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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, MayDay , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Remember the Red Bird" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp celebrates WDC 24!"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the bluebird taking the spider from its web. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the way the bluebird taught her baby the lesson. I like this part because it seem authentic.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the birds.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first line of this poem hooks the reader. The picture presented in this poem is beautiful

What I liked: The rhyme on ;light, flight, and delight reminds the reader that going into nature is calming.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the picture i t presented.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Jtpete 1986 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Witch's Final Request" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Grotica trudging through the snow. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I did find several places where {font: times} is visible.

I like: Grotica is my favorite character. I like her because she is an intriguing character and a strong woman.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Grotica.

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Review of The Old Oak  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Starwriter .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and nostalgic emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the plot with the most emotion.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Alice .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of hope and joy forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with the emotion of hope.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the theme of home.

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Review of All That Matters  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the speaker's neighbor getting sick. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while showing that sometimes being there for someone is all that is necessary.

What I liked: Mable was an intriguing, sympathetic, and strong woman.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way it shows that being there for someone is important.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Chrys O'Shea .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotion self discovery forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line. I like this line because it gives the reader something to think about.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed this poem because of the questions it ask.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
         
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the man saying he regretted something. I wanted to know what he regretted. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace,

What I liked: My favorite part is the description of the pair fleeing. I like that part because the action kept me focused on the characters.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exiting story because of the action.

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Review of Sleeping  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Sox and Sandals .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Luna being tired while she was sleeping. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense and the laughter

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it made me smile and laugh.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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for entry "The Book" 
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, An apple a day.... .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the book store. The descriptions move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I liked the climax because it left me wondering what would happen next.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the book store and the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Chris Haines .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is longing.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, The best thing I never had. I like this line because it expresses both the poem's message and main emotion.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expresses the emotion of longing.

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Review of Joy In Death  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Marvelous Friend .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Johnny being sick with cancer. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is Johnny's attitude toward death. I like this part because it revealed the strength of his faith.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Johnny.

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Review of Friday Night  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Cynaemon .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Bug being on her way to the Writer's Paw. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: Bug is my favorite character. I like her because she is sympathetic and intriguing.

Final Thoughts: This is a beautiful story with inspiring characters.

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Review of The Poet's Realm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Dave .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the ghost of Poe's raven. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while expressing his passion for the poetic genre.

What I liked: This is my favorite phrase, worrisome witches of punctuation and grumbling goblins of grammar. I like this phrase because it is a good explanation of the difficulty a poem encounters.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the subject.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, B4HEART .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question of how one measures success. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader a great deal to think about concerning both success and the way we, human being approach life and truth.

What I liked: Paragraph four is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it defines a human being as a Divine complex interacting system, which we are.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking essay because it gave me something to think about concerning humanity.

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Review of The Swaggy  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Cherry Mac .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Prosper Kabell getting ready to leave. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: Using Australian folklore to influence this story was a good idea, because it introduce those of us not born in Australia to the legends.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of t he main character Prosper Kabell.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, LeJenD' .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and nostalgic emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it contains the most emotion.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it shows the aging process.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, preksha .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem, while hooking the reader. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of fun forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like the last stanza because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Gladys Karam .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's statement of falling in love once. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing his personality and building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it reveals a lesson concerning love and money.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the speaker.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, 🌕 HuntersMoon .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because I am attempting to survive on Social Security.

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Review of A prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Brittany Lorraine .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The first line is my favorite. I like this line because it address the Creator without using any of the Creator's names.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prayer-poem because of it spiritual feeling.

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Review of Alien Speak  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, BlueJay .

First Thoughts: The alien speaking in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like the peaceful approach this story takes toward contact with aliens.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation.

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Review of Why so rush?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, R.RADHAKRISHNAN,PRATHYUSHA .

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me and drew me into the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotion of inquiry forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, Trust in God our only solace left. I like this line because it reminds the reader that trust in God is necessary.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about concerning trust in God under all conditions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of friendship forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The repetition of The vine upon the wall gives the poem unity.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotions of friendship.

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Review of So Little Time  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Finn O'Flaherty .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the star's wish. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is when the star became a snowflake. I like this part because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful story because it reminded me of children's stories.

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