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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good point of view, in the form of a question, with reference to your own death in question, you have explored and pointed out with a series of questions to follow the question so raised, the assumed answer is appreciable on a specific term of reference to your death, though complete answer is somewhat implied, I liked the technical placement and projection, however, morality question is well attended to make a mention to prove how thoughtful is the theme of the poem.



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Like a moral person, it is always nice to follow morality in any profession or occupation like cricket, it is a profession unlike literature; there is no chance of taking risk in practice of bowling in reality when the ultimate goal is winning the game of cricket; but leadership quality is equally important to a bowler, whether the matter is taken literally or not, the truth is appreciable in all cases and activities; fun is fun and nothing more or less; I appreciate the order of expression.



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Review of Tightrope  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You have explained the point, the rule of law in practice, is referred to and mentioned, in this case, but the guilt is not explained well, though you express your anxiety about the use of law upon the guilty person, the state of allegations against the person convicted are not clearly expressed, I think, you are just worried about the practice today, though the authenticity of the case has not been mentioned; it is good to learn that you do not support practice of such rule of law, while the setting is not clear, as such your condemning such immoral practice is already been banned in most countries across the world; I think, without reference to historic implication of the case, it is just a say, I appreciate your noble thought and nice expression in a few words as I praise your humane thought emphasized.



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Review of happiness  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The viewpoint is appreciable, life is change, the truth is well portrayed in this poem; I like the examples and thoughts expressed and it goes on as per law of Nature and rule of creation; supposition that the poet makes is supportable.


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Review of Decaying Beauty  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A true observatory analysis of Nature in action, this poem captures the message of changes, the eternal and inevitable, uplifts the truth of creation, changes, death and beginning, decaying beauty as it appears apparently, is the fruition of law of Nature, well captured , as in decay is born a new domain, the message of changes in Nature; well said.
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Review of a journey  
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Rated: E | (1.5)
I think you have a good idea, and I find you have expressed it in this poem. You have tried to express your idea but I am sorry, I am not sure I understand your point or idea; there is an idea you think, but I do not find it in your poem, I find everything is implied, nothing is expressive and meaningful, as it appears to me, I tried to get into the implied meaning, if any, but I find, there are only words; I do not find anything about a journey as per your title of the poem. I could not make out any relation of the words such as identity, room, energy, white room, full of pain, etc. Maybe it is so intellectually or philosophically written, but I do not find any link between words and thoughts in expression.

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Review of Only You And Me  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I think there is no evolving of relation with God, and there is no changing in relation with God, because relation with God is always the same, for God is mighty, almighty, omnipresent and omnipotent, as I know and believe, and as the Scriptures say; but you have composed this poem with good flow of thoughts about changing in relation with God, I think, you mean to say, the change in your state of living with learning, knowing God more at the base of your faith in God; I find it is a comprehensive work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Right is the order of thought expressed, for any objective achievement in any field or occupation, looking for excel begins with loving life, and performance comes by heart and there is excellence; I liked the poem in rhymes, and enjoyed the read.


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Review of Our Stains  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You have given a true viewpoint about love, in a few words; simply you write love is not always beautiful, life is part of eternal battle also, the whole affairs makes your love; I liked the point of view so expressed.


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Review of E-Mail  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You can cry, as you dare to check your emails, and receive information and benefits, well expressed in this poem, there is no curse, you think and find, even if you feel happy and sometime get some misinformation, all under machine operation, no touch or real presence feeling though, good thought worded, I liked.
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Review of Paradise+ TO  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good plan, a nice wish to spend your holiday, in ice watching children at fun play, and at the sea beach to watch the sunbathers and sit and watch people go by; you wish to live the moments in paradise here on earth; I liked and enjoyed the read.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are positive, pragmatic and wise, you leave dread past, you forget for the time being all your past, now you proceed toward the future, you are hopeful, you find it is the need of the hour and the right time to move; this is a nice work done, it is inspiring and motivating; I liked.


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Rated: E | (4.5)

Thinking, but gravely, something about the model for Dracula, as if there is a love relation, but think you are not going to wed Vlad, no heart breaking, just imaginary thinking; nicely carried the story, plain and simply expressed; I liked the read.


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939
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Eternal truth, of love and wisdom, worded simply, love without grief is utopian, natural and miracle, all to experience; part of the whole could not be escaped; nicely expressed; I liked.

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Review of Transcendental  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The concept of transcendentalism, well-conceived and practiced, explored and expressed in the form chosen, I liked the attitude and aspiration about the world and state of living in appreciation; I enjoyed the read.

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941
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Distant memories do come in mind, come in vision, when one gets space for retirement at the end of the day or when the sun sets or when the larks and cuckoos get tired of the winds or when one retires in silence or tranquility, truly expressed the moments of causing such event at one’s course of living; I liked. 15092018
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Review of A Father to Us  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An ideal, remarkable and morally appreciable father is expected; this work is a dedication to all fathers on glorious Father’s Day; you have set an ideal father at every home, what we all children expect in a father; you have worded a father’s role and responsibilities in social, family and other aspects of human beings; I liked and enjoyed the read. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of FORGIVENESS  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good point and a good question raised and it is about forgiveness, the situation in which the poet mentions imaginary wherein a decision of acting forgiveness has been sought for from the reader is somewhat tricky and answer would obviously vary from person to person; I liked the framing up of the question. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a nice example of good professional and intelligent pleading; innocence of the dog is properly, orderly and convincingly placed and humbly submitted, the Judge would act judiciously and offer his verdict or pronounce his judgment in favour of the innocent dog; it is so expressively presented; I enjoyed the read. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Book of Life  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I would wish to offer my humble suggestion, given in the brackets. Acceptance is up to you. The lines may be changed:
A babies first cry is the spine
(A baby’s first cry is the spine)
Chapter 3.
‘I just ate a bug’.
(Chapter 3)
(I Just Ate A Bug)
Chapter 9;
(Chapter: 9)

‘My first cellphone’.
(My First Cellphone)

Chapter 17;
(Chapter: 17)
‘Society sucks.’
(Society Sucks)

The book cover
(The book cover)
This is a good work done, the book of life is well described, how it may begin and how it ends. I like the idea. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Memories  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good poem; you wish to live in memories you have earned by your pain and you know they came to you through strife, for you have lost her and you will miss her for sure you continue to love her though you have break heart ever; well said; I enjoyed the rhymes. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice poem about strawberry that is pink, tasty and deep, and she dreams and rises from her gentle bed and she eats her jam with lots of bread and makes her ready for the day;
Hereunder is my humble suggestion; the line may be changed:


The only other sound's are the break,
To
The only other sounds is the break,
Or
The only other sound is the break,


The first line is though not clarified or explained; I assume this and that and could not relate who is speaking, if I am not wrong, the first referred person is the same – strawberry, for sure, the poet is not the strawberry; anyway, this is a good work done. 15092018 Scribe Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Each Must Decide  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is a nice story told in this poem; Mortimer lives over two decades inside his valley, Morty lives there satisfied but his mother raises him to be a kindly dragon for she has seen fate; once Morty and his friend want to go on an adventure outside their valley; Morty returns home after having heard bad remarks from humans about dragons; now Morty’s mother asks Mortimer whether they would live with prejudice or not but Mortimer makes a correct choice and continues a contented living; interesting; I liked the story has a good moral but at the end there is a line so confusing and I could not understand who is who: ‘Soon, at his death, he weeps’. (Who is referred to here, who dies and who weeps?);

Typo:
Storoem (for story poem?)

I wish the line may be changed for smoother reading:
and wonder why do they reduce their home to rubble
(and wonder why they reduce their home to rubble).
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Review of Sheet  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You find he loves her with his special set of eyes, others do not have, you believe, so others could not see her as you know she is a black sheet of stars, that is why he could do the miracles, he found her glorious and something, while she is nothing, others say; though eighth, ninth and tenth lines are not so expressive, but you have clarified the point – what a special set of eyes can see; I liked. 14092018 Scribe to Inspire Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of Bonfire  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Winds, as you feel, whisper and blow, as you find and feel, gather around the bonfire you enjoy, as they feel free to dance and sing; this speaks about a relation with reference to human and Nature; I liked the emotional expression; well said. 14092018 Scribe to Inspire Forever Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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