Hi! First of all, this poem gives off the vibes of sea shanties, which I love! I hope that's what you were going for. I'm not sure if I got this right, but I believe the waves coming and going symbolize the protagonist letting go of their "sins" and their troubles as the seasons change. Very beautiful piece that you can't help but read again and again.
Hi there! This piece, although short, was very adorable and wholesome. I couldn't tell if this was a true story, because it certainly reads that way! You have a way of connecting with the audience as if you're telling them a funny and interesting memory. You also have a very particular style that reminds me of early 2000s novels, the nostalgia is great! The imagery is very simple but that fits the writing well.
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