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The theme you have chosen and captured is attractive and somewhat mystic and I find you have amply covered your experimental overview about the land adventurous and explored and expressed the spirit in a righteous order of expression for appreciation.



As I find the title of the poem is generalized but is attractive and the work has a good link, so I write, the title is significant and appropriate in terms of the manipulation of thoughts concentrated upon the essence of the title.



I liked the spirit and curiosity you maintained in the process of discovery and appreciation of the land and your stand of discovery is appreciable in the process.



I find it is appropriate to think and act there in the land to make it a profitable act of appreciation as you have depicted through your decisive stand of experience.



I enjoyed the read, free flow of thoughts all the way, nice taletelling and expressive manifestation for experience.





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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good work done, simply and naturally a decision is an emergence; when there are lots of resources, man has to go for choosing out of the alternatives available in hand.



I liked and enjoyed the read; choice is somewhat not decisive but reluctant decisiveness of going for the choice is right and it is quite natural in the courses.



This work has a good order of expression with a free flow of thoughts. I enjoyed the read.





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Review of Lists  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a nice poem, you have explained the tale, the daily drama, in a melodramatic form, about a strange state of living, something extreme at your level of living in appreciation; I enjoyed the read, the free flow of thoughts all the way, and the imagery and visual portrayal of some key movements and actions.



You have shown us the pathos of living at the instance of daily living as if under the exclusive control of your darling.



You have projected your life is getting under the haunt of lists, or words, or letters and everything gallops and beats your heart and hammer your head putting you before the choices of actions at the mercy of note either written or not and or at the mercy of thoughts carry within your head and put you before making the role of a decision maker of all issues and activities, however important or necessary or trivial of daily activities for survival.



You have put the scenes of your activities for living at the mercy of lists and it is not always soothing or acceptable as man makes mistakes and there is often likely violation of the listed acts leading to some dreadful consequences to lead another series of phenomenal changes in routine activities in addition to professional state of living, sometime acts of which may not be listed in the list or you may not feel the need of making list for the same.



So you have been living a copycat living through actions like actors dictated by the director.



Thus, you have rightly manipulated your thoughts in this poem, feeling based activities, but you ever feel you are incapable of living in terms and tunes or spirit of the lists, for you like other persons wish to live a free and dictation free or listed living.



The fun and state of humour is well projected in the work.



I liked the work and enjoyed the read.





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Review of Closeness of War  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A great treatise I find, to be precise, you have worked out a historic analysis of wars fought in the past since ancient times of civilization.



This free verse has covered most cognizable aspects of wars and simply but logically analyzed the realms and dimensions of wars and to find out a comparison between the wars fought in the past and wars are now being maintained and implemented or projected.



And in addition you have concluded giving a viewpoint about the attitudes and actions that the warmongers and war-sitters or war-planners and war-players of today and tomorrow.



How the attitudes, aspirations, targets and aims have changed over time since ancient time and how wars have been a need based actions to dire need to take actions for power and then from objective of receiving justice to power and possessions.



You have covered other finer aspects of wars fought, changes in use of tools and techniques, changes in parameters of war using tools and strategies, and again changes in types of alternative tools and use of man and machine, and further change in machine based operation to accessible tools of modern devices for use in war far from the battlefields.



Again, very simply and naturally, in this free verse, you have shown how wars are becoming from display of political power and strength to developed machine use of mechanics of modern science and technology capitalized for displaying political power to technological power in violation of diplomatic laws and rules and regulations.



In conclusion, you have advised how the wars should be fought and not played and how wars should be wars and not like closeness to war simply to make wars a war in term and not in practice.



I liked the work and learnt a lot about the science of war.





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Rated: E | (4.5)
As far as my knowledge goes, I do never believe in myself a wise man, as a speaker, you wish to prove yourself a philosopher, as it is evident from your words, maybe yours is a given stand of advice, I mean a piece of advice, being a WDC’er (following you) and a reviewer, I think so (so far my knowledge permits me to write this), you have written the truth, I mean something eternal, to speak it otherwise, if not exactly, of course, change is permanent, change is inevitable, change is the truth, change is bound to happen, change is the rule, change is the first law, though it is unwritten law, say, law of Nature, right you are, as again, you have written, (in life, no matter the situation, this too shall pass….), again this is true, time is eternal, time flows, time and tide wait for none, time has to flow, move, go or pass on.



Albert Einstein’s word is rightly and correctly quoted, again, as you have quoted another word from Shakespeare in Hamlet.



Einstein’s words tell that we should not evaluate human intelligence so cheap, but we should take proper care and consider pros and cons and making our base and postulation correctly to come to a deduction.



Polonius is a sententious father of Ophelia and Laertes, I mean, the Lord Chamberlain of Claudius’s court, a pompous, conniving old man, as we know, you have again rightly quoted, as another example of your piece of advice for assumption and appreciation.



Shakespeare’s advice is about living, what man should accept and what should not and what he should do and what he should not.




Your stand is appreciable; I like and enjoyed the read.





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Review of Alive  
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What a relief! You feel again you are alive; nicely expressed, softly and symphonically stated, and I find the poem speaks so naturally, I can relate to the feeling, but not to that extent as you felt.



You have celebrated the joy of feeling life again, as if afresh, alive, after the spell of depression, as you felt the period of depression was over, as you experienced the cool clean rain gave your spirit joy and you felt again felt the rain cleansed you of the grayness and your feeling of grayness was over, what a relief! You managed to express yourself freely and naturally.



All it happened to you, just after the splash of rain that cleansed you, you got back a fresh state of aliveness, your feeling is well versed, as it appears natural, after the read.



It was a pleasant read.





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Rated: E | (5.0)
Obviously, the adage does not go so cheap; the phrase has some truth, there is always benefit of doubt and we sometime take drastic or dire decision at the instance of benefit of doubt,



Truly, whatever we see with our own eyes may not be true, and something that we cannot see instantly in action or movement or in activity something that is true and may be there in existence.



Whatever we see is happening around us, as it is truly happening in its own cause and we may not see or find it fully or sometime partially, when we come to the realm of benefit of doubt.



Rightly stated, there is no fun in disbelieving or believing a blind person or a good person, when truth has to come out and find out or discover, we take the help of assumption and go for the catch of benefit of doubt.



I liked the poem and enjoyed the read; it has a nice flow of thought and reasoning.






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Review of Worth a read !  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Fantastic! This is a very interesting story. You have described it simply and expressively.



I liked the story, how simply God has created human after creating dog, monkey and cow and how logically God has given man the span of life divided in first twenty years and next forty years next ten years and last ten years with total eighty years of life span given to man giving man specific jobs to do and make living accordingly.



This story has a very simple formula of creation by God in terms of giving each creation with the asked period of living to live in a life.



Interestingly, God has fulfilled all the wishes made by the animals and man and this part of the story is simple and logical. God’s role as Father and Creator is expressed in a natural voice.



I enjoyed the read.





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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a good poem, as usual, you have maintained a good flow of thoughts, all the way, in taletelling the fact you wished to share.



Interestingly enough, I found once in the beginning you condemned the book of a philosopher, and later you as a philosopher suggested, advised and warned something else, rather you have recommended the book and you did all these simply to make the philosophers understood and see things as your idea of truth.



After the read, I have fostered a stand of doubt and confusion, and I think I need your help and clarifications about the purpose you wish to fulfil by giving the readers warning, etc.



Though you have mentioned your intention of doing an act by the readers as per advice or suggestion, stating that you wish the book be used for conveying readers fulfilling the idea of truth, but what is that, I mean what is all about the truth you refer to, I have a point of clarification about the same.



Anyway, this is a good work done, as the story has fictional aspect you have worded in this poem.



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A Prophets Warning
(A Prophet’s Warning)
The same words you have used in the poem four times, you need to edit four times at four different places in the poem



Well done this work in tune with your thoughts.





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Review of Stiks on the Web  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Funny, somewhat interesting though, rather I find it is a bit humorous with a little irony in approach, since there is childlike innocence in decision making upon the experience you got.



This is a good story has catch in the beginning, I liked. You have presented the story humorously with a fact drawn from reality that you experienced.



I am a bit more curious about the word that you have created, it is really funny – Stik; I did not find the word in dictionaries, but happily I got the following acronyms with definitions:



Acronym
STIK
Definition: STIS Thermal Interface Kit



Acronym:
STIK

Definition: Stop the Teen Intoxication Kick



Since, I find the very word ‘Stik’ is there in your handle and you must be using it for years, I cannot ask your clarifications or explanations shamefully.



I find even the acronyms are interesting, and some other persons may use it as they wish.



I like using such uncommon words having acronyms in use on this world.



However, the adventures of a Stik Figure cruising the internet is something interesting to experience and incurring huge loss at the result of the event (it might be called an accident, since it relates to a machine).



You experienced irreparable losses at the adventure.



I liked the work.



I do not find any valid reason of giving poor rating for this work. It may be a work of comedy, if I am not wrong to find out the genre of this work.






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Review of The Masterpiece  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic is the title of this work of non-fiction; I find the title is appropriate and significant. I enjoyed the humour subtly exposed in this work.



This has a good story and storyline appears realistic and drawn from your personal experience from your real life situation.



The theme is nice and there is a good flow of thoughts all the way with a catchy beginning and good middle and curious ending.



I enjoyed the read and the humour part of the taletelling.



You tried hard for writing your masterpiece but you could not and found your tools dusted and you failed to start your masterpiece you wished to write.



So you opted for magical happening and prayed to Word Fairy for the help in writing your masterpiece by getting intelligence for writing and tools for writing and this process goes on.



You have highlighted the truths, and the wishes the prospective writers carry with them, mostly such writers being emotional think enormously, plan highly but do not start writing actually and keep dreaming and wishing for miracles to happen with them and they could produce their masterpieces, but reality speaks something else, that you have exposed naturally and expressively, I liked and enjoyed the read.



I can relate the theme and I enjoyed the humour aspect of life between making wishes and accomplishing anything.



There are good examples as I find them expressed naturally, originally, and practically, so I have no hesitation to write that you have expressed the willy-nilly or wishful desires and wishes writers keep and keep just dreaming without taking action for performance accomplishment.


Well done.





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Review of Somewhere To Go  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I was hooked by the title of the poem – Somewhere To Go. The title gives me a carefree feeling and I think I can expect something interesting about your living, goal and aim of living, and in general, as you ever like to evaluate your state and stand of living, naturally at every poem. And here in this poem you say you do not belong to one of your choice and creation; very interesting indeed.



Interestingly enough, you have never been to an island but you think the island in the deepest of the sea is unprotected; a thought has adventurous fantasy to mention. Though you know there are some people as they believe the island is there but in a troubled mind of yours, you dared to create the island there, the fruition of your fantasy thought.



You have found people there, on the island, in the deepest sea, and people there are wise and you wish to ask those wise people the questions of your choice. But you think, they would not be able to answer and you would never wait for the same. You would lead the island within your power.



It is the place of concern, when you will think somewhere to go, and on the island, you think, you would live freely and create everything you will need.



Being on that island, you will find yourself free.



I liked the thought and your decision indifferently to go somewhere and your fantasy is appreciable in terms of living but it is something that is beyond reality.



The fantasy and adventure part is interesting and you have maintained a good flow of thoughts, I enjoyed the concept of fantasy in real life.



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Rated: E | (4.5)
You have very nicely drawn a picture about how it is raining in your garden.


You hear the sweet and melodious sound of raining, and how slowly, you find and enjoy, the flowers are closing their buds tight, and how they in their beds are drenching and softly they are quenching their thirst.


And now the rainbow comes out with smiling colours and it makes a delightful, wonderful and colourful view in the garden.


You have painted the scene in words, so explicitly and naturally.


I liked and enjoyed the read.





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Review of A Kiss For You  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem speaks a nice tribute to your friend’s friend, and you pay your gratitude to him and you think but for whom you could never have been whole.



I liked the poem and its free flow of thoughts and enjoyed the alliterative and echoing effect.



It was a pleasant read.





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Review of Discarded  
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Fantastic imagination, you have shown how a creative mind finds its way to add to imagination upon watching and finding the things for inspiration and make a story upon the things before eyes or there somewhere afar.


You have tried to show how a writer is inspired for writing and make a story and make a way to go for producing stories out of imagination upon observed things.


Through the order of imagination, a writer gets inspiration for thought and then he goes for making a story to present by making a world of readers or listeners to tell or write or express his thoughts in the form of stories.


This is a good work endeavoured; I enjoyed the intricate process of creation and thoughtful making for contribution of thoughts in and as stories.





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Review of Say Something  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You still want to know and keep waiting for Lord’s answer how Lord Feels about you and that is why you wait for Lord’s answer even after the incident happened years ago when you saw a little bird on the branch of a tree and thought of the bird your Lord.


You continue asking for His feeling about you and waiting for the words even today, since you can never forget the bird and the event.


This is a good work done; this speaks your faith in Lord and Lord’s response about your state and status.


I enjoyed the read.





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Review of Dark and Light  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You feel safe at last, but when she keeps dark back, and it is pleasant to feel as you feel more comfortable in dark than being in light, as she held you tighter and prevented light to come, sense of feeling safe is more in dark as darkness tries to get drag you back to the dark, and you get to feel free at last.



This is a nice description of feeling in making and keeping a relation in darkness and warmth.



This tells when there is acceptance, there is freedom and sense of satisfaction as fearsome feeling goes off.



I liked the feeling and sentiment expressed in a natural order of words in a realistic mode of presentation.



I enjoyed the read.





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Review of Valet Limerick  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Interestingly enough, you have spoken about a tale of a girl ; she has some peculiar habits and passion for coffee and she normally does get her tips in ten dollar chips and she loves paying her cappuccino and that is the reason she parks her cars at a casino for she wishes to win and leaves for home fast.


I have enjoyed this limerick and the funny tale of her car parking.




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Review of Live Love Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good message you have sent to all; interestingly enough, the message appears important and true for appreciation of living in meaningful appreciation of living quite easily and conveniently.



That life is meant for living in and with love in every sphere and course of living and if there is no burning of life ever and the living in love makes life fearless and full of light and progressive in all terms of living naturally.



I liked the poem has a free flow of thoughts.




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Review of Poets  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thoughts on poets, words about poets’ thoughts, scribes on to poets’ nature of thoughtful expression, and words about and upon poets’ alphas about honest and truthful expression of naked portion of experiences of living sharing with people in appreciation of living.



And it is stated, rather claimed as true, that poets are the true tellers of harsh and sweetest truths of living and honestly speaking, poets’ words of honesty flow so fluent and naturally to go deep, deeper and deepest into our own lives.



Well said; I enjoyed the read.





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Review of Haley’s Comet  
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At the childhood day, once you got an opportunity to see the Hailey’s Comet but when you had no knowledge about the comet and could not enjoy much watching the same in the sky; long thereafter you studied about it and came to know another comet to be seen only after seventy five years therefrom, when you may not be there to see, by then most of your days will have spent but unlike the solitary and isolated and frustrated living since those childhood days.



In this poem, you have nicely shared the moment from childhood memories.



I enjoyed the read.




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Review of Glad To See You  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Engagement is kept, so nice it is to keep it for growing a relation, meeting is over, and everything done following the meeting and extreme moments shared, and now the term of sharing a promise to meet again, so the speaker speaks if he gets an opportunity once more, he will definitely make a meeting again, and he will be glad to see and meet the person but that does not mean again they will have to proceed further and that means he gives a word to meet but there is no guarantee to proceed thereafter.



It is a good story of hope and aspiration making one to keep waiting for an opportunity and one for a meeting; well said; I liked the words on term for keeping a relation under hope.



I enjoyed the read.




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OMG! What a thought! It is no riddle, indeed. This is nothing illogical, irrational, and unjustifiable or making anyone proves wrong or fool. It is no non-sense.



Idea of time is overdone or gone too far.



When it is the case, the effect is rightly stated.



Performer is confident of action further, for time is limitless, for a certain assignment or action, we are given a limitation that is time, period of moments.



I think, it is a right statement and it explains the right status and right event for appreciation.



I liked the words, response or words of direction, though it is too brief.




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Review of Gentle Hands  
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O sure! I find you leave a message. Some keep good notion about self- stand of love and care. Some carry on poor concept about other’s help and stand of behaviour, and attitude and aptitude.



This is a good work. This teaches changing in attitude.



The person found strength to love again is not for his own strength or vigour or attitude but at the attitude, help and offering example of behaviour that is lending gentle hands of other person that helped the person to take initiative to love again, so inspiration came from other person and not at the person’s own initiative automatically or naturally or as per his own initiative to love again.



The person had wrong notion about self-spirit or self-power to go for loving someone again, it was possible at the instance of lending gentle hands of other person.



I think this is a good work that teaches the persons who are proud of their own decisions always in such a case of love, or loving someone again.



The message is: love begets love; love helps to love; love helps to love; love is lovable; love is lovely; love inspires love.



I have enjoyed the read.





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Review of My notion  
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You are good to think at; you have a nice style of thinking; it is good thing to think more, even more for developing rich idea, but it is equally important that we should take care in expression.


You keep a good notion, but I find you have to take a little more care in expression of your thoughts in words.



I would like to offer my suggestion, personal opinion, acceptance or rejection of the same is fully your choice, mostly my suggestions are in term of expression, to help make better expression only, and I cannot prescribe you change in your thoughts:


My suggestions are given in the brackets, about the expression.



Autumn is a suitable season for philosophy. (This statement is not correct, I do not understand it.)


Human's mortality is ruled by other people. (This statement is not acceptable as correct.)


For example, people die because their blood vessel is blocked by fat. (This is not a correct postulation.)


This is caused by his or her habit to eat fatty food. However, who made him or her like such unhealthy food? (The approach of writing is not right.)


It is a restaurant or media which forced his or her to dash poison, then, consequently led his or her death. (This is not completely acceptable statement.)


In other words, society provides not only bless but also a curse, and these factor works us sometimes good but sometimes bad. (This is a statement that is not accurate.)


As log (for long) as we live in society, only we could do is to select or choice.


Then selecting and choosing leads people to (for too) far away. In other words, our live (for life) is made by only choices.


Even if how someone seems unique, it is a result of their decision to mimic some example.(This is not a true statement.)


No one could make original thing. We are just an imitation of people in the past. (Both the statements are not right or correct.)


No matter how we feel we could think of genuine idea, it is a combination of memories. (The concept is not right to be accepted.)


Usually, Woman wear skirts, man has short hair, they may say that they do so just because they like it, however, they just doing (for do) so (The statement is not appreciably correct.)


because someone provide such selections for them. (part of this sentence do not express the idea correctly.)


Who is "someone"? (this is not understood) that is such a parents or teacher or friends, in a sense, those who are imitating past. (This is completely a wrongly interpreted sentence and not correctly expressed; (….. such as a parent, teacher or a friend) (rest of the sentence is not correctly projected.)


I think the whole work needs edit work.


It is good if you rewrite it and post it after written afresh.





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