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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The poem "Life As A Changing Dynamic - Nonet Poem" Open in new Window. is a peaceful and calming meditation that follows the chosen form and looked good on the page.

What I liked: These are my favorite lines because they remind me of meditation.
Breathe deeply and know
This too shall pass away

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful and meditative poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The poem "Summer Storm - Etheree poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. This is a good description of a summer rains storm.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it reminds me of rainstorms I have witnessed.
The sky open up and pour down its wrath

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful and descriptive poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The poem "Poetic Exploration" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. The poem gives a beautiful picture of spring flowers and the emotions the arouse in a person.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it suggest the way the aroma of flowers spread.
Fragrant air swirls about

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Write on.

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Review of Feasts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Feasts" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the emotions and plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: These are my favorite lines because they refer the the fairy tale of Hansel and Gretel.
The lesson here? Avoiding candy houses is probably besT,
Sorry, but if not you will get eaten like all the other pestS!

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: "Poetry - an Acrostic Poem" Open in new Window. follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm, which has a musical feel, flows easily from line to line.

What I liked: I like the choice of subjects for this poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Write on.

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Review of Haiku 0004  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Haiku 0004" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 26, 2014)" Open in new Window.. This poem paints of beautiful word picture of giving gifts.

What I liked: I like the smooth flow of the theme and the emotions of the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Giving Thanks 14 lines" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 26, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm is smooth and appropriate to a free verse poem, while the rhyming words emphasize the theme and the spiritual emotions.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it states the message of the poem.
Climb the mountains to be closer to Him

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Write on.

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Review of Loch Song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Loch Song" Open in new Window. in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 26, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the sunset. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the description of Valerie changing into the one of the creatures of the loch.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "I Want to Fall Inlove" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (November 26, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm compliments the rhyming words while moving the emotions of expatiation and hope forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with hope.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this joyful and hopeful poem. Write on.

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Review of Cheers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Cheers" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (November 26, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first sentence of this article hooked me with a smile or kind word saving someones day. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing reasons why it is important to smile and be pleasant to other people.

What I liked: I like the positive and inspirational mood of this article.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this wonderful and thought provoking article. Write on.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "November haiku weather changes" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The poem looks good on the page and follows the form. Each line gives a snapshot of November's weather change.

What I liked: I like the way this poem reveals the beauty of November in three lines.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Write on.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "A Love-Hate Relationship" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The emotions flow easily from line to line with the change in the emotion placed in the perfect place in the fourth line.

What I liked: I like the way this poem contrasted the two emotions.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Writers and Friends" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. Centering this poem was a good idea because it helps the reader focus on the theme of the poem and the flow of the rhythm.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it establishes the good-bye theme immediately.
Another day, we'll meet again

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful and creative poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I am reviewing "Nuebert's Adventure" Open in new Window. for "I Write in August-September-October" Open in new Window.. The first sentence hooked me with the main character flying through the trees and feeling the first drops of rain. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, strange hard circles of death, because it is a good description of hail.

I also like Nuebert because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking story. Write on.

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Review of Moswen's Plight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Moswen's Plight" Open in new Window. in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Moswen's thoughts. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the lesson this story reveals about love and sacrifice.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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Review of Galactic Yoga  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I am reviewing "Galactic Yoga" Open in new Window. in response to a request by the author. The first sentence hooked me with the author sitting in stunned silence. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention focused on the article.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, the nimble footed darkness spread its cloak, because it is fresh and a visual description of the onset of night.

I also like the description of the night sky at Chalela.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, i always, I suggest making the personal pronoun i uppercase. I also suggest checking the rest of the document for this same typo.

In this phrase, numerous number of stars, I suggest changing number to amount or something else because number is redundant.

My only other suggestion would be to consider adding some photos of Chalela to this article to enhance the description.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this encouraging and inspiring article because it shows what a person can accomplished when focused on a goal. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Somewhere Only We Know" Open in new Window. in "Drama Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with an old dirt road in the middle of nowhere. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the smooth flow of the plot from beginning to climax.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, peel away the rapper, I suggest changing rapper to wrapper.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful story. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Getting to Know Her Better" Open in new Window. in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Olivia's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the suspense builds in this story. I also like the way foreshadowing is used with the crows hitting the window.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found not technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story. Write on.

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Review of His Life on Mars  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "His Life on Mars" Open in new Window. in "Fantasy Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first sentence hooked me with the speaker sitting at a table in an Indian restaurant. The speaker moves the narrative and the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction between the characters.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this flash fiction story. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "THE BARDS CONVENTION" Open in new Window. in "For Authors Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, theme, rhyme scheme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moved the plot forward at a good pace, while the rhyme and interaction of the characters made me smile.

What I liked: The last line it my favorite because it climaxed the plot with the Bard at the Bards Convention.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing satire. Write on.

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Review of Bite of Vengeance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Bite of Vengeance" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's fascination with shoes. The speaker moves the first part of the story forward at a good pace revealing the motive for chewing up the shoe.

What I liked: I like the way the dog took revenge.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story. Write on.

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Review of Nonsense  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Nonsense" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, theme, and laugh. The rhythm moves the theme forward at a good pace. while keeping the reader amused.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it read like a tongue twister.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing and tongue twisting poem. Write on.

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Review of Holiday at Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, mood, plot, rhyme scheme, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem plot with a laugh.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Rather Random Rambling" Open in new Window. in "Comedy Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first line of this poem hooked me with the alliteration. The rhythm flowed easily from line to line, while each line made me smile.

What I liked: I like the way alliteration is used in this amusing poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creative and funny poem. Write on.

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Review of Stop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Stop" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (November 19, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first line hooked me and drew me into the poem. The rhythm, which is smooth and flows easily from line to line, moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the message that this poem gives about helping others.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I have no suggestions for improvement. write on.

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