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Review of Her Prize  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Something about gothic genre, be it writing, poetry, whatever, it just feels the melancholy part of you. Maybe when you want something not so cheerful and a little angsty you go gothic. I think that rose at the end could be ominous. But the setting is definitely set and actions are about to take place.

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Review of Sons of Erin  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Alright, I'm down with that. I like the leprechaun image that goes with this. Simple, fun, very true. I know in the states it's more of a drinking holiday. My understanding was that Ireland was a bit more reverent of the day. Not that drinking wasn't involved at some point but maybe not as much as elsewhere in the world.
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Review of Exhausted  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
When Dorian was coming through, I had to think about what I would miss if it hit and we lost everything. If you think about it, lot of times, it's just stuff. Stuff can be replaced but life can't be. Somethings have sentimental value and of course we'd be devastated if we cam home and it's all gone.

The human spirit is very hardy and get through a lot of hardships.

I get where you're saying about humanity. Sometimes it sucks to count yourself among humanity.

You as an individual can be who you want and decide what you want to do with your life. It can be hard, and sometimes you don't see anything positive in your life or the world in general.

It doesn't mean you should give up or resign yourself among the masses. People make choices and sometimes they're really terrible ones. That doesn't mean the opposite isn't true as well. You just hear more of the bad than the good and the beauty that's out there.

Everyone has the choice to be part of the problem or part of the solution to making the world better. It starts on the individual front. Within us.

I hope you decide to stick around. I think you have poet in your future.

Hope you find a home here in the WDC community.

Warm regards, BlueMoon
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Review of Spring Haiku  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Haikus are fun to read but a bit harder to write. I love nature haikus. There's just so many different ways to describe nature and fitting it into haiku form can be tricky. I certainly admire people who seemed to have a much better grasp of it than me.

Very vivid imaging.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You've certainly got homeschooling down to a science. If you have the time and are able to do so more power to you. You certainly seemed to have it covered on various fronts. I'm sure your kids are getting the very most out of this. To do all that, you have to be pretty disciplined to be able to do that and make sure the kids are doing what they need done. I don't know if that's something I could do.

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Review of the dream  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Something about angsty poetry that really gets to you. I comes off like a lost love and morphs into a man willing to give his life for another. ''No greater love is there than to lay down one's life for a friend.'' This man sounds like an amazing self-less person and I'm sure will be greatly missed.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this is awesome! I love the name Arboleda. It sounds like some far off distant land waiting to be explored. I like the dynamics between this group of people/friends that are going off in search of adventure. I'm not sure if you meant grim reaper instead of grin reaper. It was rather enjoyable to read.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I can certainly agree that these are very divisive times. Just about anything can be cause for people to get upset and blow things out of proportion. Does anybody have to be the bad guy? Can we not agree to disagree and still have respect for out fellow man? Last time, it took 9/11 for people to become united together. I really hope something like that is not necessary to remind people that we're all Americans and we need to stand together if we don't want to crumble like those who came before us.

Maybe you could separate the second paragraph by spacing a little. It looks more neat that way instead of becoming a run on sentence.

Some valid points to be sure.
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Review of Dear Henry!  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,thanks for sharing.
It certainly seems alot of time and effort went into this and I'd say it shows. I feel so badly for John. I think he was royally hosed and as soon as he was able should quit town and the lot of you as well. He was probably horribly embarassed. One of those personal things you don't share w/ people. I'm certain he'd have trust idsues after that.

I'd say if you space paragraphs out, that would help it look neater.

Maybe 'your lovely brother,

Paul'.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting poem. I'll certainly have to check it out. The pyrean chamois sounds new. Always interested in learning about new things and places. A lot of animals have to deal with people encroaching on their territory and have to go further away from the development or wend up smack near people. Just look at bears and how they pop up near neighborhoods and freak people out. There was a school in FL, they had to shut down to wait out the bear that ,made it up a tree.

It's sad to think about sometimes.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there,

I just want to say it was your image i guess that drew me further. I rather like that idea so please keep working on it and see what comes of it.

You really only need to turn on the news/radio to find out how depressing the world is. Which is a terrible shame and may mean that it's a whole new world from what my parent knew. I mom was able to travel some when she was in the navy. She didn't feel bad about exploring alone in a country not her own. Can't say that now a days sadly. Not sure if that bodes well for any travel plans I had thought of.


But please give this idea some serious thought. I really do believe it has merit.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I thought this was really well done. I had attempted to make one in my early days but I think I messed up somewhere because it didn't come out nearly as good as yours. I'm not sure why exactly it came up in the hope category but I guess for job seeking it makes sense.


I like doing madlibs because they're generally designed to be fun and wacky and it' always interesting to see how they play out. Sometimes they do end up making sense when you're not really trying. The world's a funny place after all. I appreciate you putting this out there. I really did get a kick out of it.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well we certainly get about heritage and good bloodlines. I like the little cover you have for this. I think it really helps the idea of what's being said here. Now I'm trying to think how much philosophical writing I may have read without realizing it.

To me, it almost comes off like a chant.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
There's a lot to making characters is what it comes down to. I don't know how well my charcters come out when I'm writing, some better than others. but this really goes into how to make them come alive and not just characters in a book. This was really informative and insightful.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for sharing. Mental illness definitely has a stigma and that's hurtful for the people affected by it. Something like ADHD I think has often been misdiagnosed or if found, not properly diagnosed. Some children who have been diagnosed with having it, may or may not have and been unnecessarily treated for something they didn't have & could be later harmed by the aftermath.

Thank you for sharing and giving a more personal look into ADHD.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I hope ypu are able to find meaning and something to give you purpose. I know it may seem hopeless now, but someday it won't hurt as bad and you will be able to move on without getting trapped in the past. It does get better, and however long it takes you to process the loss of the relatiosnhip, you are capable of alot more than you give yourself credit for.

Maybe take this time to focus on yourself a bit more and think about what you want out of life.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I was almost expecting the ''Tell-Tale Heart''. This sounds like something a horror/suspense author might say. As a writer, there's probably some untold story somewhere waiting to be let out. But finding the inspiration to put it out there is another thing.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
That's so true to real life. Good luck arresting Santa dude! But if you think about that, it's kind of creepy. Some guy spying on you and keeping track of your activities & marking you as good or bad. But yeah, that's probably the realest response to Santa showing up.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Is it bad if I like your storm cloud of death? It looks like it's going to start electrocuting people any second now. I don't know why I like the idea so much. But I really like your image you have attached to this. I think it carries your point rather well. Like the apopaclytic alien invasion.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Lighthouses are important for ships out at sea to be able to get back to shore safely. My mom's a big fan of lighthouses. They're pretty big up close. Mom got to climb one once. I couldn't make myself do it but they do serve a purpose. Some get retired but you can still visit them.
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Review of Sick  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there,
Welcome to WDC! It is possible to feel that way even when in a room full of people. I hope you are able to share what you're feeling with someone you trust and find help for dealing with these feelings so you don't feel so alone.

Don't give up. Even when it seems you're alone there's people out there that care and want to help you through this.

Best,

BlueMoon
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like interactives though some can get weird. I guess there's a thing for inflation though I'm not sure that's what's happening here. Being one of the items dealing with plus size women, and so in-depth besides, I think helps you stand out more. I definitely think this has a lot of potential.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I've heard about the butterfly effect before but I've since forgotten it. I'm a sucker for rhyming poems. It's true that we now live in a fearful world. It never used to come to mind I might not survive the school day. That we might have a school shooting and some may not survive. It's a scary time to be alive.
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Review of Break up letter  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was fun if not brutal depending how you filled it in. Sometimes what you fill in can still be oddly fitting. I just like madlibs they're fun to fill out and you really don't have to think too hard. Break ups are hard and regardless what stage of life, they can be hard to handle regardless what side of it you're on.
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Review of Toressa  
Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I think this would definitely go in the romance selection somewhere. It's really pretty and I think it might come out as a slow love song if it did become a song. Just the name sounds interesting. I think you might have something here. I think your ''Toressa'' definitely has the potential to go places.
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