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Rated: E | (5.0)
A hearty tribute! Paul, a great neighbour! An unusual human being!



This is an excellent poem, nicely composed; it is so simply, explicitly and modestly produced; unusual persona of Paul, poet’s friend and neighbour is exalted graciously.



Paul was one eyed; he had no legs, but he saw the world, life, things and people and travelled more than anyone or the poet,



He ever smiled and sat on a wheel chair; he lived wiser and better than any common man, he never thought himself and behaved like an amputated or handicapped person, all over his life; he was really a magical person in the neighbours.



This poem speaks amply and fairly about the great person.



I liked and enjoyed the read.





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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Santa no more! Santa RIP! Here lies Santa Claus!



This poem gives news about Santa Claus; this states in clear term today’s status of Santa Claus.



Poet now witnesses beside Santa Claus Lane our Santa Claus lies; only the children cry for Santa was slain.



Now we all know today’s status of being our Santa Claus.



This is well said; well done.





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Review of My Love For You  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Love for your girlfriend! Love analysis! Love eternity!



You have described your state and stand of love for and upon your girlfriend in a safe mode, and further stated your stand of love in your girlfriend’s point of view.



Your base, stand and status of love is well founded and expressed in true term of reference of love in appreciation.



Your passion for love and dependency is righteously explored and expressed in evaluative term of understanding and appreciation of love in general.



You have described the causal state of your love for your girlfriend is orderly expressed.



You wish your love to embrace continuity and go for eternal spirit with your soulful love.



You have done a nice job.



I liked the work and enjoyed the read.





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Review of Meditative Ohm  
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Right or righteous! Minutely or perfectly! Authentic or authoritative!



Indeed, I find this is a nice, commendable work of prayer in poem in the form of Triolet, and I liked the work and enjoyed the read.



There is true application, codified unification of thoughts make prayer a real state in connotative and etymological usage.



The order of prayer is so live and meaningful in appreciation and understanding.



Just the word prayer is put in its pyramidal or monumental importance and verbatim effect of practice for manifestation in life for effect and purpose fulfillment or achievement.



This work meets all the requirements in a right perspective of prayer as a word for action in appreciation.



I enjoyed the read.





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Rated: E | (5.0)
This alphabetical list of links to useful stuffs is really a good source of information on and about writing, art and style of writing, use of words, common writing mistakes, writing plots, writing characters and many other aspects of creative, innovative writing and production and marketing of writing that authors would find helpful.



I find importance of each stuff link as listed.



I have enjoyed the read.





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Review of See That Light  
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Fine! Spiritual! Inspirational!



This is the most expressive and best of your poems so far read and reviewed.
I liked and enjoyed the read, all the way, free flow of thoughts, and find it is so inspirational, truly packed with thoughtful, righteous, appreciative words of faith in God and true appreciation of God and His control of our state of righteous living.



That there is light inside, in our soul, beyond our heart and head, as we born with the light in the soul, only we have to discover and work for living our life in the light that God gifts with us.



But simply knowing is not enough, we must feel and see the light that God has gifted us, and we can live righteously once we have discovered the light within our souls.



My favourite lines:
He
Will call you child
You
Will call him father
See
That light
That one inside
Deeper still
Behind your heart
Beyond your mind
At the core
Of your bones
Deeper



And God will lead us from the darkness, if and when we find and feel there is darkness in our lives and we feel sorry for our living, since God is there ever ready to lead us as and when we wish and want, and glow the light to take into the course of our living to give us our righteous web of living.



My favourite lines:
God will lead us
From the darkness
But only if
And when
We
Decide to be led…



Very rightly, expressively and orderly worded, I liked and enjoyed the read, top to bottom and I feel inspired with the appreciation of God.



Thank you for sharing this great poem.





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Review of Don't Fear  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an inspirational poem; indeed, I find the glow and the spirit, nothing to concern and fear, just fight the urge and to be you of whatever you are.



My favourite lines:
Don’t fear
Have no concern
Not a one
Fight the urge
To be yourself



No question of doubt, no chance of fear, let them fear and doubt, you are supposed to be righteous and loud, again the sources of inspiration all the way to fight and stand.



On the way to living your own way, be daring and courageous, bold and confident, and leave those are weak and doubtful or fearful in their walk, have no sympathy and mercy to and for them.



My favourite lines:
Have no sympathy
Offer no mercy
Be as crude as required
Punish the weak



There are two types of people, those who are afraid and who are not, stand fearless and proceed, make your way to advance, stand for something you wish to get or have and fight a good fight.



My favourite lines:
Of two types of people
Fight a good fight



Proceed for objective achievement, avoid those who fear and doubt, better kick them in the teeth and never go for the second place, achieve and grab the first position, give your life the chance of becoming first in the race of living.



My favourite lines:
Surprise those who doubt
Kick them in the teeth
Give your life
A life



Just show them all what you can do and never fear, there is no reason to feel scared or never fear, make objective clear, make fearful people to hear how you make things go for you and live a fearless living.



My favourite lines:
Show them all
Even if they refuse
Make them see



I enjoyed the read, all the way, the free flow of thoughts, and the message.



Though somewhere I find your fearless attitude appears somewhat so drastic that you are not ready to consider any other person in the race, particularly who are fearful and you wish to teach them badly for you wish to get success at all costs in the name of fearless actions.



Though, I enjoyed the read, the spirit if not the attitude, all the way.




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Review of Ocean's Waves.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic! Grossly romantic! Heavenly feeling! Finer than dream!



I enjoyed the read, it is much more than romantic, somewhat heavenly to feel and find the ecstatic beauty overflows in words about the dreamful meet and sharing moments with the dreamy woman, feelings galore larger enjoying than ecstatic and thrilling, wider than waves, extensive than ocean.



Though I do not like the title of the poem is not so appropriate and significant in terms of the poetic concern of the facts and feelings overthrown in reality along with the read of the imagery and visual portrayal of the words in the poem.



The title should have been catchier than the poem, I think.



However, I enjoyed the read; all the way, the taletelling is larger than reality, more interesting than a dream, more colourful than a dreamy woman, the free flow of thoughts, reserved and wonderful word usage.



The scene, the atmosphere, the environment, the surrounding the sea beach, characters of air, ocean, waves, beauty of ocean and the wonderful woman, all make the work to give a dramatic appeal, enjoyable in the read.



Besides, I also enjoyed the introduction of realistic thought of sin, gods in the thoughts, ethics in appreciation of beauty in the read.



And I enjoyed the dramatic projection of the dreamy woman in the work with monologue effect and in metaphorical emancipation in background, effect in feelings and thoughts as exposed with a dramatic appeal of the characters in presentation.



A spiritual flash flavour and mix in the work in projection of dreamful appreciation of the event is commendable.



Very well done, indeed, it is a work having essence of commendable mention, I think.





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Review of Overnight  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
There is a good story, in a few words, in rhymes, adventure walk in the woods, in hope for finding a place for camp, and how to get all lost and found, as expressed in a free flow of thoughts, I find this work an interesting read.



I enjoyed the taletelling, in a setting of space and speed, time and adventure, experience of enjoyment and halt about a night spent in the woods, all make it a nice work written in memory of a person.



Well done.





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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
What a wish! Poetic! Indeed, for the Zombie Horde, this ‘One Star’ rating wishes!



It was a scaring pleasant fantastic read.



Interesting enough to know Zombies love the fast food treats, poet is serious, she talks about the Olympic athletes, I also see, as I find they are here, yes, they are ‘Mascot’, Wenlock, and all are scouting around.



We are talking about the royal city of England, yeah, I find him, and know, all the athletes, I mean, the Zombies, noiseless or mute, they are soon to attack.



Just, wait a minute, and see, how glorious event is going to take place, indeed, as per the rule, the Olympic torch will light, now is the time, right and joyous moment come here, wait and see, get to enjoy, how all are about to race eating fast food.



Nice, sporting and eating, speed and enjoyment, competitive spirit and challenge for win and lose, shouting and eating, all make it a nice state of event.



I enjoyed the read.





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Review of One Mile Run  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
ONE MILE RUN – this acrostic poem, a nice work, each line of which reads direction and depiction of the sporting event, speaks about an Olympic event of a former Olympic participant.



I enjoyed clear expression of the event in steps.



I liked the event expressed in a limited use of alphabets and words.




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Review of Olympiad  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Obviously simple, naturally spoken, nicely expressed, a Rondelet poem, I liked and enjoyed the read.



The motives, objectives, targets, aims and goals of the athletes and coaches and expectations of the fans, all stated in a place, as all state what makes Olympic Games.



Well done.




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Review of Fear  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This acrostic poem about fear is an easy read; you have expressed how freaky or capricious noises in the midnight sometimes send cold chills up your spine and you get the feeling of fright, as you feel so, and you find no reason or logic to follow the threat though you feel the state of fearsome flow of noise are not acute to embarrass you instantly but you feel the effect of becoming scared at such strange, unusual or mystic sound at night.



I liked and enjoyed the read.






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Review of Mirror Mirror  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Fantastic! You have done a nice job. I liked this poem, you have personified your role clearly and convincingly, being a mirror you have spoken the tale honestly and interestingly;



I have enjoyed the read, the free flow of thoughts, fine and natural progression of the theme, clarifying your role and narrating the persona of the Queen and all about her life, highlighting your role and status in the world of the Queen and explaining the causal effect and end of the story.



I enjoyed the art of narration in a nice diction and soft voice of taletelling.



The moral message of the story is well envisaged.



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while her wickedness drove her to break a mans will
(while her wickedness drove her to break a man’s will)



Edit:
but the greatest tragedy i've yet to expose
(but the greatest tragedy I've yet to expose)



Edit:
when i live in a satelite all alone
(when I live in a satelite all alone)



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but i have been betraying her Majesty
(but I have been betraying her Majesty)



Edit:
i wish to know who is the one
(I wish to know who the one is)



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know that i am not but a mirror
(know that I am not but a mirror)



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because i think that i have won
(because I think that I have won)



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and they say i lived in darkness my whole life
(and they say I lived in darkness my whole life)



Edit:
but i say its all a lie
(but i say it’s all a lie)



I think after the edit, though minor, it would make the read clear.






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Review of Shroud  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is like a monologue speaks about the person who is now under the shroud is the man who stole, as the poet now remembers, as and when the man was put under a shroud, how the man now could return the dark life of a person for life cannot be returned or transferred or changed after death; I think, the theme of the poem could be like this, and if it is metaphorically expressed, it might be something else; anyway, I could only appreciate the poem this much, and liked the read.


Thank you for sharing.


I need further clarification, if necessary. And I shall appreciate a word about clarification of my point of quest.





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Review of Voices  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a nice poem, quatrain in form, with rhymes, in 12 lines, composed keeping the prompt well maintained.



I liked this work; it is innovative, creative and thoughtful.



It states a philosophical concept about voice of human mind. This describes human mind has two voices, one is the voice of self or traitor of our reality and the other voice tells man can mirror God’s light that through our prayer and action our polished mirror shines bright.



But oftentimes some men doubt voice and act fearfully and avoid getting real achievement and success in course of living, inviting failures and losses by listening to the traitor’s voice in the course of living avoiding or winking of or keeping aside a good and polished voice.



I liked and enjoyed the philosophical presentation of facts and learnt a good message as it is a message that inspires us to act wisely by raising faith in God and believing in morality and ethics and acting upon faithfully we can achieve success as we desire.



It was a pleasant and inspirational read.



Thank you for sharing.





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Review of My One and Only  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Melodious! Symphonic and meaningful son it has been! Echoing and symphony of words have been used lyrically.



There is a good metrical composition and now it is a good work of song, there is much lyrical words and rhythmic words, and now it is a good song for composition; only a good composer and music director and a good singer can make it a popular song, I think.



I liked this and enjoyed the read, the rhymes of words, the composition of lyric is now nice and worthy for production of a song.



Thank you for sharing.





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Review of Thank a Tree!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic! You have done a nice work; I liked the read of the poem; I enjoyed the message you have given through this free verse with rhymes.



You have reminded us the many orders of benefits and services provided by trees and how many items of products we make using trees.



Approach and rhythms of expression opening dimensional services we get from trees are nice to learn and appreciate.



Again, you have reminded us the Arbor Day is celebrated around the world on 27th April every year in order to take care of trees around us.



That lives are impossible without trees; in steps and courses of our living, we enjoy the benefits of trees. In a word, trees gift us lives and we cannot forget use and importance of trees in our lives.



Well said and well done.





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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic! Fine, fabulous but formal is the poem in formatted Quatrain.



I liked the poem and enjoyed the read. The concept is fantastically formulated and fantastically worded.



The fantasy is fabulously formed and formatted in fine words; I enjoyed the word imagery and visual portrayal of wishes of the poets and the beggars.



I liked the lines:
Writing their odes in elegant script,
Love's honey-sweet words they'd encrypt.



I appreciate the concept of giving wishes for manifestation of thoughts, words, writing and creation speed and recognition with enjoyment and services or contribution through use of horse as wish.



I found the flow of thoughts appropriate, smooth and free at par with the conceptual progression.



It was a pleasant read.




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Rated: E | (4.5)
Right you are! This is well said. Nice is the poem. I liked and enjoyed the read. The tale is written truthfully. The order of expression is simple but true in order of exposition.



The title is appropriate and significant. The theme is well described in the poem.



People try to hide, or suppress truth, but truth comes out at the end, on digging we can find out the truth, evidently and naturally.



We try to disdain truth, but the result is evident, truth reveals for lies cannot surpass or overrun truth.



It is futile, lies have no power to hide truth, forget about disdained truth, once one can cover disdained truth but it comes out with its order of acceptance and appreciation.



Very well said, exemplified and narrated; I liked the read.



Edit:
Even though it's not what i want
(Even though it is not what I want)


Edit:
I know its the disdained truth
(I know it is the disdained truth)



Thank you for sharing.





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Review of Oh Life!  
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Oh life! The title of the poem is true, catchy and significant.


You have done the poem so nicely, truly, naturally and really.


I have enjoyed the theme, the concept, the matter and fact of the work righteously (because, in life, there is always the matter of sin comes with the opposite).



Man keeps trying, try whatsoever, hard or harder, deep or deeper, light or lighter, even for the sake of saying or thinking, we can even try our best, as we think or love to think we do our best, the result or effect, fruition or end is fixed, because it is the truth, we cannot say or think, this is the last or this is the end of this, or we cannot say, this is life, and life ends here, or this is life truly cent percent, because we cannot show, place, keep, mark, say, or speak it is life.



So you have rightly stated, it is our constant futile strives to get life, and you have amply explained and exemplified the matter in the poem so simply and naturally.



We keep trying to get life, reach life, catch life, feel life, express life or measure life, but we cannot, because it is next to impossible, it is not something that we can measure, count, quantify, point out or say life is this from here to there or from this point to that point or from this time to that or from this age to age or from this state to that, and the like.



As you have explained the matter rightly, I liked and enjoyed the read.





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Review of Hate Causing  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
How hate makes a way to begin death is the hub of this poem, and you have very nicely thought of and expressed the process and produced a tale of causing and beginning death as a fruition of hate.



The process goes on slowly in the series, so many marks and signs become evident and there is a beginning and middle and an end in the process that you have tried to show and expressed in the work.



I liked and enjoyed the read; the process is well expressed as I enjoyed the imagery and visual portrayal of the thoughts to convey the message by degrees.





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Review of Her  
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It is true; you have expressed the state of experience truthfully.



Everything cannot be proved, as some truths cannot be proved with supportive evidence. Something has to be felt, realized and believed.



Your tale is true because it is to be felt and realized. Mind is not always prepared to believe in everything, always or ever or every time, despite supportive feeling stands.



A voice from the past tells you to try harder for discovering the truth, and it is not an easy thing or task to act or do as required.



Right is the word, right is the response, right is the state of appreciation, right is the remark, and right is the voice, you are more than darkness, that is the truth, that is the fact, so is the experience, as you have worded and as you have expressed it here.



I liked the work expressed in a philosophical tune for appreciation and science fails to make any sound of judgment to prove the validity of the statement.



The matter of realization and appreciation of feeling is beyond the order of science and logic or reasoning, it is beyond the arena of fallacy, it is faith, it is belief, it is knowledge, it is the chore of wisdom supportive of the factual appreciation beyond expression in words.



I liked and enjoyed the work and the theme expressed rightly.



The matter of existence, the fact about existence, the order of facts about the past, and the facts of memories and the facts to think of memories is well expressed.



I enjoyed the read.





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Review of Regrets  
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Regret begets regret. Sorrow begets sorrow. Happiness brings happiness. When you regret, you think of regret and feel or express sorrow for; it is human instinct.



While regretting dumb decisions, you could think of her state, and you could try to think of and feel for her cause of regret , and it is evident, as you have seen her, that she looked down at her tethered hands, as she had to regret and naturally all she found in them was regret, and you could notice, see, feel and think of the same state of her.



In a world of regret, we also find or think of others in regret, we are affected with the environment in which we are found or we live in or we remain for some time or more.



This is a nice description about the state of other person, I think; you have expressed yourself naturally and really.



I liked the state of expression and natural thought and flow of thoughts expressed.





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Review of October Omen  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Title of the poem is appealing as it gives an eternal truth shake of phenomena in mind, again I find the title is significant and appropriate in terms of the theme chosen and expressed; the basic concept of the creation is a mix of both good and bad, as our life is a mix of both good and evil .



I liked the work of this free style verse with some end rhymes with a quest at the end.



The prompted words are very rightly and naturally used, completing the message with a twist, highlighting the essence of creation and the very word omen.


Symmetries of the thematic progression is well balanced and the flow of thoughts is natural and balanced.



I enjoyed the read and knitting of the words to make it a nice work of art in projection and presentation.



I liked the live stand of visual projection with speed and movement of change in setting.



It was a nice paint of art in words read pleasant all the way.





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