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Review of Midnight Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, StaiNed-:D , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Midnight Moon" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The reason I like this phone is that it is easy to understand and good for short descriptions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this wonderful poem a 5.0 because of the beautiful and thought-provoking description of the moon.

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Review of The Fourth  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Fourth" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the mother and daughter moved the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspens.e

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the mother's explanation about the fireworks.

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Review of Rescue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🍂🧡 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Rescue" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Emily's sorrows. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Emily is my favorite character. I like Emily because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the interaction of the character.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🍂🧡 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Devil Doesn't Bargain" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker stating that a vampire's life was miserable. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it is a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of The Otherworld  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, L.A.Saxe , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Otherworld" , because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (November 8, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the wall ornament. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the way the person entered the other world. I like that part because it made me wonder what a person encountered there.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the descriptions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sailor M , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Royal Decision Is Needed" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 8, 2023)" 

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with King George's question. The interaction between the king and his counselors moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The interaction between the George and his counselors, because it revealed George's personality.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, 🪽intuey🕊️ , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Freed From My Brick Chamber" , because I discovered it in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 8, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first stanza hooked me with the first line. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is romantic love.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Which open the windows of my soul, I like this line because it shows the results of love.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it showed the results of love.

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Review of The Cursed Day  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, brom21 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Cursed Day" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 8, 2023)" 

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Cephas's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Fear not. For greater is He that is in you than he that is in the world. I like the sentence because it reminds the reader that there is nothing greater then God.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it demonstrated faith.

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Review of On Naw Ruz  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Kåre Enga in Montana , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "On Naw Ruz " , because I discovered it in "Romance/Love Newsletter (November 8, 2023)" .

First Impression: The main emotions of this poem are hope and renewal. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and encourages the reader to read this poem aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first line is my favorite because it establishes the theme of the poem, which is balance.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the descriptions.

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Review of No Looking Back  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Simply Me , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "No Looking Back" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, There is never enough
time. I like this line because it is a fact that is often used as an excuse.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it got me to thinking about time.

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for entry "Gratefully " 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's"  "Gratefully " , because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of gratitude forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Gratitude is a practice of appreciating all that you have. I like this line because it defines gratitude.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about concerning gratitude.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Margie, the Gossip Girl WC 294" , because I discovered it under By Online Authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Margie's statement. The conversation between the sisters move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of this story was the interaction between the sisters. I like that because it revealed their relationship.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters and their relationship.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, the last cicada , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Flash and Prompt Contest Entries"  "220: “Explain it to me again.”" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Alexa not having the assignment that was due.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, "The printer ate my homework," I like this sentence because, I know from experience, that it is possible for a printer to eat an assignment.

Final thoughts: The teachers approach to the missing assignment was creative and something I would expect from a drama instructor.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, The Key Mightier , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "I’m Odds and Ends" , because I discovered it on The Hub under Newest Static Items.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker setting in their favorite restaurant after work. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Lost  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Wandering Thoughts , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Lost" , because I discovered it on the Hub under Newest Static Items.

First Impression: The first stanza of this song establishes the theme, mood, and subject. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the songs message forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to put this song to music.

I like: The first line is my favorite because it asks questions that give the reader something to think about.

Final thoughts: These are well-written lyrics that should be put to music.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🍂🧡 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Guardian Phoenix" , because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Rowena taking magic lessons. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax was my favorite because it emphasized the lessons in this story. The lessons were kindness goes a long way and evil will eventually destroy itself.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the phoenix.

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Review of The Letter  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, tracker , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Letter" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 1, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sue looking for a letter from Dylan. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax was a bit of a surprise, however it was not disappointing. Well Done.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sue.

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Review of Highway of Tears  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Nightkeeper , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Highway of Tears" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 1, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the man standing next to the car. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax was a surprise because I did not expect it. Well done.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, H❀pe , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Trixie Timney; much loved" , because I discovered it was a blog prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Trixie being called Nana by her first grandchild. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing her love for Nana through the words.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This tribute expresses love through the way Nana is depicted.

Final thoughts: Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to your grandmother.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Hugh Wesley , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Legend of Boggie Bond" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Fred counting. The conversation moves the narrative forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax, because it was a logical conclusion to the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Beneath a Huckleberry Sky" , because I discovered it on the news feed.

First Impression: The first stanza hooks the reader. The rhythm moves the poem's plot forward at a good pace. The description build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the descriptions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Joey's So Hot He's Melting , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "To Have or Have Not?" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the question. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving logical reasons for having faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, existence is dependent on Faith. I like this sentence because it is thought-provoking and encourages the reader to meditation on the subject.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about concerning faith.

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Review of Wake  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, ~ Brian K Compton ~ , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wake" , because I discovered the link in an e-mail.

First Impression: The poem, shaped like a tree, looks good on the page. The rhythm is smooth and encourages the reader to read it aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The shape and colors of the font make reading this poem more enjoyable.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of Clutching Leaves  
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hi, ~ Brian K Compton ~ , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing {item:}, because I discovered the link in an e-mail.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of longing forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: This well-written poem does a good job of expressing emotion through the descriptions.

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Review of Heidi And Mildred  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Sum1's In San Francisco , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Heidi And Mildred" , because I discovered the link in an e-mail.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Heidi wanting the cow. The interaction and conversation among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, that small I was standing next to. I suggest changing small to stall.

I like: Heidi is my favorite character. I like her because she is enthusiastic, intriguing, and sympathetic.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Heidi and her relationship with Mildred.

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