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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lone Cypress Workshop Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Ki and spirituality" Open in new Window., because I discovered it while port surfing.

First Impression: The question about spirituality at the beginning of this poem hooked me. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and subject of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of discovery forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: These are my favorite lines. I like these lines because they show the importance of asking questions in relation to spirituality.
This thing that we call ‘spirituality’ is not something specific, but only
the personal investigation into the questions that we create and develop for ourselves.


Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about concerning spirituality.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Richard ~ Looking for Luck! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Ireland He Did Love. Or, Was It Cats?" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under by online authors.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closed the poem and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the subject.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Jots and Tittles and other Random Things" Open in new Window. "Expression Within 40 Words - Lesson - for 7/15/2023 - WC-35" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The poem teaches a lesson and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, and the narrative gives the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the lesson this poem teaches.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the lesson it teaches.

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Review of faith at Sunrise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "faith at Sunrise" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A typo in this word unviverse, I suggest changing the spelling to universe.

I like: These are my favorite lines, I like these lines because the sum up the sum up the mystical experience.
}And knew that the unviverse
Was alive

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the mystical experience.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Wolfius Author IconMail Icon , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A Ferocious Squirrel" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker seeing a squirrel. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it gave the lesson the speaker learned.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story because the helped the reader under stand the lesson.

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Review of Antifaith  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dr Gonzo Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Antifaith" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph of this monologue hooked me with the author's confession. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while speculating on truth and faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the author's logical approach to this subject because it lets the reader consider truth as related to faith.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this monologue because it gave me something to think about concerning truth.

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Review of 25 December 2022  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Odessa Molinari Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reading and review "25 December 2022" Open in new Window. because the title aroused my curiosity,

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Santa being drunk. the conversation moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the climax and the laghter.

What I Like: The last sentence is my favorite because it made me laugh.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Louis Williams Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I picked "The Meaning of Giving" Open in new Window. to read and review because the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like the lesson this story taught about giving. I also liked the climax because it was a happy ending.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, brown forelock of her air, I suggest changing air to hair.

A typo in this phrase, as he held it tight, I suggest changing he to she.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson about giving.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Joseph Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Never will I say Goodbye " Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page..

First Impression: The rhythm and rhyming words of this beautiful poem compliment each other. The rhythm moves t he spiritual emotions of faith, certitude, and hope forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this line, The forever sweet bye and bye, is repeated through out the poem because it emphasizes the emotions of faith and certitude.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this poem because they expressed emotions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Charley Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Alien Conversation" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the nonsense genre page.

First Impression: Jay's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax with the aliens going to see Abe Lincoln.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, G. B. Williams Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A Moment at The Front Porch Ministries" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the happiness of the people. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while describing The Front Porch Ministries through the action in the story.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the speaker told about The Front Porch Ministries.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspirational story because of the way it showed people being helped.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Netty Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "“ THROUGH GOD’S EYES " Open in new Window., because I discovered it on The Hub under Newest Static Items.

First Impression: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it reveals the emotions of hope and love.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the subject.

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Review of A quiet evening  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Eight-7 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A quiet evening" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the read & review a newbie page.

First Impression: The third paragraph hooked me with Paul cupping his hand over his daughter's mouth. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters build the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, John held his hand out toward her. Who is John?

I like: I like this simile, feeling like he was on an escalator walking the wrong way, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action, which revealed the characters fears. I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way the descriptions kept my focus on the plot and the characters.

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Review of Ten Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Ten Again" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and speaker. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it made me think about solutions for the problems facing humanity today.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem because it made me think.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Jeff Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Stand-Up And Deliver" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: Charlie's statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Charlies because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this amusing story because of Charlie.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jonblair Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "MATT DUGGAN - DETECTIVE SERIES" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Matt's statement. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it aroused my curiosity about the rest of the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Matt and Delia.

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Review of Journal/Blog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Madelyn Stone Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Journal/Blog" Open in new Window. "07-03-23 Personal Essay Contest Entry" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first sentence of this essay hooked. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving logical and proven reason why vinegar is her enemy.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Sometimes, we cannot have our vinegar and eat it, too. I like this sentence because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written essay because it was about vinegar.

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Review of Graveyard Shift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Penemue Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Graveyard Shift" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the description of Dr. Shaw. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Mack because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Escape from Alcatraz" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The third paragraph hooked me with the speaker wanting to be anyplace except Alcatraz. The narrator moves the plot forward while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of how the prisoner went about making their escape.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way the three men escaped.

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Review of Soul Survivor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Davy Kraken Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Soul Survivor" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the Pastor's blessing. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story because they help reveal emotions.

Final thoughts: The note at the end was a good addition to the story because it helps the reader understand the story's background.

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Review of magpies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Charlie Carrol Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "magpies" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's opinion of why the magpies were clustering at the garden. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for the this story because they reveal the speaker emotions and fears.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story because of the speaker.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Madame Michelle de la Lyonesse Dupont" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Jean waking up next to Madame Michelle de la Lyonesse Dupont. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the main character.

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Review of My Sweet Jasmine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Cheddah Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "My Sweet Jasmine" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Lillian. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense, while revealing their emotions.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like this simile, words hit Jasmine like a steel pipe, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because of how well it shows a family struggling with an Alzheimer's patient.

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Review of Perpetual Jello  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, ChristineB Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Perpetual Jello" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with the emotion of longing.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the speaker.

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Review of Aunty Zero  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Aunty Zero" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it states the theme of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well written poem because of the speaker.

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