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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Legendary❤️Mask Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "God Bless America, the Land of the Free!" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this article hooked me with the reason for choosing the barbwire frame. Each paragraph give the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the choice of font colors because they suit the theme and subject of the article. The are also easy to read.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written article because of the theme.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, WriterRick Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Mystery At The Lighthouse" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the citizens of Mirewood being afraid. The narrator moves the descriptions and the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Mabel because she is a sympathetic character and a strong woman.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Mabel's determination.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Slight Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "One Cannot Live Synecdoche" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The title of this essay aroused my curiosity. The author gives thought-provoking and logical reasons why the title of this essay is true.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the author's logical approach to this subject because it give me something to think about concerning synecdoche and the way I approach life.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written essay because it made me think.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, stranger in the dark Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "No More Fireworks " Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poems establishes the form, mood, plot, and the speaker. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of holiday theme.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, ♫~ Kenword~♫ Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "You'll Not Walk Through Alone" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Pastor Terrance's feelings for his wife. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing the emotions of the characters.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this story revealed the change in Pastor Terrance. It showed that he could deal with the problems brought to him.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of Every Ten Years  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, TheNoMonster Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Every Ten Years" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the couple doing well in their twenties. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the main characters emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because of the speaker and the way his emotions were revealed through the active descriptions.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Promptly Poetry" Open in new Window. "Bubble and Squeak" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The title aroused my curiosity and drew me into the poem. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of hunger forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of this leftover dish because it sounds good.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this delicious poem.

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Review of Finding Power  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Schnujo NEEDS to do homework Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Finding Power" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "For Authors Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the eleven-year-old staring at the texture of the wall. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The descriptions and interaction among the characters shows the emotions of the young man.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this story reveals the emotions of the main character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it showed the main characters emotions.

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Review of Wink and a hug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Smee Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Wink and a hug" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker' statement to Barry. The interaction and conversation between characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical prablems.

I like: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of No Treasure Here  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beck Firing back up! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "No Treasure Here" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Gus's statement to Bambi. The conversation between Gus and Bambi move the plot forward at a good pace while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the characters.

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Review of Tests  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Just Jae Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Tests" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (June 28, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Tiny's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between Tiny and Skrie build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write another story about this intriguing pair.

I like: I like the way Tiny and Skrie worked together in the gauntlet, because it showed that they trusted each other.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of No Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Sumojo Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "No Rain" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the farmer. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the main character because he is an intriguing and sympathetic person.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it revealed the framer's emotions through the descriptions.

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Review of To Lesly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "To Lesly" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, macwriter Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Out of the frying pan, Into the fire" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the wasting cough. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, off a break neck speed, I suggest changing a to at.

I like: I like the way the background is included in the descriptions because it did not distract from the plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the descriptions.

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Review of Faith at Sunrise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, stranger in the dark Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Faith at Sunrise" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of gratitude forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closed the poem with the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotion of gratitude.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robin:TheRhymeMaven Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing ""Praised Be He Who Knoweth All"..." Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this prose poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and stanza to stanza making this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use a larger font so that the poem is easier to read.

I like: This is my favorite line, Goodness flows throughout the universe. I like this line because it states a truth that many people need reminded of.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prose poem because it encourage the reader to investigate other religions.

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Review of Summer Snow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Summer Snow" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the snow cones made with real snow and maple syrup.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Review of Temptation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Temptation" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (June 21, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with longing in your eye. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions of desire and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the choice of speakers because it expresses the feeling of both being young and old. The memory of youth and the desire to relive it.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written inspirational story a 5.0, because it brought back memories of my youth.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Eight-7 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "A tap in the night" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the nagging voice urging the man to investigate the sound. The descriptions are part of the action moving the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like this metaphor, heartbeat went from fast to snare drum on a drum line, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it left me wondering what would happen next.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the active descriptions.

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Review of Security System  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Security System" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the family leaving on vacation. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technicalities.

I like: I like this metaphor, a good imitation of a man running on a treadmill, going nowhere very fast, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because of the money that was found.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "An old golden retriever" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the golden retriever on the speaker's front porch. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the dog went after the wolves.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the dog.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Myrtle Armentrout WC 277" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's proclamation of not being a weak man. The speaker moves the plot and narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it reveals the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Second chances" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the environmental genre page.

First Impression: Jennifer's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it demonstrated justice.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Review of Wanya's Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, PiriPica Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Wanya's Day" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the action/adventure genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Wanya making her way through the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Wanya because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Unfortunate Memory Lapse WC 253" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Meredith feeling like the trip was a mistake. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax, because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Meredith.

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