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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, PastorJuan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Hoped For and Not Seen" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 29, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the Bible emphasizing faith over “evidence” and “substance.” The author moves the narrative forward at good pace, while giving examples fro the Bible concerning faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite phrase, faith is an action on the part of the believer, I like this phrase because it takes faith out of the realm of only words and focuses on the actions that result from faith.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning faith.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Spirit of this Place Chapter#4" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 29, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with life being fragile. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite because it emphasized hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this chapter because of the descriptions and the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "A Gentle Voice WC -45" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 29, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem is hope and helpfulness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Come to me, the voice does prompt; I like this line because it answers the first stanza and can be either the voice of a helpful individual or God.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written and positive poem because of the way it showed someone wanting to help the speaker.

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Review of Cycles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dave Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Cycles" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 29, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are faith and hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, if God is willing. I like this line because it reminds the reader that no matter what happens, God is in control.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the emotions of hope and faith.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Two Rivers Crossing" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the explosion lifting Harold off his feet. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, time is like a river moving constantly from source to ocean, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking story a 5.0, because of the way it explained the multiverse.

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Review of Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Quiltingmama Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Hope" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the view from the window. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, The silver-tongued asp fills my thoughts, overwhelming me., because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the way the speaker describes the process of regaining hope.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written a 5.0 because of the active descriptions.

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for entry "~ Confidence Course ~" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, ruwth Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "ruwth is writing..." Open in new Window. "~ Confidence Course ~" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The author gives the reader a good description of a Confidence Course in the military. Reading this essay encourages the reader to attempt something they have never before tried.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, tried my palms, I suggest changing tried to dried.

My favorite part: I like the descriptions because they were concise and written in an active voice.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this essay because it gave me a glimpse of something I have never encounter.

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Review of Woke  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Thomas Seeker Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Woke" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 22, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the questions. The examples given by the author cause the reader to think about what it really means to be woke. These examples give the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, ever mind in the house? I suggest changing ever to never.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, being woke to something means that you comprehend the truth of something that you had a blind eye to. I like this sentence because of the definition for woke.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0 because it show what it really means to be woke.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, billywilcox, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Seduction In The Snow" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, plot, and them of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The third stanza is my favorite because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of Ramadan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Silver Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Ramadan" Open in new Window. because I discovered it when I searched WDC for Ramadan.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative about the holy month of Ramadan forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are faith and hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: These are my favorite line. I like these line because they emphasize faith and undity.
The bond of faith smells sweeter,
Unity shines much brighter,


Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it contained information about Ramadan

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Siobhan Falen Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Payment for Temptation" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the black nugget. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way Tony's father handled the situation, because it reminded me of the way my mother handled a similar situation with one of my brothers.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, JCosmos Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Poems for Weekly Challenge " Open in new Window."PPC3: Week 37 - Pen and Paper" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while the speaker draws the reader forward with the descriptions.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like stanzas seven and eight. I like stanza seven because it made me laugh. I like stanza eight because it reminded that I sometimes have difficulty reading my own handwriting.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because it makes me smile and laugh.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Joy Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Fishing For the Past" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid" Open in new Window. page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Buddy's statement. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like Buddy because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Outcast" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid" Open in new Window. page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the tent standing out like a ripening blister{/i}. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the description of the creature attempting to get into the tent.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the action kept me focused on the plot.

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Review of Dream Vacation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Dream Vacation" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid" Open in new Window. page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Shelly winning a three day vacation to Mexico. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like this simile, like the sparkle of sun on gentle waves, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like Paul because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it showed that a vacation that begins with difficulties can turn out to be fun.

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Review of Spring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Espero Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Spring" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid" Open in new Window. page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves to joyful emotions of spring forward at a good pace.

What I Like: This is my favorite line, Beautiful, Renewing, Scampering. I like this line because it shows how joyful spring is.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because of the way it expressed the joy of the season.

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Review of My Earth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, WakeUpAndLive Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "My Earth" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the theme, form, and mood. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like repetition of the word Earth because it helps focus the reader's attention on the poem message.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its emphasis on humanity depending on the planet.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Friendly Neighborhood Derg Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Doggone Conversation" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: This is a beautiful tribute to a beloved dog.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write some stories or poems about Duke.

My favorite part: My favorite part was about the beanbag.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the author's love for Duke.

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Review of Sundown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Spiritual dawning, first light Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Sundown" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the first stanza because it drew me into the poem and made me smile.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and inspiring poem a 5.0 because it made me think of all the sunsets I have witnessed.

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Review of A Starhawk Tale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Author Joseph J. Madden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "A Starhawk Tale" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Boruus Noth's mood. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the crazy plan Jesse Forster used to capture Noth.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the interaction between the characters kept me focused on the plot. The interaction also revealed their personalities.

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Review of Bus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Bus " Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker attempting to talk to the bus driver. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the bus driver's response about the reason he could not stop the bus.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Igor Skoglund Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Weaving Unity" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it expressed the unity of the human race.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Kenzie Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Loving You, Loving Me" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative, emotions, and plot forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is love.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem expresses both romantic and spiritual love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it express the emotion of love.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "New Year's Prayer" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me because of dance inventing us. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on divination and salvation, because both words, in their own way, express the emotions of hope and faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it was a form I have never encountered before.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Ghost Hunter" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 15, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Haldor's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the graveyard because it was chilling.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and frightening story a 5.0. because it sent chills up my spine.

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