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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A picture of beatnik era is displayed aptly in this free verse. The passion, and the behavior is painted well,.
The flow is good with a matter of fact fluidity in lines. It is written with a focus on a theme and told like a news story.
It's easy to read and follow without any guess work needed for a reader.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A good rhyming poem about writing poetry. A good flow with a good choice of words. A poet has no boundaries about ideas, locations or thoughts. It's said a poet can see what the sun can't. It's a good release process for a stress or any discomforting thoughts.

A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Catching the moonbeam and its thrill is described in this poem. The excitement in each line. the flow is smooth, the idea is good and displayed adequately. but there is not much to tell and the feelings can be expressed in so many words only.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Aggression  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A nice poem with good smooth flow and a great message. I liked the tone of the poem. Each stanza expresses the novel idea of a storm. The natural ways are very appealing.
I liked the last stanza: Caged gorillas claw
fighting for freedom, angry
with the universe
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The essay is well written. The collection of quotes gives a new confidence to the person fighting to get over the calamities. the protected childhood is well remembered, the own fight starts at a grown-up time.
One has to muster all the courage to get over the storms, one can never be prepared enough to fight it.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
The lyric runs well. The love disperses in every line. I wish I could hear the tunes along with it. The loss is well documented. The emotional impact flows in a good speed. The last verses talked about love mending, the positive tone is refreshing.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Sold on Chimes  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good piece on wind chimes. A small thing which makes a person happy , well documented. Usually these things are ignored but to make a point of it is a good idea. It 's written well in a few lines but the message it carries is real.
The topic is unique and speaks well.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Sweet Breaths  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
As the description says"Love makes the ordinary exquisitely touching.' The poem is expressing the emotions well. The touches expressed with emotional feelings. It seems the love makes everyday special according to the poem. It composed well, a free verse talks a volume.
A god read,
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem on autumn colors is too long. The message is profound and poem flows well. the choice of words is good but unusual. There is no rhyming scheme or no rhythm found. The poem is crafted with a rich language but I prefer simplicity in poetry. It reads extremely well and thanks for sharing it,
Jaya h.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A weird piece. I didn't get the central idea behind this document. Why one needs to exchange heads? or is it a thought process needs to be replaced? Who would think in these terms? I tried to see the other meaning behind these lines, but failed to do so.
An interesting piece,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's funny poem with lots of imagination by looking at the sky with various clouds. If you keep on looking you can imagine seeing all sorts of the things, crossing all the borders. But you also learn that the images are temporary and the sky is the permanent above us. The poem flows well and keeps up with the theme.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good Triolet form as a tribute to a mom. The poem flows well, with few words it says a lot. the beginning is apt and picturesque' her actions loud, though words were few.' the tone is good with good choice of words. The poem maintains it rhythm with the theme.
A good read,
Jaya H
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
It's exploring journey of growing up into a person of interest. The natural background is painted well in this poem, reader wonders whether there is such a beach. The soothing lifestyle with a romantic touch to it, is well documented. The inspired poet with beautiful nature around, can start a t any age.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good satire about the writers on WDC. some are famous and accomplished, others are still learning the craft which could seem easy but in reality it's tough job.
It's irony caught in poetic way but in comedy. The lighter tone of the poem makes harsh dose to writers, around the website; much tolerable.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The sonnet written with emotions and flows well with rhymes but the syllables count is not watched that carefully. It expresses an honest love and hope to get it fulfilled. the power of the love is expressed very strongly with a tremendous hope of the union.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It reads like a love poem but it's length seems more than necessary to express the gratitude. The flow is good but very repetitious expression throughout. the same thing could have been expressed in fewer lines. It could be a prayer made in anticipation of the presence of the god.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Starbucks  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem on Starbuck's coffee is an unique idea. Everybody will agree with the words in poem. But it's price had to be mentioned, because it's not very affordable treat for everyday, I believe. Good acrostic, flows smoothly, just like a cup of coffee.
It's a fun reading it,
Jaya H.
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Review of Winter Night  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A delightful version of winter night. The poem flows well with a good rhyming scheme.
The good of winter is displayed here making it appear as a calm night. But many winter nights could be disaster to bear, when snow storms are terrible and temperatures slide down to subzero, but the poem tals about a mild, calm Wither night.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It's very imaginative cry from a slinky. It's a metaphoric but flows well with words. subtle words. 'Like a Slinky on a one-way trip down the Stairway of Life?' this line speaks a lot. Not a chance to go upwards is a mechanical effort and to reverse it close to impossible, the maker made it that way.
An interesting piece,
Jaya H.
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Review of I Remember  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Its a touching dialogue about the loss of memory. The earlier signs are very subtle and always go unnoticed and denial takes place all the time. but with the progression of time, the symptoms get clearer and the disease progresses in full swing, with no knowledge of life at all. the Alzheimer disease is well documented here. the poem flows well .
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review of Luminescence  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem flows well. the tittle is appropriate to its content. he choice of words is good. The descriptive nature of the poem reads well. Its like a life story of a luminescent character which finishes while in at the glory of life. The lines say the most are:

But then the day would come, her awful plight
That plucked her rose's petals; cut her stem
A good read,
Jaya h.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A poetic Mother wolf.
The poem is very descriptive and the portrait displayed here is very interesting. Knowing the limitations for the contest entry, the poem flows well and character of the inner animal painted well with god choice of words and sporadic rhyme here and there.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of May Angels Watch  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem is like a prayer. So many expectations from the angels. All the wishes if come true will be a bliss for the person. There is no harm in asking for the happiness overall but one should do his/her own work without fail. The prayer is made in good faith for the betterment of the family and self.
A good read,
Jaya h.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The sad story of the sick person is emotionally depicted here . The flow is good with rhyme in all the poem. There is always nothing in man's hands, but man's ego doesn't accept . this feeling is well documented in the poem.
"someone else’s tragedy,
Will be our miracle' in these lines, the sad truth in life is well expressed.

Jaya H.

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Review of My Friend  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The story is interesting, moral is good too.
the poem reads more like a prose than poetry, but it flows well , easy read and follow.
The imagination is vivid and inefficiency of dad to rescue his daughter is situation well set for the story.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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