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Review of I Hope  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Massive Friendly Derg , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "I Hope"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The poem looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotion of hope forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way each line begins with I hope because it gives the poem unity.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it made me think about peace.

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Review of The Funeral  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Funeral"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me with the statement about the burial. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the metaphors and similes used in this story because they were descriptive and fresh. I especially like this simile, as though the sun were wounded and bleeding.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Snow Creatures  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beck Firing back up! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Snow Creatures"  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The third paragraph hooked me with no need for panic. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction of the characters build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the children worked together the defeat the snow creatures.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Eliza West , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Magic or Illusion? "  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker stating he did not believe in magic. The descriptions were part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters built the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, second he was her, I suggest changing her to here.

My favorite part: I like the way Casper changed by the climax.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Technology  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Itchybarn , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Technology"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the question posed in this poem because they make the reader think.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it made me think.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Writer_Mike , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022-23"  "Forgotten treasure [Week 35 entry]"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form, looks good on the page, and it made me laugh.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last two line are my favorite because they made me laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of Paddy.

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Review of Alpha Centaurus  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Alpha Centaurus"  because I discovered it on the mythology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The third stanza is my favorite because of its description.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the descriptions.

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Review of Christmas 1984  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Maddie Sunshine Stone , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Christmas 1984"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 8, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the tree in the mall. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problem.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it expressed the meaning of Christmas.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, SandraLynn Team Florent! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Tooth Fairy Wades Into The Dating Pool"  because I discovered it on the computer genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker admitting to never having a date. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of Crystal Dragon  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Crystal Dragon"  because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the repetitive sound of the snowshoes, because it gives the poem unity.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the descriptions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Penelope Moonbeam , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "HARRISON THE DRAGON"  because I discovered it on the mythology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of Harrison the dragon.

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Review of Dystopia  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Dominique Ford , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Dystopia"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the way Prime Minister Astor took over the country. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I suggest inserting a paragraph break between each paragraph to make this story easier to read.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical ending to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the plot.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Man and the Guardian Angel"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with James deciding to have a talk with his guardian angel. The conversation between James and Ortlad move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, You are a thought-producing human being, and full of wisdom. I like this sentence because it is something we sometimes forget and need to be reminded about.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Half Empty?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Norman , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Half Empty?"  because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me with the question. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last two lines of this poem are my favorite. I like these lines because they give good advice and express the emotion of hope.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it caused me to consider whether I consider the glass as half empty or half full.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Mark Mywords , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Physical Body and One's True Essence"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the idea of challenging the way I think about myself. The author of this essay moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while causing the reader to pause at intervals to consider what is being said.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, The fundamental essence of our identity is not a physical body, but is closer to the intelligence that shapes matter into a physical form. I like this sentence because it caused me to stop and think about the energy that hold my body together and makes me who I am.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it made me think about who I really am.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Beginning of the End"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with regeneration being unpredictable. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical ending to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Dr. Who.

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Review of The Voyage  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Voyage "  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Hannah's vessel. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Hannah because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character and a strong woman.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Hannah.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Just Jae , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Malusk's Confession"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the half-orc being anxious. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Malusk because he is a intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the characters.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Sameness is Safety"  because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with everyone listening to the announcement over the speaker. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: In this phrase, valuable made made his, I suggest removing one made.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Review of Hurricane  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Kotaro , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Hurricane"  because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxed the plot and sent chills up my spine.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written scary poem a 5.0, because it sent chills up my spine.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Ben Langhinrichs , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Mistaken All Week?"  because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked with stranger being no fun. The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythms and rhyming words compliment each other, while moving the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: My favorite stanza is Haiku Hangup. I like this stanza because it made me laugh aloud.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of The Door  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sparky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Door"  because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the idea that it would have been better if the door remained locked. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the repetition of It would have been better if the door had remained locked.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the active descriptions.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Cabin in the Woods"  because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the flurry of snow across the windshield. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, of thea rustic cottage, I suggest changing thea to the.

My favorite part: I like Professor Samardjic because he is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Professor Samardjic.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Graywriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "AI Don't Want to Die!"  because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (March 1, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Varadkar's question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, like a dog running with a torch tied to its tail, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Calvin.

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Review of "1-4-3"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Serena Blade , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing ""1-4-3""  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker standing on the porch waving to Raul. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the two build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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