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Review of P.S. I LOVE YOU!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "P.S. I LOVE YOU!" Open in new Window. in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with P.S. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing the deep love he and his late wife shared.

What I liked: I like the feel of the letter because it expresses love through action.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this beautiful and romantic tribute to love and the loved one a 5.0. Write on.

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Review of I dreamt of you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first sentence hooked me with I dreamt of you. The speaker express love through the words and descriptions in the letter.

What I liked: I like this simile, like the sea stretching for the shore and then drawing back into itself, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful love letter. Write on.

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Review of Love Letter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Love Letter" Open in new Window. in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first sentence hooked me with you have changed my life.

What I liked: I like the intimate feeling of the letter.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, it wasnt right, I suggest changing wasnt to wasn't.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful love letter. Write on.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "An Unquiet Desperation: Ch. 1, The End" Open in new Window. in "Drama Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the statement about the note. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, Beautiful lies applied to thin sheets of martyred trees, because it is fresh and reveals Daxton's personality.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prologue because it did a good job of introducing the plot and the characters. Write on.

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Review of CONSPIRACY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "CONSPIRACY" Open in new Window. in "Drama Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like this simile, Panic spread across Oliver countenance like a virus, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, The made a, I suggest changing The to They.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Notre Dame in Paris" Open in new Window. in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the the question. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention with the activities.

What I liked: I like the informal way this letter was written.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this letter. Write on.

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Review of But  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "But" Open in new Window. in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the mood, rhythm, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the emotions of sadness and longing forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the title because it suggest the theme of the poem without giving anything away.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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Review of Dear Best Friend.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Dear Best Friend." Open in new Window. in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader focused on the emotions.

What I liked: I like the way the speaker's emotions were expressed in this letter.

Suggestions For Improvement: A typo in this phrase, i'm just writing, I suggest making the i uppercase. I also suggest checking the letter for other typos of this kind.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing letter. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Seashore Serenity " Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, setting, plot, and mood of the poem. The first stanza hooked me with Sand between my toes. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are happiness and tranquility.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this interesting and creative poem. Write on.

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Review of Mirrors  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Mirrors" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza hooked me with I didn't have this face of today. The rhythm moves the poem's plot forward at a good pace, while each stanza focuses on one aspect of the the characteristics of the speaker.

What I liked: These lines are my favorite because the climax the plot and leave the reader with a question.
--- In which mirror did I
Lose my face?

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creative and thought provoking poem. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "We fought to live and learned to die" Open in new Window. in "Poetry Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the form, rhythm, plot, rhyme scheme, and theme of the poem. Rhymed couplets are a good choice for this poem because each stanza focuses on one part of the subject, which lets the reader pause long enough to feel the emotions contained in the stanza.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Proposition " Open in new Window. in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's pulse racing. The first person point of view is a good choice because it reveals the main character's emotion. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like this simile, feeling like many tiny spider legs everywhere, because it is fresh and a good description of chills caused by fear.

I like this metaphor, malicious aura connected with mine and I stumbled backwards by the impact, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story. Write on.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "My Kingdom No More" Open in new Window. in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the King's statement. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while making the descriptions part of the action.

What I liked: I like the lesson of this story.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing and educational story. Write on.

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Review of Nature's Gallows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Nature's Gallows" Open in new Window. in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the crunching of leaves and twigs. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense toward the climax.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, the wind lashed out its tongue, because it is fresh and describes the feeling of a cold wind.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Willow, the Green Witch of Gloucester" Open in new Window. in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Willow lifting the lid of the cauldron and tasting its contents. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction among the characters because it revealed their personalities.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.

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Review of Voyager  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Voyager" Open in new Window. in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Mikhail Ivanov's glazed eyes. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the crew reveal their personalities and their fears, which also helps to keep the plot moving.

What I liked: I like this simile, like matted fur on a wet hound, because it is fresh and descriptive. I like this metaphor, tar-soaked beams sang, because it is fresh and gives a picture of the ship.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story. Write on.

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Review of Tiny Dancer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Tiny Dancer" Open in new Window. in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with become the most elegant and astounding ice skater ever to be born. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like this metaphor, to slice out every obstacle that cruelly attempted to keep her from achieving her dream, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems and typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful and creative story. Write on.

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Review of ABC exercise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Research for novels" Open in new Window. in "For Authors Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window. and decided to review "ABC exercise" Open in new Window. because it aroused my curiosity. The first paragraph hooked me with Autism is what Nicole has. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace and the interaction among the characters reveals their concerns and fears.

What I liked: I like the way the A B Cs are used to reveal the character.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing and educational story. Write on.

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Review of The CSI Effect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The CSI Effect" Open in new Window. in "For Authors Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with want me to serve on the jury in an upcoming homicide trial. The narrative moves forward in a logical manner while giving information that helps the reader understand the title of the essay.

What I liked: I like the way this essay educations readers about an important issues that effects the fairness of a criminal trail.

Suggestions For Improvement: A missing word in this phrase, if I can some more information, I suggest inserting find between can some.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing and educational essay. Write on.

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Review of Watching Over Us  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Watching Over Us" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the boy sitting in the kitchen eating. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the boy talks to his mother and to his action figure.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing and thought provoking story. Write on.

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Review of Monsters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Monsters" Open in new Window. in "Spiritual Newsletter (November 12, 2014)" Open in new Window.. The first two stanzas establish the rhythm, mood, plot, theme, and basic rhyme scheme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions and plot of the poem forward at a good pace. The main emotions are hope and faith, while fear is a minor emotion revealed in this poem.

What I liked: This is my favorite stanza because it climaxes the poem's plot with hope and faith. It also ask a question that gives the reader a point of meditation.

Why do I ever fear the monsters,
That I know will never win?”

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking and spiritual poem. Write on.

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Review of Number One Guy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
First Thoughts: The title "Number One Guy" Open in new Window. aroused my curiosity and I had to review it. The first paragraph made me laugh with a reindeer not being able to hold a joke. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace.

I like: I like the part about Rudolph's nose keeping Nick, Sr. awake. I always suspected it was bright enough to cause insomnia. I also like the mice making noises in the wrapping paper.

Technical problems, Typos, or Suggestions for Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing Letter to Santa Clause because it made me laugh. Write on.

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Review of I've Had Enough  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First Thoughts: I discovered "I've Had Enough" Open in new Window. in " Newsletter (Spare)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Michael's statement about their father going too far. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The descriptions also build toward the laugh at the climax.

I like: I like the father's response to the twins constant arguments because it was creative and revealed a sense of humor.

Technical problems, Typos, or Suggestions for Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh. Write on.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First Thoughts: I discovered "Both Sides of the Canyon" Open in new Window. in " Newsletter (Spare)" Open in new Window.. The first sentence hooked me with Katherine Fletcher answering the phone. The conversation and interaction between the characters moves the plot and the laughs forward at a good pace.

I like: I like a couple of things about this amusing story. First, I like the way the interaction between the characters reveals their personality and sense of humor. Second, I like this metaphor, this deep blue serpent, the Colorado, because it is fresh and describes the river.

Technical problems, Typos, or Suggestions for Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing and beautiful love story because it shows that a sense of humor is important in a relationship. Write on.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
First Thoughts: I discovered ""The Great White Turkey"" Open in new Window. in " Newsletter (Spare)" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's statement about having a dream. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while keeping my attention and making me laugh.

I like: I like a couple of things about this story. First, the dream and the description of the talking turkey made me laugh. Second, I like all the reason the speaker listed for saying no to cooking Thanksgiving dinner.

Technical problems, Typos, or Suggestions for Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny and creative Thanksgiving story. Write on.

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