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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A Star Trek Poem (TOS)" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh and smile.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
for entry "Thanksgiving" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Promptly Poetry" Open in new Window. "Thanksgiving" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of nostalgia forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the was the emotions of nostalgia is shown in this poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed nostalgia.

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Review of Escape Route  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, PB Curtis Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Escape Route" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with the speaker being on the run. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Review of Burger and Fries  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tracker Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Burger and Fries" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The speaker moves the plot and action forward at a good pace, while giving the reader a lesson in kindness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it caused me to think about the story's lesson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Interesting Case of Mrs Ganly" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Jerome wanting to follow in his father's footsteps. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last sentence is my favorite because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh and smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this funny story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of Time Bubbles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Louis Williams Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Time Bubbles" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first line hooked me with everything appearing to fit together. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, press edmy fingers, I suggest changing press edmy to pressed my.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it climaxes the poem without the speaker finding a solution to their problem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the plot.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dr Gonzo Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Down a Gentle Winding Path" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love, hope, and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses the emotion of love.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Review of Four Sails  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, lollycrow Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Four Sails" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Kajara's ability to camouflage. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to make this a part of a longer story or novel.

I like: I like Kajara because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Kalaja.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Peony Caper WC 276" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page .

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Abbie reaching through the chain link fence to pick a flower. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Abbie because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Runaway Cow WC 652" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker spending twice a year at a resort/working farm. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while recounting fond memories of her childhood.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of the cabins, with the ice boxes, and the outhouse.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it brought back memories of my grandparents, who always called a refrigerator an ice box.

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Review of Conscapsis Theory  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Joseph D. Smith Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Conscapsis Theory" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this thesis hook me with the definition of the Theory of Conscapsis.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the logical flow of this thesis, because it gives an explanation about the theory and the basis of the theory.

Final thoughts: This thesis is thought-provoking and well written.

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Review of Loser's Club  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Joto-Kai Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Loser's Club" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the stranger statement. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Kissla because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Fyn Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Never Too Old for a Good Surprise" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Henry slumped by the window. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like both Henry and David because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of June  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, No Sox with Sandals Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "June" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with June's homicidal tendencies. The narrative moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because of the way June revealed she was different.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A Clipped Conversation" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite, because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem, because it made me smile.

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Review of Meditation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Meditation" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the psychology genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the definitions for meditation. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader several things to consider.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Let anything which a person focuses on without distraction be termed meditation. I like this sentence because it makes meditation easier and gives a deeper understanding of the process of meditation.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because it gave me a different view of meditation.

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Review of Even Prompter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Even Prompter" Open in new Window. "Waiting for Godot (apologies to Samuel Becket)" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this poem expresses both the emotions of patience and impatience. The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem plot with impatience.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Review of Intimacy with God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Intimacy with God" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with God waiting for us to call. The moves the essays theme forward at a good pace. The questions ask in each section cause the read to pause and consider what is being said before moving on the the next section.

Suggestions: I found no difficulties.

I like: I like the emphases placed on making time for God in our lives, because it reminds the readers that they have to make time to listen for the Holy Spirit.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the thought-provoking questions.

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Review of First Contact  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Dave Ryan Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "First Contact" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I liked reading this conversation because some of it made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the conversation among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NOBODYLEARNS Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "This is the UFO [2 segments]" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the legal genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the peace treaty between the United Nations and the United Federations of Outer-space. The descriptions in Segment 2 were part of the action and helped move the plot forward a t a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the conditions in Segment 1 because they were logical, clear, and thought-provoking.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the thought-provoking conditions and the action

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Cosmic Contrapunto" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and subject of the poem, while hooking the reader with the first line. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The third stanza is my favorite, because it ask a question that requires me to think about.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it requires me to think.

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Review of Even Prompter  Open in new Window.
for entry "Brevette" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Even Prompter" Open in new Window. "Brevette" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form, looks good on the page, and makes me hungry for a butter sandwich.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the middle line is longer then the first and second line. It reminds me of a sandwich.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of The Messenger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Messenger" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the cultural genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the sphere of prophecy. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Fern because she is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I like the lesson this story told about God being interested in humanity.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Finder101 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Love Story of My GrandParents" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under Online Authors.

First Impression: The second paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with Mary escaping an unwanted marriage. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader enough information to answer any questions.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like both Mary and Adam because they are intriguing people.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this love story because of Mary and Adam.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Dawn Embers Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "tools of confusion" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (May 31, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: Jason's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between Jason and Nick move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last sentence is my favorite because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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