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Review of "UNGH!"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Angus Author Icon, this is Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon reviewing ""UNGH!"" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Ben walking into the kitchen. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

I like The twist at the end because it was a surprise. I also like the title.

I have no suggestions. I did not find any technical problems or typos.

My Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creative response to the prompt. Write on.

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Review of Become the Giant  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Become the Giant" Open in new Window. under Read a Newbie. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other while the rhythm moves the emotions of hope and faith forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it reveals hope.

Suggestions For Improvement: There are some minor technical issues, such as inconstant punctuation. However, those issues do not distract from the reader's enjoyment of the poem.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this spiritual and thought provoking poem. Write on.

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Review of The Mountain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Mountain" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 10, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the emotions of faith and love forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the author begins each stanza with On my mountain because it gives unity to the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this spiritual poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Where Have All the Eagles Gone?" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 10, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of sadness and fear forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it gives the reader something to meditate upon.
Where have the eagles gone?

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem. Write on.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Rising from the habit...." Open in new Window. on the Noticing Newbies page. The questions at the beginning of this item hooked me.

What I liked: This is my favorite phrase because it is encouraging and true.
the very fact that I constantly try to overcome my weakness, gives me hope

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, have i taken, I suggest making the personal pronoun i upper case.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this encouraging and enlightening article. Write on.

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Review of Closure  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Closure" Open in new Window. in the Emotional page. The title and description under the title aroused my curiosity. The rhythm is that of natural speech and moves the emotions of lose, longing, and sadness forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the author repeats these words, Open my eyes, at the beginning of the first and fifteenth lines because it hold the poem together.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "My God What Have I Done!" Open in new Window. on the Fantasy page. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other. while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it contains the lesson of the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Painful Reality" Open in new Window. under Review a Newbie. The first line of this poem hooked me. The rhythm flows easily from line to line moving the emotions of longing, sadness, and hopelessness forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the emotions are expressed in this poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this romantic poem. Write on.

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Review of The Unmakers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Unmakers" Open in new Window. on the Noticing Newbies page. The first paragraph hooked me with the pigeon flying over lush forest. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way this chapter ended because it aroused my curiosity to know what would happen in the next.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this draft of the first chapter because it did a good job of introducing one of the characters. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Don't you open that door" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (December 3, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Christmas being one week away. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the story ended because it made me smile.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing Christmas story. Write on.

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Review of Naked Santa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Naked Santa" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (December 3, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the rhythm and the rhyme scheme echoes the Night Before Christmas because it makes this poem funnier.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny Christmas poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Can We Autocorrect Humanity?" Open in new Window. on the Noticing Newbie page. The title to this blog post aroused my curiosity and I had to read it. The first paragraph establishes the subject of this article, while each succeeding paragraph builds on the theme.

What I liked: This is my favorite phrase, the change starts with us, because it states a truth we all need reminded about.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking item. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Christmas Memories" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (December 3, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhymes scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of joy and happiness forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The the last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with joy.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful Christmas poem.

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Review of The Garden Statue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Garden Statue" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (December 3, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, ploy and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with the message that the meaning of Christmas was forgotten.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful Christmas poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Just the Beginning" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (December 3, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the theme and rhythm of the poem. The rhythm is that of a free verse poem and moves the emotions of friendship and trust forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it is hopeful that the friendship will continue.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "NaNoWriMo - A Diamante Poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. This inspiring poem focuses on NaNoWriMo and the completed goal by comparing the inspiration for the goal and the completed goal.

What I liked: I like the inspiring and encouraging feeling of this poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed looking at and reading this poem. Write on.

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for entry "Waves - A Shape Poem" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: "Waves - A Shape Poem" Open in new Window. is a beautiful shaped poem that reveals one aspect of the ocean and the beach.

What I liked: I like the way the waves are shaped.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading and looking at this shaped poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "The Writer - A Septolet Poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the theme of the poem while the second completes the picture of the writer.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it describes the way a story unfolds.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: "Seasons Bring Change - A Sedoka Poem" Open in new Window. is a beautiful double sedoka describing the change in the landscape that occurs when summer becomes autumn and autumn turns into winter.

What I liked: The first stanza is my favorite because it establishes the theme of the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: "Autumn Rains - A Tanka Poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. This intriguing poem paints a picture of a rainy and depressing day.

What I liked: I like the title because it suggested the poem's subject without giving anything away.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Midlife Crisis - A Senryu Poem" Open in new Window. looks good on the page. The first line establishes the theme of the poem, while each succeeding line builds upon the theme.

What I liked: The last line is my favorite because it defines the title.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creative and thought provoking poem. Write on.

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for entry "Night Visions - Haiku" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Night Visions - Haiku" Open in new Window. looks good on the page. This poem paints a beautiful picture of a spring night.

What I liked: I like the title because it suggest the theme without giving anything away.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creative and intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Wondrous Spring - Lanturne Poem" Open in new Window. looks good on the page and follows the form. The look of this poem reminds me of the blossom of a spring flower.

What I liked: I like the refreshing feeling of this poem and the way it reminded me of spring flowers.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Mature Love - Tetractys Poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. The main emotions of this poem are longing and acceptance.

What I liked: The last line is my favorite because it contains the message that the title suggest.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Review of Look!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The poem "Look!" Open in new Window. expresses the emotion of longing for something that is missing. This poem follows the form and looks good on the page.

What I liked: These are my favorite lines because of the end rhymes.
life blooms in her shadow of majesty
slowly drowning in air thick with beauty

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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