Overall Impression: This poem brought about intense feelings for myself, as I imagined myself here, what if I was in the character's shoes. the wait is expressed very brilliantly.
What I liked about this item: Every woman is blessed with a feeling BEING JEALOUS. Lets be frank, its quite natural. But here, a woman is shown with a strong sign of maturity, as she is willing to wait till a day when the love of her life, comes back to her with a smile meant only for her.
Suggestion/s (if any): None. the work is flawless. Tag:
What I would like to know: I would love to know, how can a woman be not jealous. I would be definitely, seeing myself in the character's shoes.
THIS IS JUST MY OPINION : There is someone who is truly missing love in his/her life. The words speak in your poem and they are full of " I wish" feelings, so much intense that you have described almost every adjective for LOVE.
What I liked about your poem : The poet has described the want of love by all 5 senses of cognition viz, words, touch, beauty, taste and fragrance.
there is nothing else that can describe the want of love better than these senses.
Misunderstanding over the phone - expressed well. And after my first read, I kind of bursted into a huge roar of laughter, reading that Chester was a cat. The open statements and despritions made about chester are just too apt to make a reader think that chester might be a boyfriend. It was too hilarious towards the end.
very nice work.I really like it.
This item is great. i could actually type in and see if my answers were right ones or wrong. It helps all the members to know where they are, and what all they know, what all they need to know further to enhance their creative writing skills. How do we verify the answers written is my only concern. Otherwise I really enjoyed taking this online crossword.
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This is a wonderful piece of work While I was reading this, I could actually picturise that all the writer saw, as if it was live, in front of my eyes. This made me go back to my hometown, 600Kms away from where I am presently located. And as i see the town developing, the memories of yester years grow more stronger in time.
I liked this very much.
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This is a amazing experience for the writer. When he sees this stranger for the first time, he does not know that he's an uncle to him. Grandma's love for her children is shown very emotionally here, as she stops the pendulum at the time Roy leaves for the war. Its only a feeling that a Mother feels. We can only write about it. The cild's life is empty without his father being present, but he finds a father in his uncle, who once was a stranger.
very nice read for this morning
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Here's a lady whose got ready to go to the ball, wearing a new frock. She asks her mirror how does she look. The mirror is hesistant a bit in the beginning, but as she turns the mirror says that she does not look fat. The lady feels happy hearing that. She thinks she could be able to attract a smart and hansom prince at the ball. The mirror does not encourage her by wishing her luck.
And moral is very nicely explained with the help of prompts like mirror and the lady. Truth is not only the spone words, sometimes the silence tells many things true.
Nice read for this day
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Its quite funny that Emily finds the dragon like her mommy. The thought that Emily enters another world of her imagination by seeing the clouds, is just too good. Yes as a child, we too formed many shapes out of the fluffy cloud going by. For an instance it used to be an elephant, and at some other point of time the same cloud looked like a boat - courtesy wind.
The reason she thought that the dragon was like her mom was because he uttered the same words " Work first, play second".
Very funny read. Nice imagination
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sometimes the dreams we get are often guidlines to our life. It was true love between Jill and Rory. He loved her from the bottom of his heart, so much that they were supposed to celebrate their six months of togetherness. But sudden death of rory in an accident left Jill into pieces. She dreamt of the patio and the fairies and their music, and one night when she felt the pain again, she ended up on the same patio, felt the same warmth of an arm around her, felt the same love and joy in the music intil dawn.
Purely miracle but they do happen.
Very nice read for this day
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Many a times, when people get old they are ignored. Just because they cannot cope up with the younger generations. But the older ones have had better experiences than the younger ones. All they need is love and warmth from the family and freinds. Old age is similar to infant age. The oldies behave the same way as once our children used to be. But we dont hate out children to be silly. Then why do we ill-treat the oldies? WE need to show them that we love them, make them feel warm with our loving gestures.
Thats all they need.
Very touching poem. And a nice read as well.
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No one loves us more than ourselves. And this work explains the same. A woman, who has given up her life for the one she loves the most, is confined between the walls of DO's and DON'Ts. She is not allowed to gel with people, not allowed to have the outler look. And she finds his love , lost in paradise long ago. She has to find an escape to it. That escape is not jumping out of the window and sacrificing her life, but to find peace and love within herself. The introspection towards our true nature. And our true nature is Love, peace and happiness.
Very good inspirational read for this day.
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WE SHALL OVERCOME , WE SHALL OVERCOME, WE SHALL OVERCOME .. SOMEDAY
DEEP IN MY HEART, I DO BELIEVE, WE SHALL OVERCOME SOMEDAY !!
Thats the spirit of this poem. Though we are dejected, cold and feel locked by the walls of emptiness, a small encouragement can drive us far towards positivity. Love melts every impossible.
Nice read for this day
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Being an Indian , I too can relate to this poem. India is a great country to live, to dwell , to grow, to prosper. Though we are not as developed as other nations on the globe, we do have some uniqueness in ourselves. Not that I am biased, but yes, we need the spirit to listen to us and end our sufferings that disguise themselves in the form of poverty, negligence, terror attacks, prejudices and division in the name of religion. Every Indian wants to go to bed with a thought that yes today was a god's blessed day and tomorrow will be a golden one in the same way. A safe life, happy life, and growing life is all we need.
Zillion thanks to the writer to write a poem for India. I thank you on behalf of entire India.
Thanks So much
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This poem possibly talks about a fear within everyone of us. It also talks about a second thought that usually co-exists with the intial one. We do have double minds at times, and it gets difficult to really get to a decision. But our self confidence and our inner voice (the voice of God's reflection), is the one to guide us. And with that we can win any emotional war.Thats what this poem has to tell each one of us readers.
Thanks for this creation. I really liked it.
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Here is this lover, a heart broken fellow.
he has lost his love for some reason unknown.
Over a period of time he losses the intesity of his feelings towards his companion. He has accepted that Time is the best healer, a quicker one than shedding tears. The character is so cold towards his feelings that he has forgotten all the time , memories shared with the loved one.
Nice read for this day
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A task offered to all of us by this author is to spread smiles to everyone we come across. As it is said " do unto others as you would want them to do unto you", is best described. And I personally think that bringing a smile on someone else's face gives a unique satisfaction. A satisfaction that yes my job for the day is accomplished and now i can face HIM eye to eye on my descend to heaven. Live and let live is the motto of this poem
Nice inspirational read for this morning
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The writer is offering his warm frienship and expects that there is no false drama associated with it. And he cannot stand playing games with one another. He agrees that all of us have some problems in our life, and that are caused by our own deeds. Its upon us not to linger to those thoughts, and start afresh with new horizons extending frienships to us. But at the same time, we should be loyal towards it, and author expects the same loyalty from the stranger who is turning his freind.
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The Independence Day celebration explained here very nicely. Its the festive night, and there are fireworks everywhere. Colourful bright lights with Booms are heard by people. And those who least expect it, are frightened, jolted in shock. Even animals are frightened due to the loud fireworks. And poet advices that bursting fireworks is not bad, just that we should ensure that everyone's safe. A message is well passed on in this creation
Nice read for this morning
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Max has captured almost every aspect of life. But he is still waiting to capture joy, thinking where he would find it. And with some series of actions at his home, he finds joy in his wife's laughter because their small toddler has done something funny.
This small story sends out one strong diction. Even if you roam the whole world in search of happiness and Joy, you will find it within yourself, within your loved ones, within your own home. There is no need to search for it. It is already there. Just a little introspection is required with the help of a camera. Very wonderful read for this day
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There is this lady, a widow, who is probably in house arrest or a prison. He looks stressed out from her description. She is arrested - may be. Thats what I can comprehend. I am sorry if thats not the real sentiment behind this write-up. However, when she is handcuffed, she wonders whether she is detained or she has got a fresh life to start in the imprisonment.
Interesting- would love to read more if elaborated. I want to know what the lady would do further, feel further.
Good read.
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Marcus , the bad man, portrayed very aptly in this piece of work. He has already possessed two masks and is on a mission to have the third one from the auction. He wins the auction, and he is now the owner of The God of War, besides Anarchy and Chaos. But as the name goes, The God of War, declares war on Marcus and he is englufed in his vault. Bad ending to a Bad man. Nice lesson to be learnt from this is , if you run nehind becoming a bad ruler, the deeds themselves will kill you.
Nice read for this morning
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Thats exactly what happens if Charlie Brown's Mother was anyone WDC mentor. It would be usually a monologue with some sylablle as a response to the talk. The writer is trying to clear some doubt about how he has to write a poem. Whether it should have a rhyme and rythm, which figure of speech he is supposed to use and things like that. But the only response he gets is waaaaaa wawawa.. and amazingly funny, he presumes most of things and thanks the mentor as well.
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very funny piece of read. This actually shows how every typical husband is when he is angry. Always a soft spoken person, Mitch displayed a funny behaviour as per the writer. But the rage was true as he was hand-cuffed for a small reason. When they get into the bed, the writer is so sleepy that she over-heard him most of the times. Only when he said THREE TICKETS did she jolt back to verify her knowledge of two tickets.
The best line " he had the deer in the headlight look"...
Very funny and a nice read
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A wife and a Husband, if they enter the same profession, then its a real music. Mitch did not want to enter into writing, as he knew for himself that he was good if he was to review the stuff. But he entered into writing just for his wife's coaxes. Now it was his wife's turn to review Mitch's work. She found it to be difficult to review honestly and at the same time not hurting Mitch's feelings. But she was frank enough to admit towards the end when asked whether it was something she hated. But Mitch got his answer very well.Nice read.
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Oh my god. This turned out to be a completely hilarious disaster.The best part is in madlib is that, whatever form of information we try to provide, is always different from what it is thought of to be. I mean how can they eat cow , baked bird, mashed trees for dinner? hahaha thats very funny.
But again, this is the best way to learn "formation of a sensible sentence.
Good work folks.
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