Oh life! The title of the poem is true, catchy and significant.
You have done the poem so nicely, truly, naturally and really.
I have enjoyed the theme, the concept, the matter and fact of the work righteously (because, in life, there is always the matter of sin comes with the opposite).
Man keeps trying, try whatsoever, hard or harder, deep or deeper, light or lighter, even for the sake of saying or thinking, we can even try our best, as we think or love to think we do our best, the result or effect, fruition or end is fixed, because it is the truth, we cannot say or think, this is the last or this is the end of this, or we cannot say, this is life, and life ends here, or this is life truly cent percent, because we cannot show, place, keep, mark, say, or speak it is life.
So you have rightly stated, it is our constant futile strives to get life, and you have amply explained and exemplified the matter in the poem so simply and naturally.
We keep trying to get life, reach life, catch life, feel life, express life or measure life, but we cannot, because it is next to impossible, it is not something that we can measure, count, quantify, point out or say life is this from here to there or from this point to that point or from this time to that or from this age to age or from this state to that, and the like.
As you have explained the matter rightly, I liked and enjoyed the read.
Scribe On!
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