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#4047197

Review of Puddy tat

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with I am a puddy tat. The rhythm of this free verse poem flows easily from stanza to stanza.

What I liked: The first stanza is my favorite because of the metaphor of good intentions with a cat catching mice or birds.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Write on.

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#4047188

Review of Devil Girl

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Devil Girl"

in "Romance/Love Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first paragraph hooked me with George looking out the window. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the author uses foreshadowing in this story.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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#4047180

Review of She Protests Too Much

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "She Protests Too Much"

in "Romance/Love Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first paragraph hooked me withe the woman's denial. The interaction and conversation between the pair move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the author shows that the woman is still in love despite her denial.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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#4046992

Review of my little corner of the house

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "my little corner of the house"

in "Poetry Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first stanza establishes the location, voice, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it explains the title.

I’ve taken over the left corner

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this free verse poem. Write on.

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#4046990

Review of The Visitors

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The Visitors"

on the Unreviewed Newbies page. The first paragraph hooked me with Rowina's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction between the couple because it reveals their love.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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#4046988

Review of The Shop

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The Shop"

in "Mystery Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first paragraph hooked me with the couple antiquing on back roads. The first person point of view is a good choice because it focuses on the perception of one character. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, hand on my shoulder nearly sent me in to cardiac arrest, because it is fresh and describes the speakers emotions.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this this scary story. Write on.

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#4046922

Review of The Bug

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The Bug"

in "Short Stories Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker needing sleep. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the spread of the virus is described.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing and thought provoking story. Write on.

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#4046721

Review of The Burning

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The Burning"

in "Short Stories Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first sentence hooked me. The first person point of view is a good choice because it reveals the main characters emotions.

What I liked: I like this simile, expended shells rain down on me like burning acid droplets, because it is descriptive and fresh.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story. Write on.

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#4046711

Review of Inseparable

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Inseparable"

. This beautiful free verse poems uses both end rhyme and internal rhyme to show the beautiful of eternal love.

What I liked: I like the word choice of leaves and these because they emphasize the meaning of the lines.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this spiritual and romantic poem. Write on.

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#4046691

Review of P===O===E===M

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "P===O===E===M"

. The main emotion of this poem is tranquility.

What I liked: I like this simile, Shaking out like memories, because it is a fresh description of autumn leaves falling.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestion for improvement.

Final Thoughts: This is a beautiful poem. Write on.

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#4046634

Review of A World Without Music.

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "A World Without Music."

. The first paragraph hooked me with the rhythm that coursed through his dream. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace revealing the main characters as intriguing and sympathetic.

What I liked: This is my favorite phrase, music was something he could feel, because it emphasizes the emotional and spiritual impact of music

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story. Write on.

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#4046517

Review of Character Descriptions

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Character Descriptions"

. These two descriptions reveal two different types of characters. One character is sympathetic and likable while the other is the opposite.

What I liked: I like the way the characters are described because it aroused my curiosity about the story.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this character description. Write on.

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#4046511

Review of A MAN WHO WAS RUNNING LATE

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "A MAN WHO WAS RUNNING LATE"

. This is an intriguing story that shows the change in the main character by the end of the story.

What I liked: I like this phrase, decided to put his needs first and think about his ethics later, because it reveals the character's personality.

Suggestions For Improvement: I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking story. Write on.

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#4046454

Review of The Dream

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The Dream"

. The first paragraph hooked me with the dream. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the logical movement of the plot because it showed the reason for her action.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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#4046452

Review of Women

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Women"

. The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's statement about loving women. The speakers moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while the interaction between the characters reveals there personalities.

What I liked: I like this simile, sat like a concrete bowling ball in my stomach, because it is fresh.

I like this metaphor, hit me in the stomach with a crowbar, because it expresses the character's emotions.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. My only suggestion is to finish the story.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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#4046344

Review of Uranium Eyes

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Uranium Eyes"

. The first paragraph hooked me with the green eyes glowing. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the vividness of the dream.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story. Write on.

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#4046338

Review of Spoof Review :Movie Classic"Halloween"

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Spoof Review :Movie Classic"Halloween""

in "Comedy Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The first paragraph of this review aroused my curiosity. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention.

What I liked: I like the review because it made me smile.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing monologue. Write on.

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#4046311

Review of Good Morning IT Professional

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Good Morning IT Professional"

in "Comedy Newsletter (October 8, 2014)"

. The story hooked me with “Press Control, Alt Delete.” The conversations and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the message on the answering machine because it made me laugh.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny story. Write on.

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#4046081

Review of Embracing Shadows: Prologue

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Embracing Shadows: Prologue"

on The Shameless Plug Page. The first paragraph aroused my curiosity about the story, which caused me to want to know more. The action begins in the fourth paragraph when the doors open.

What I liked: Princess Lilliana is an intriguing, brave, and sympathetic characters.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, by body acting as a shield, I suggest changing by to my.

Final Thoughts: This prologue does a good job in sitting up the plot and introducing the characters. Write on.

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#4045851

Review of Arrival

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Arrival"

in "Mystery Newsletter (October 1, 2014)"

. The first paragraph hooked me with children making faces. The first person point of view is a good choice because it reveals the main character's personality.

What I liked: I like Mikael Carther because his is intriguing and sympathetic.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story. Write on.

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#4045845

Review of Why I Write Children's Stories

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "Why I Write Children's Stories"

in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (October 1, 2014)"

. In this article the author tells us why he like writing children's stories.

What I liked: I like the encouragement this article gives authors, poets, song writers, and others to find what they love to do and pursue it.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring article. Write on.

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#4045821

Review of A Duo Of Demons

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "A Duo Of Demons"

in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (October 1, 2014)"

. The firs paragraph hooked me with the demon's statement. The interaction and conversation among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the descriptions of the demons.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking children's story. Write on.

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#4045816

Review of The World and it's Words.

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Thoughts: I discovered "The World and it's Words."

in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (October 1, 2014)"

. The first line hooks me with the mysterious future being full of lies. The poem's rhythm flow easily from line to line making this a nice poem to read aloud.

What I liked: I like the repetition of lies because it gives the poem unity and suggest rhyme.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem. Write on.

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#4045621

Review of PITS!

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

First Thoughts: I discovered "PITS!"

in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (October 1, 2014)"

. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters reveal their personalities.

What I liked: I like this simile, a fissure in the earth like a crooked smile, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. I have no suggestion for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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