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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Myrtle Armentrout WC 277" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's proclamation of not being a weak man. The speaker moves the plot and narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it reveals the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Second chances  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Second chances" , because I discovered it on the environmental genre page.

First Impression: Jennifer's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it demonstrated justice.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Review of Wanya's Day  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, PiriPica , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wanya's Day" , because I discovered it on the action/adventure genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Wanya making her way through the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Wanya because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Unfortunate Memory Lapse WC 253" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Meredith feeling like the trip was a mistake. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax, because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Meredith.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Star Trek Poem (TOS)" , because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh and smile.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Promptly Poetry"  "Thanksgiving" , because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of nostalgia forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the was the emotions of nostalgia is shown in this poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed nostalgia.

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Review of Escape Route  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, PB Curtis , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Escape Route" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with the speaker being on the run. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Review of Burger and Fries  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tracker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Burger and Fries" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" .

First Impression: The speaker moves the plot and action forward at a good pace, while giving the reader a lesson in kindness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it caused me to think about the story's lesson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Interesting Case of Mrs Ganly" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Jerome wanting to follow in his father's footsteps. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last sentence is my favorite because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh and smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this funny story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of The suitcase  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The suitcase" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the lightening. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it was the logical ending to the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the descriptions.

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Review of Time Bubbles  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Louis Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Time Bubbles" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first line hooked me with everything appearing to fit together. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, press edmy fingers, I suggest changing press edmy to pressed my.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it climaxes the poem without the speaker finding a solution to their problem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the plot.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dr Gonzo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Down a Gentle Winding Path" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love, hope, and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses the emotion of love.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Review of Four Sails  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, trailerpark bodhisattva , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Four Sails" , because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Kajara's ability to camouflage. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to make this a part of a longer story or novel.

I like: I like Kajara because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Kalaja.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Peony Caper WC 276" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page .

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Abbie reaching through the chain link fence to pick a flower. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Abbie because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Runaway Cow WC 652" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker spending twice a year at a resort/working farm. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while recounting fond memories of her childhood.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of the cabins, with the ice boxes, and the outhouse.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it brought back memories of my grandparents, who always called a refrigerator an ice box.

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Review of Conscapsis Theory  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Joseph D. Smith , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Conscapsis Theory" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this thesis hook me with the definition of the Theory of Conscapsis.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the logical flow of this thesis, because it gives an explanation about the theory and the basis of the theory.

Final thoughts: This thesis is thought-provoking and well written.

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Review of Loser's Club  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Joto-Kai , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Loser's Club" , because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the stranger statement. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Kissla because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, fyn , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Never Too Old for a Good Surprise" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Henry slumped by the window. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like both Henry and David because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of June  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Sox and Sandals , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "June" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with June's homicidal tendencies. The narrative moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because of the way June revealed she was different.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Clipped Conversation" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite, because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem, because it made me smile.

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Review of Meditation  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Meditation" , because I discovered it on the psychology genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the definitions for meditation. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader several things to consider.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Let anything which a person focuses on without distraction be termed meditation. I like this sentence because it makes meditation easier and gives a deeper understanding of the process of meditation.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because it gave me a different view of meditation.

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Review of Even Prompter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Even Prompter"  "Waiting for Godot (apologies to Samuel Becket)" , because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this poem expresses both the emotions of patience and impatience. The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem plot with impatience.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Review of Intimacy with God  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Intimacy with God" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with God waiting for us to call. The moves the essays theme forward at a good pace. The questions ask in each section cause the read to pause and consider what is being said before moving on the the next section.

Suggestions: I found no difficulties.

I like: I like the emphases placed on making time for God in our lives, because it reminds the readers that they have to make time to listen for the Holy Spirit.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the thought-provoking questions.

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Review of First Contact  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Dave Ryan , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "First Contact" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I liked reading this conversation because some of it made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the conversation among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NOBODYLEARNS , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "This is the UFO [2 segments]" , because I discovered it on the legal genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the peace treaty between the United Nations and the United Federations of Outer-space. The descriptions in Segment 2 were part of the action and helped move the plot forward a t a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the conditions in Segment 1 because they were logical, clear, and thought-provoking.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the thought-provoking conditions and the action

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