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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Paul , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The World Ended That Day" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with David's statement. The conversation between David and Steve move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last sentence is my favorite because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Perpetual Jello  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, ChristineB , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Perpetual Jello" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with the emotion of longing.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the speaker.

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Review of Aunty Zero  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Aunty Zero" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it states the theme of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well written poem because of the speaker.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, LegendaryMask❤️ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "God Bless America, the Land of the Free!" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this article hooked me with the reason for choosing the barbwire frame. Each paragraph give the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the choice of font colors because they suit the theme and subject of the article. The are also easy to read.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written article because of the theme.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, WriterRick , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Mystery At The Lighthouse" , because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the citizens of Mirewood being afraid. The narrator moves the descriptions and the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Mabel because she is a sympathetic character and a strong woman.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Mabel's determination.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Slight , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "One Cannot Live Synecdoche" , because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The title of this essay aroused my curiosity. The author gives thought-provoking and logical reasons why the title of this essay is true.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the author's logical approach to this subject because it give me something to think about concerning synecdoche and the way I approach life.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written essay because it made me think.

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507
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, stranger in the dark , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "No More Fireworks " , because I discovered it on the "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poems establishes the form, mood, plot, and the speaker. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of holiday theme.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, ♫~ Kenword~♫ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "You'll Not Walk Through Alone" , because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Pastor Terrance's feelings for his wife. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing the emotions of the characters.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this story revealed the change in Pastor Terrance. It showed that he could deal with the problems brought to him.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of Every Ten Years  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, TheNoMonster , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Every Ten Years" , because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the couple doing well in their twenties. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the main characters emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because of the speaker and the way his emotions were revealed through the active descriptions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Ray Scrivener , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Monsters in the Flesh" , because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Impression: The word Teratoma hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story because the express the speaker's emotions and fears.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story because of the way the main character told the story.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  
for entry "Bubble and Squeak" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Promptly Poetry"  "Bubble and Squeak" , because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Impression: The title aroused my curiosity and drew me into the poem. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of hunger forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of this leftover dish because it sounds good.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this delicious poem.

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Review of Finding Power  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Schnujo's in Alabama , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Finding Power" , because I discovered it in "For Authors Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the eleven-year-old staring at the texture of the wall. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The descriptions and interaction among the characters shows the emotions of the young man.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this story reveals the emotions of the main character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it showed the main characters emotions.

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Review of Wink and a hug  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Smee , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wink and a hug" , because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker' statement to Barry. The interaction and conversation between characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical prablems.

I like: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of No Treasure Here  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beck Firing back up! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "No Treasure Here" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Gus's statement to Bambi. The conversation between Gus and Bambi move the plot forward at a good pace while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the characters.

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Review of Tests  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Just Jae , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Tests" , because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Tiny's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between Tiny and Skrie build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write another story about this intriguing pair.

I like: I like the way Tiny and Skrie worked together in the gauntlet, because it showed that they trusted each other.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of No Rain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "No Rain" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the farmer. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the main character because he is an intriguing and sympathetic person.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it revealed the framer's emotions through the descriptions.

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Review of To Lesly  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "To Lesly" , because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, macwriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Out of the frying pan, Into the fire" , because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the wasting cough. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, off a break neck speed, I suggest changing a to at.

I like: I like the way the background is included in the descriptions because it did not distract from the plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the descriptions.

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Review of Faith at Sunrise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, stranger in the dark , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Faith at Sunrise" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of gratitude forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closed the poem with the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotion of gratitude.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robin:TheRhymeMaven , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing ""Praised Be He Who Knoweth All"..." , because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this prose poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and stanza to stanza making this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use a larger font so that the poem is easier to read.

I like: This is my favorite line, Goodness flows throughout the universe. I like this line because it states a truth that many people need reminded of.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prose poem because it encourage the reader to investigate other religions.

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Review of Summer Snow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean gettinPomsready , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Summer Snow" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the snow cones made with real snow and maple syrup.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Review of Temptation  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Temptation" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (June 21, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with longing in your eye. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions of desire and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the choice of speakers because it expresses the feeling of both being young and old. The memory of youth and the desire to relive it.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written inspirational story a 5.0, because it brought back memories of my youth.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Eight-7 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A tap in the night" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the nagging voice urging the man to investigate the sound. The descriptions are part of the action moving the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like this metaphor, heartbeat went from fast to snare drum on a drum line, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it left me wondering what would happen next.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the active descriptions.

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Review of Security System  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Security System" , because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the family leaving on vacation. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technicalities.

I like: I like this metaphor, a good imitation of a man running on a treadmill, going nowhere very fast, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because of the money that was found.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "An old golden retriever" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the golden retriever on the speaker's front porch. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the dog went after the wolves.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the dog.

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