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893 Public Reviews Given
894 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review of REPOSE  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Repose is excellent. I love its flow and choice of words, especially the stanza speaking of freedom (something to be lost). I have enjoyed reading it, which is very important to me. I see you have been here since 2005....yes, I have much to learn and thank you for sharing.

Still consider myself a newbie,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, you make some great points in your poem. It flows well and keeps its reader's attention. I enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Comment-In-A-Box  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your "Comment in a Box" is an excellent guideline and well outlined. I am sending this over to my "saves" so that I can reference from time to time.

Thanks.
Seabreeze
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Review of The sea  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice. Has good flow. Are the horses the white caps on the waves?

I love the sea as well (Ventura, California). I now live in Utah (with family after husband died to cancer). I have learned to enjoy the snowy mountains but miss the sea.

Keep it up newbie and welcome.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I think you are flying now; actually sorrowing! Congrats to becoming a new Preferred Author and still such a newbie! I love your poem and it well expresses your desire to be free and create.

I am a newbie myself and still struggling with finding time for everything at this point in my life. I wish you the best and hope you will stop by at the old Seabreeze homestead and give it a look!


Seabreeze
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Review of Beautiful  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice! Is the particular style have a name? I love the way you presented the contrast.
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Review of Blue  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
My sense of humor has picked up. I like this one. Once again, Blue is just a little to somber for me. But, I like the way it tells the story and it is to the point. I almost hear someone saying, "Don't let the door hit you in the backside."
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Review of Miscommunication  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Why the somber ending? It does have all the makings of a confused couple...not much love left. It sounds like a older couple? It looks like he worked it out after all.

It flows well but so sad. Not sure if I would change anything though.
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Review of WISHING ON A STAR  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem and maybe a dedication? It sounds what we want for all of our children; love, hope, free of pain. Bless you and your Kristy.
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Review of Justice  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I love the arrangement (special type of prose?). Well written.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem. I really like how the words flow. I have a few romantic poems and this one really hits home.
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Review of Blue  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job on "Today I am blue". Nice arrangement in defining your colors and I like the way your third stanza brought all the feelings of blue together.
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Review of you make me smile  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome newbie....but you sure don't lack for volume!

I love your poem. It is fun to write about romance. Thanks for visiting one of my creations.

Best to you,

seabreeze
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for entry "Learning Experiences" 
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+
Wow, Pat, quite a documentation that you have share with us. I commend you and your family and wish you the very best on your continued journey. My God continue to bless you.
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Review of My Drummer Boy  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! Has a very nice flow. Nice choice of words and the content is intriguing; I want to know more about the relationship from the drummer boy to the poem creator.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent! I remember the commercial. America is a country where her children are spoiled. We have so much and we should return much back:

Luke 12:48 " But the one who does not know and does things deserving punishment will be beaten with few blows. From everyone who has been given much, much will be demanded; and from the one who has been entrusted with much, much more will be asked."

I truly love your poem.....Thank you for its post.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very nice art work and tribute to the well deserved!
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Review of An Apology  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, how do we mend a broken heart? I like the way your have written "An Apology". It is simple, but with words that say you are reaching in the heart. I have written apologies, two in fact, and it is very hard to do. However, harder to say, I believe, than write! Great job - it flows well.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Too cute for words! Looks great, flows well and I was interested all the way.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent! It kind of gave me the creeps. I think it is because the wind is blowing outside right now. I anticipated the ending - wish I hadn't. But it was fun. Nice writing.
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Review of Broken  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here I am again, finding that I love your creations. I love your "Broken". I hope you will take time and go over and see my "Broken". You do great work. Sometimes it takes sorrow for the words to flow.
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Review of The Sky  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome newbie....very nice for boredom!

I live in Utah and today we had a dusting of snow, sun out, behind clouds.....you made me think of all the beauty in the skys. Love it!
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Lightening in a Bottle was very helpful in setting the character's ever being. I am very green at writing and new to characterization. It is amazing how much needs to go into its animation; to breath life into you stick figure sort of speak. But, if someone says John Wayne, the first thing I think of is his walk. Physical traits do make for an interesting character.

As a newbie, I wonder how does one keep track of all that each of their characters possess? Thank goodness for computers. I can't imagine writing a novel on a typewriter, but I know some of the best has come from them.

I like your complete piece and the challenge you have closed with. These short exercises can really stimulate the mind and it is surprising what jumps out.

Excellent, thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review of The Artist  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like The Artist. I relate to this. I dabble in drawing, watercolors and writing. You do feel good when you have completed something. I could see the colors as you mentioned them and almost feel the clay as you turned out his creation.

Thanks for sharing, great work.

Seabreeze
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Review of A Mother  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very nice tribute. Sounds like an assume mom. Nice flow and selection of words.
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