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, I am reviewing "Full Moon"

because I discovered it on the "May SuperPowers Review Raid"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker feeling the moon's magnetic pulse. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the description of the transformation because it was part of the action.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the description of the transformation.

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#4697932

Review of MediEvils

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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Hi, Beholden

, I am reviewing "MediEvils"

because I discovered it on the "May SuperPowers Review Raid"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the time the story occurred. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the climax because it was a surprsie.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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#4697928

Review of Mistakes

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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, I am reviewing "Mistakes"

because I discovered it on the "May SuperPowers Review Raid"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The managers statement hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like Falcon Durridge because he is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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#4697910

Review of Memory Calls

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

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Hi, Beholden

, I am reviewing "Memory Calls"

because I discovered it on the "May SuperPowers Review Raid"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Gaston driving through the rain. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like this simile, giant rocks scattered like sentinels along its length, because it is fresh, descriptive, and visual.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of its active descriptions.

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#4697548

Review of Marks on Spencer

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, lezismore-moreislez

, I am reviewing "Marks on Spencer"

, because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (May 17, 2023)"

.

First Impression: The first paragraph of Part One hooked me. In Part One: The interaction and conversation between the charter establishes their relationship and personalities, while setting up the plot.

Part Two moves the plot forward while giving the reader more information on Spenser and his relationship with the Diaz family.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Spenser because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading Part One and Part Two of this story because of Spenser.

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#4697472

Review of I Must Love You

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games

, I'm reviewing "I Must Love You"

because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "

forum page.

First Thoughts: The fourth paragraph hooked me with the murder on the night of the full moon. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the first person point of view and voice are used in this story. This point of view helps the reader understand the motives of the main character.

Final Thought: This is an intriguing story with a sympathetic main character.

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#4697441

Review of The Fool's Reign

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Hi, brom21

, I'm reviewing "The Fool's Reign "

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (May 17, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Nimrod liking to take things to the extreme. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Nimrod because he was an intriguing characters who was both sympathetic and unsympathetic.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Nimrod.

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#4697436

Review of Rain, Rain Almost Never Goes Away

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Hi, PureSciFi

, I'm reviewing "Rain, Rain Almost Never Goes Away"

because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (May 17, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: Licus plowing a field in the rain hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the descriptions of the family planting fields and keeping their animals.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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#4697345

Review of Golden Tendrils

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Louis Williams

, I'm reviewing "Golden Tendrils"

because I discovered it on the community newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and inspiration emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, the strength inside that I need to shine. I like this line because it expresses both faith and hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this inspiration poem because of the way it expressed emotion.

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#4697269

Review of Attack Of The Nameless One

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Louis Williams

, I'm reviewing "Attack Of The Nameless One"

because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (May 10, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Frank's battle to get to the mountain. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was unexpected.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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#4697243

Review of Mis-assembled

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, bas

, I'm reviewing "Mis-assembled "

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (May 10, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Nirav's brother tightening a screw. The interaction between the brothers moves the plot and the laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because I also have problems assembling items.

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#4697224

Review of Dog Mom

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, JCosmos

, I'm reviewing "Dog Mom"

because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and descriptions forward at a good pace,
d
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The fifth verse is my favorite because of the dogs thinking they are masters of the universe.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it reminded me of dogs I have had.

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#4696922

Review of Christian Meditation

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, LightinMind

, I'm reviewing "Christian Meditation"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The introduction paragraph hooked me with the author's statement of faith in regards to meditation. This thought-provoking essay gives the reader a deeper understanding of Christian meditation.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, Meditation allows God to lovingly work inside of us. I like this sentence because it states one of the goals of meditation.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning meditation.

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#4696917

Review of Jots and Tittles and other Random Things

for entry "Meditation"

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, AmyJo- Have a lovely day!

, I'm reviewing "Jots and Tittles and other Random Things"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph of this essay hooked me with the question. The question in this essay helped focus my attention on the narrative.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the author used questions to help the reader focus on the subject of meditation.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it give me something to think about concerning meditation.

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#4696912

Review of Prayer as Meditation

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, Jeff

, I'm reviewing "Prayer as Meditation"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with commonalities between prayer and meditation. This thought provoking essay helps give the reader a deeper understand of prayer and meditation

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The third paragraph is my favorite because it list some of the steps to both prayer and meditation.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it increased my understanding of both prayer and meditation.

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#4696903

Review of To Arms!

Review by Prosperous Snow...

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, AmyJo- Have a lovely day!

, I'm reviewing "To Arms!"

because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "

forum page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm of this free verse poem move the plot and emotions of homesickness forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem looks on the page, because it helps focus the reader's attention.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme and the speaker.

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#4696827

Review of White Death, Chapter 1

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi, Alex Morgan

, I'm reviewing "White Death, Chapter 1"

because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (May 10, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Lars adjusting his goggles. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax of this chapter because it aroused my curiosity about the rest of the chapter.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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#4696823

Review of A Dish Best Served Cold

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Hi, Hyperiongate

, I'm reviewing "A Dish Best Served Cold"

because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (May 10, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the perfect crime. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the logical way Jessop 56 went about solving the crime.

Final Thought: I enjoy ed reading this story because of Jessop 56.

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#4696788

Review of Waiting On The Storm

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Louis Williams

, I'm reviewing "Waiting On The Storm"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Jenks setting in his lawn chair. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the conversation between the father and daughter because it emphasized their relationship.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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#4696658

Review of Alone

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Sum1's In San Francisco

, I'm reviewing "Alone"

because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Chris not feeling young. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between Chris and Marjorie build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like both Chris and Marjorie because they are intriguing and sympathetic characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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#4696531

Review of Flash Fictions for contests

for entry "Office Magick [300 words]"

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, Terry Wylis

, I'm reviewing "Flash Fictions for contests"

"Office Magick [300 words]"

because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Andrew's neurotic organization. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the meaning of each of the rocks were explained.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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#4696530

Review of I AM...

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Jaiam

, I'm reviewing "I AM..."

because I discovered it under online authors.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the repetition of I am throughout the poem, because it gives unity to the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed God's love for humanity.

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#4696482

Review of After the Elections

Review by Prosperous Snow...

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Vanishing Vapor

, I'm reviewing "After the Elections"

because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (May 3, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the election turning out to be a disaster. The speaker moved the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way Mike threw the woman over his shoulder and dumped her in the punch.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Mike.

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#4696352

Review of Buzz me in, Mr. Allison

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Lightspeed555

, I'm reviewing "Buzz me in, Mr. Allison"

because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (May 3, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the difficulty of keeping work life and non-work life separated. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the music and the angels.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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#4696351

Review of How To Get There from Here

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, AmyJo- Have a lovely day!

, I'm reviewing "How To Get There from Here"

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (May 3, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the hillbilly minding his own business. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza climaxed the poem and made me laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the hillbilly's directions.

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