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Review of Dream Vacation  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi, Graywriter , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Dream Vacation"  because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"  page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Shelly winning a three day vacation to Mexico. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like this simile, like the sparkle of sun on gentle waves, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like Paul because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it showed that a vacation that begins with difficulties can turn out to be fun.

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Review of Spring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Espero , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Spring"  because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"  page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves to joyful emotions of spring forward at a good pace.

What I Like: This is my favorite line, Beautiful, Renewing, Scampering. I like this line because it shows how joyful spring is.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because of the way it expressed the joy of the season.

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Review of My Earth  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, WakeUpAndLive️~Happiness , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "My Earth"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the theme, form, and mood. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like repetition of the word Earth because it helps focus the reader's attention on the poem message.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its emphasis on humanity depending on the planet.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Massive Friendly Derg , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Doggone Conversation"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: This is a beautiful tribute to a beloved dog.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write some stories or poems about Duke.

My favorite part: My favorite part was about the beanbag.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the author's love for Duke.

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Review of Sundown  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Spiritual Dawning , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Sundown"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the first stanza because it drew me into the poem and made me smile.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and inspiring poem a 5.0 because it made me think of all the sunsets I have witnessed.

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Review of A Starhawk Tale  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Author Joseph J. Madden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Starhawk Tale"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Boruus Noth's mood. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the crazy plan Jesse Forster used to capture Noth.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the interaction between the characters kept me focused on the plot. The interaction also revealed their personalities.

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Review of Bus  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean gettinPomsready , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Bus "  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker attempting to talk to the bus driver. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the bus driver's response about the reason he could not stop the bus.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Destiny is unknown"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of curiosity forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it explained the title.

Final Thought: I giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning destiny.

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Review of Weaving Unity  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Igor Skoglund , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Weaving Unity"  because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it expressed the unity of the human race.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Kenzie , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Loving You, Loving Me"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative, emotions, and plot forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is love.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem expresses both romantic and spiritual love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it express the emotion of love.

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Review of New Year's Prayer  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "New Year's Prayer"  because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me because of dance inventing us. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on divination and salvation, because both words, in their own way, express the emotions of hope and faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it was a form I have never encountered before.

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Review of Ghost Hunter  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Ghost Hunter"  because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 15, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Haldor's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the graveyard because it was chilling.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and frightening story a 5.0. because it sent chills up my spine.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, SSpark , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "DEATH BY TIME CHANGE"  because I discovered it on the on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Mary hitting the stop button on the alarm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the scene that described how the could died, because it was a well-written action scene.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the characters.

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Review of Two Red Eyes  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Two Red Eyes"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 15, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Cathy holding her throbbing foot. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite, because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Review of Looking Good  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Norman , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Looking Good"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 15, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words complimented each other. The rhythm moved the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasized the speaker's eyesight difficulty.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Zed , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Left Hand of the Artificer"  because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (March 15, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The description of the final ruby falling hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the metaphors and similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile, an almighty crack like the breaking of a god’s bones.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because of the active and visual descriptions.

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Review of God loves you  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the mood and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the spiritual emotions of faith and hope.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker welcoming death. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like Amanda because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the speaker was a vampire, who knew what she wanted.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- Have a lovely day! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"  "#36 - Inside Looking Out"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with on the inside looking out. The rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed hope.

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Hi, 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Without Words, Where Would We Be"  because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the questions. The rhythm moves the narrative, plot, and emotions forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions because they made me think.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me think about answers to the questions.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Em Catrin , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Curious Burial of a Beating Heart "  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the doctor's estimate of eight to ten months. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, watched the seconds bleed away, because it is fresh and expressive.

Final Thought: This story did a good job of showing Brenna's emotional response and the way she finally came to accept the situation.

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Hi, Framlin , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Vampire: Alucard"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The statement easy prey being boring hooked me. This is a good character description, because it gives enough information about Alucard to aroused the reader's curiosity.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about Alucard forgetting what happiness was, because it suggest that he could be a sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this character description because it made me want to know mover about Alucard.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Nobody Likes a Spoiler"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The title of this story hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Sheila because she is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sheila's logical approach to solving the mystery.

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Review of The Author  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, L.A. Grawitch , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Author"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Maggie reading the story. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, like a greasy bag of chips on a Saturday night binge, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the chilling climax surprised me.

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Hi, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "I hope that I will make it"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The poem looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and the emotions of both hope and doubt forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: Did you mean peas in the first line?

My favorite part: I like the way this poem expresses two opposite emotions.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the emotions it expressed.

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