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Review of Each day I wander  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Your view, viewpoint about your friends and others lives is fateful as you have experienced life appears to have been found rather incomplete, you continue gaining wisdom living each day like wandering a life, you think you have nothing to dream, as if you are facing the last phase of living with least chance to make choices for living; a passive but fair point of view of your experience in living; well said. 14092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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952
Review of The Journey  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Learning life, knowing the self, in and along the course of one’s journey, is a daring act, indeed you experience, as you would not like to share a good advice, for you think, reaching destination is more important than giving advice, as you think wisdom is implied by age; that the journey of life is more telling than the destination is yet clearly to be explained though; well said, I enjoyed the free flow of thoughts and rhymes. 14092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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953
Review of Amber Leaves  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The amber yellow leaves of the cottonwood tree flutter and your memories bring you back your grandparents’ ghosts and haunt you today and the memory witnesses you your grandpa’s death; well said; 14092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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954
Review of I Might  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Like fantasy, the little girl keeps thinking and grabbing opportunities, expressed in a nice monologue in couplet, how mind keeps changing, innocently and consciously is exposed, conscious and thoughtful actions in anticipation, and future courses of action thought in possibilities, put in a realistic order, I liked and enjoyed the read. 13092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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955
Review of The Dream Sublime  
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Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
This is a good endeavour, you have tried to express anything and everything and I do not find what exactly you want to mean and express, truly, I do not understand anything clearly and I find there is almost no coherence, rhythm and logic of thoughts; you have good idea but you have expressed yourself inexpressive, sorry, I fail to reach you and your words; I appreciate the effort you have made to offer me something great but I could not either appreciate, understand or get you; it is good that you have mentioned it is your insane work; moreover, I find there is repetition of the same lines. 12092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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956
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a very brisk expression, thought is correct; you have projected most of the areas of our living today, we are trying to destroy this beautiful God’s gifted world; some people are creating new confusions about God’s creation and His roles, responsibilities to human beings; people are fighting for races and religion and destroying everything and trying to give a different meaning to living; right annihilation is unavoidable; we learn very slow or do not like to learn good living and making this world the best place for living; I liked the work. 12092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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957
Review of Higher Places  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You wish to write even more creatively and wish to change thoughts in readers and wish to help them live in higher places in dimensions of living, the real purpose of a writer, you wish not to write anything untoward, you keep, maintain and practice the most wanted quality and purpose of becoming a successful writer; well said, I liked the free flow of thoughts. 12092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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958
Review of Sublime  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Sublimity is not a word as it refers to one’s greatest or highest achievement out of living through dedicated activities in life with morality maintained in humane course of living, that she only hoped and died having been dissatisfied with the earthly living and having experienced immoral and inhumane state of living only, she did not find the positive aspects of living and tried not to live sublime; you have shown she had lived an incomplete living; she is a failure in her life; expressed well. 12092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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959
Review of Spring Break  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Confident approach begins, I find this open with a good positive attitude, though there is a bit of inspiration and warning, you have shared your experience of college and youthful days but such point I think does not contribute considerably to the objective achievement, your warning with playing safe is good enough though, however, realistic approach and pin is not bad to make a mention for teaching; overall, it is a good work done. 11092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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960
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Rated: E | (4.0)
‘Failure is the pillar of success’, the adage, you have expressed in a new dimension ; you show us and to believe that failure is a step for our dream to become a rational belief, I am not sure if it would be a rational belief, but I think, you wish to speak it a belief base upon confidence earned upon learning by experience; you have generalized your viewpoint that you have started believing in a failure’s benefit, this is not rational always and in all cases, it fosters an attitude that we should fail only to get benefit thereafter, a feeling just crops up in mind, here is your viewpoint somewhat inappreciable, I think, you may not agree, but it is just my personal feeling that I get; anyway, overall it is a good endeavour. 11092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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961
Review of Nowhere Somewhere  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nowhere to go, you wish to, you never want to die, you wish to live, even without her, somewhere, but you never know how to, it is something grave that you think to live without her somewhere, it would ever be uncomfortable indeed, but circumstance is not comfortable now, real state and feeling expressed, a broken heart thinks like; heartily expressed; I liked the flow of thoughts. 11092019 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Did you?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Something mysterious, and it happens to or with or before or in or around someone and something, rather, man is mysterious in actions, sometimes and in some cases, we are prone to change, even we do not know why, but not always, as we often take a decision circumstantially or specifically, mind is uncontrollable sometimes, all our actions are not always relative or specific or right or wrong, you have expressed it nicely. 11092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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963
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have composed this poem with a mix of fantasy thoughts in reality, no, it is not metaphysical, anything unexpected is scaring, but you do not believe in so, maybe the unexpected enemy attack you, you are confident, you cannot be defeated, it would be their misfortune, you are ever prepared to fight and never surrender to your unexpected enemies; I enjoyed the thoughts that encourage and inspire; metaphysical use and flavour is appreciable. 11092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Heal  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a good endeavour, nice portrayal of a healing image, but this does not appear real, the relation between repairing and healing a tender heart to call her your bride does not appear either appealing or attractive for the word ‘repair’ does not, as it appears to me, methinks, express coherence to express the tale; wish you good luck in the contest. 10092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Thickening  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
By commitment and deep faith one keeps trying to come out with a safe and secured position, faith is ever wounded, circumstantially and by act of people’s immoral involvement, but one who has dire faith can find a way out at the end with due healing; nice and freely flown thoughts. 09092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Mother's Day  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You have taught us how to celebrate Mother’s Day, why it is important, and why a child should feel it is worth to celebrate; what are the things one should keep in mind is well said, what a mother expect as a token of love from a child; it has a good flow of thoughts and rhymes, I enjoyed the read. 09092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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967
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Fate the new baby carries with her, she born following a stage of abuse, and more in inhuman state, as if unwanted but comes with force and reluctance, to live in the world to use and avail of gifts, services, and resources, but what would be her fate, they should not have born; who is responsible and how? This is nicely worded the thoughts and concern of human existence. 09092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber Rating is not allowed I think.


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968
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Love of nation, patriotism, nationalism and humanity set orderly, trust in God, freedom and right to live and expression well ensured, the country is rich in natural and human resources, prays man to keep words and live humane; oaths to protect and save the nation taken, as swear to continue keeping the nation great ever; well said. 09092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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969
Review of Solitude  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You are now in loneliness, you crave for happiness, heart is restless, you remember and remind your lover of your virgin love, as you ever wish to be his, only and forever love, in solitude you think of and wish a permanent peace; nice lovely thought, lyrical and rhythmic; I liked a lovely words flow in heart. 09092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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970
Review of Hunting Bargains  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have gained losses in many deals previously but now there is gain and profit only, all the loved possessions are on exhibition and for public sale; well said, memories might be lost but deceased possessions would bring in price would entail no loss any further; I enjoyed the read. 07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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971
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Rated: E | (5.0)
By the virtue of onward and upward determination and love at heart we do anything and everything to reach our goal and fulfil all aims as love helps win, rightly the thought expressed in a clear word; I enjoyed the inspirational words. 07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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972
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Love cherishes a long, elongated relationship, mostly it has an eternal state of feeling, there is ups and downs, it continues, memories come up and rekindles the relationship, though it appears her long is gone away long, it is only a thought, old love reminds the state of love with pain; well said. 07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Roots  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The rivulet from the roots grow and move towards, somewhere stand and takes another way to proceed; the theme and flow of thoughts are not clearly expressed and clear for appreciation, this lacks clarity of purpose and coherence. 07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of "THE WELL"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem teaches a good lesson of living, like the well, a well of soul overflows hope, love and peace; activities and performance go with the nature of the things, as well with water overflows water; clear conviction; it was a pleasant read. 07092018 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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975
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a nice story of friendship, your friendship started in your childhood days; you know fate of your friendship; your friend is your soul mate; togetherness is your mark of friendship, even you will be there together in the grave; well done. 07092018Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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