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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, ruwth Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "As I Walk In Paths Of Righteousness" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza of this poem establishes the speaker, form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of hope and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The repetition of the phrases emphasize both the spiritual emotions and the speaker goal.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem because of the scripture it was based on. The 23rd Psalms is my favorite Old Testament verse.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Gabogame3 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Should the afterlife be a goal in life?" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the death genre page.

First Impression: The questions in this thought-provoking essay give the reader a place to start evaluating the way they live in relation to their belief system. Service to humanity or helping other people is an idea that is prevalent in all religions, but it is something many people forget when they consider the after life.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The questions in this essay encourage the reader to search for the answers. Each individual has to answer the questions themselves and form their own opinions based on the answers they find.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the questions.

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Review of The Next Step  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, lbidler Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Next Step" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (September 6, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The second paragraph of this prose essay hooked me with the questions. While the author does not specifically answer the questions in the second paragraph, the essay encourages anyone wanting to assist a new believer to help.

Suggestions: I found no technical problem.

I like: My favorite part is about helping the new believer navigate their new life.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prose essay because of the subject.

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Review of Unforgotten Souls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Allen Mitchell Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Unforgotten Souls" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with ghosts no one remembers but me. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the climax, because it suggested a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main charac ter.

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Review of The 23 Enigma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Show Show Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The 23 Enigma" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza established the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming world compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot with a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem because of the musical rhythm.

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Review of This Old House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, billywilcox, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "This Old House" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and frightening emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem's plot, with a chilling ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the way it explained the noises houses make at night.

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Review of I AM  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Quihadi Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "I AM" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the poetry page.

First Impression: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The rhythm flows easily form line to line and moves the emotions of faith and trust forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it closes the poem with faith.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the emotions it expressed.

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Review of The Walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Walk" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the problem with the parking lot. The dialogue moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story, because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of the boy. The conversation between the speaker and the boy moved the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing the speaker as a compassionate individual.

What I liked: My favorite part of this story is the lesson about how to treat others. I also like the nonjudgmental way the speaker treated and talked to the young man selling juice.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written and thought-provoking story because of the lesson it taught.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "What the Darkness Brings" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes to form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem because of its theme.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Does This Bus Stop at 82nd Street?" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the woman running up to the bus-stop. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters bu lds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax was my favorite part of the story, because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Jeff Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Devil Went Down to Midtown" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the description of the apartment. The conversation between Ronnie and the Devil moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax made me smile because it was nice to see the devil lose one.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story.

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Review of Oorah! WC 285  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Oorah! WC 285" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Mr. Jasper's question. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Don't Answer Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Allen Mitchell Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Don't Answer Me" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Derek's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Derek's reaction to the spider. As a person who suffers from arachnophobia, I know it was authentic.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Derek's reaction to the spider.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Allen Mitchell Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Fiery Fair (Writer' Cramp 8/30/23 entry)" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's excitement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, Rory's voice carries like cannon fire in a cavern.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the speaker.

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Review of Deadman's Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Ian D. Mooby Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Deadman's Hand" Open in new Window., because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (August 30, 2023)" Open in new Window..

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the Devil's bounty hunter. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax was the logical conclusion to the story and suggested that justice always wins.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character getting what he deserved.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Kenzie Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Morning Thoughts Dressed in Rainbow Hues" Open in new Window., because I discovered it when I searched writing.com for rainbows.

First Impression: The second paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with the description of the rainbow. The author moves the narrative forward giving logical evidence of why she believes in God.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Paragraph seven is my favorite because it shows that understanding how a rainbow is created in nature does not prevent one from believing in God.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it gives the reader something to think about concerning belief in God.

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Review of The ring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi, DragonPrince Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The ring" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the man working. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between Gabe and Kastin build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only question is who is Albertus?

I like: My favorite part is the description of the Sage Gem and the way it was set in the ring.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Gabe and Kastin.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi, PureSciFi Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "SpaceHorrors: “How Do They Die”" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the DeathBringers. The descriptions of the Deathbringers and the way they kill GeOn move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only question is what did the GeOn look like.

I like: Paragraph four is my favorite because it described the DeathBringers in detail.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the DeatheBringers.

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Review of War of the donkey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Eight-7 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "War of the donkey" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the soldiers walking the police officers down the street. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite part of the story was the mother's answer to her son. I like the answer because it was thought-provoking,

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning safety.

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Review of Project Hermes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Project Hermes" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the Hermes launch reminding people of the importance of the Lunar colony. The description of the technology used kept the reader focused on the plot. The interaction of the characters built the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is a well-written and fresh simile, looked like an inverted candle flame in the inky vacuum surrounding the moon. It is visual and descriptive, letting the reader visualize it in their mind.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way the descriptions of the technology was made part of the action.

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Review of Dog People  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Dog People" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the news feed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Shamus power-walking. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: I like the climax because it was a happy ending and the logical conclusion to the story.

Final thoughts: Detective Anderson is right about dog people and cat people they can both be just as crazy.

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Review of Sophia's Library  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Sophia's Library" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the short story page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the way Sophia discovered the library. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

In the first section Sophia's talent, personality, and fears are revealed. This helps readers to sympathize with her. The second section reveals Sophia as an unselfish person, who is willing to help her village advance no matter what difficulties she has to face. The third section help readers understand why Sophia and John are a good match.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the climax, because it suggested that Sophia and John would live contented and happy lives.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sophia, which is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

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Review of The Fire Dragons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Fire Dragons" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the short story page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with DNA changes. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The first half of the story reveals both Zhang Jin's personality and fears.

The best part of the story's second section is the description of the lab hidden in the Tibetan Himalayas. The description was detailed enough for readers to visualize it in their minds. This section also reveals that Zhang, despite his attempt to suppress it, has a conscience.

The climax of this story is the logical conclusion of Zhang's conscience coming realizing what could, and probably would, happen if the lab and everything associated with it weren't destroyed.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Zhang is an intriguing and sympathetic character, who is changed by the project he worked on.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Zhang and the lesson the story suggested.

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Review of The New Order  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, SizeFanDude79 Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The New Order" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the fiction page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Nora being dragged by a super mutant. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite simile, like one would snap a stalk of celery. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: The description of the transformation of the women was well-written, with enough details on how it was done to satisfy any questions the reader may have.

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