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893 Public Reviews Given
894 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice creation to your mother. And, it seems God gave you a very nice mother. You do write beautiful poetry. It is all there - love, play, companionship, caretaker, friend - all the titles of mom.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your "The Love You Can't Deny". It tells of my love past (to cancer). I hope your freedom is all that you wanted it to be. My favorite stanza is:

Let your spirit free while you dream (free or run free?)
Riding on the tail of a moonbeam.
Hold on to the love in your heart
As spirit lovers, never to part.

It is a wonderful poem and I am please that you have shared it.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi 4Wheels,

I like your poem, One Handed Writer. You have a great flair for words. I encourage you to do more. You have written many words that I like...I like the way they flow. "Who will try to write no wrong. Because it just does not belong. Just want everyone to know. I am a one handed writer. Not a famous prize fighter." You may have a challenge because of having one hand but your creativity is tops! Let's see more!

Best to you,
Seabreeze

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Review of Scrapbook Wishes  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice C-note that I am sending to my friend, Gladiola.

Here are so gift points for you, Scrapbook Wishes.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I still think Nero was the worst; Caligula probably close behind. Good poll that brings out our thinking process. Right now, Obama is probably falling in the "other".

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sorry but my choice isn't on here. It would be Obama. Nice poll though.

Seabreeze
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Review of Sinking Ship  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was fun, but I admit I did it several times and still not satisfied. What a fun way to create!

Thanks for the coffee break,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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My entry for Honoring Our Veterans. Looks like fun and for a wonderful purpose. GPS to you for your contest.
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Review of The Pot Stirrers  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, learned something new again. Loved the writing. Wasn't aware of the term but sure have met and maybe have been one myself. Nice work....it has been fun playing on your turf!

Seabreeze
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Review of Moonlight shadow  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice. It took me right in. You kept my in suspense and, for such a short story, I was well rewarded - well written.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice collection of "write backs". I especially like the one from Roald Dahl. I am not familiar with the individual but it is impressive. Such a fun collection you have going. More to come??

Thanks for sharing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Art  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice indeed! I know of what you speak about being afraid to write or anything else. I was always shy and pushed myself one time and took a class where I sung in front of a small group. Best thing I ever did. No, my voice is not that good but I had fun.

Your poem is well written and says a lot....I love it. May I also say, welcome newbie!

Hope you will stop by and look at one of my creations.

Your fellow writer,

Seabreeze
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Review of Maison Diable  
for entry "The Picture" 
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh how our mind can play games - imagination to feed our writings. I loved every minute of it. Your choice of words so well placed to "pull" me in. I believe we all have been somewhere, at some point in time, whereby you feel someone is watching. You brought me back to a couple of those places.

Thanks for the haunt.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have recently been teaching myself chess and appreciate the words you have put to play in your poem. It brought back to me thoughts of my husband, who played, who has since past on. It also reminded me of a short video cartoon of an old man (cantankerous grins,) playing chess against himself in the park, Geri's Game AK (http://youtu.be/1m7dcbIKvlw) . The whole poem gave me smiles.

Thanks for the treat!

Seabreeze
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Review of In Your Eyes  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I love the words you selected to use and how they flow. Eyes are so important when it comes to communication. You have told it well here. I read recently that, I believe, 93 % of our communication is body language...and those eyes carry a lot of weight. Thanks for sharing...

Seabreeze
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Review of Beautiful Girl  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice...words say just what you need and has good flow. I like it very much.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing what are mind can tell us, if we let it. I like your words and its "flow". One will succeed because one tries and learns about life.

Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome, newbie..........
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely tribute to our Savior. I love your work. I have one poem about our Savior. It is a sestina poem. It wasn't easy to do but was fun. I had no idea the various styles of poetry until I did so research.

Thanks again for your loving writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. I love the words and how they flow. My favorite line:

"The children are at play
With balloons, balls and kites.
Moms with babes in strollers
Enjoy the nice spring sights."

You, my friend, have the talent...

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review of A Daily Blessing  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I keep on learning about poetry. I see that laterne can come various rhyme schemes. Yours has a nice sound, flows and very sweet.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have written an amazing testimony of your faith during the dark journey you have been questered to take. You have communicated to me your heart felt situation. Many would love to be able to communicate so well.

It is through our faith that we can even make these trips without completely crumbling. I believe you are correct in your assumption that we are players and we can only do our part - God does the rest. However, He loves us and gives us guidelines within his Word, the Bible. We can only love are child and tell him what we feel is right (Bible) and what the consequences are (Bible) because of our choices. This is what Christ did and taught. I truly believe that it also is our roll in life and we must play it out. We do are best and then God will do the rest.

You can see how touched I was by your story. I hope you were not offended by any of my comments. Thank you for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review of Mentally Upset  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like your poem and how the words and thoughts flow.
Help me out here. Isn't a Tanka poem to be
5,7,5,77? I could be in error.

Seabreeze
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Review of Matt's Renter  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like your Matt's Renter! You kept me on the edge of my seat all through the story. I hope this will become something more - short story or novel?

Thanks for the entertainment!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like your trepidation, and I have learned about the triolet. I had to go look it up as it is not one I am familiar with. It is fascinating the many stanzas or methods in writing poetry.

You have done well with your lines and telling of your trepidation.

Seabreeze
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Review of Bathed by Orion  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! Beautiful. My favorite line, not that I need one, is


"Tis Angel’s grace we here imagine,
Horizon dressed to mediate,..."
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