and art of dedication.
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1000
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Again you have seen, Nature’s cruelty to animals, a big cat takes away the meal that a mother cheetah brought in for her cubs, but the cubs died, we all are helpless; Nature’s cruelty continues; I have enjoyed the read in rhymes, a free flow of thoughts is evident; thank you for sharing this with reference to your watching TV programs on Animal Planet channel.
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