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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I don't how you begin to verify this, and I'm sure it's along process. It's a nice gesture. Honoring the memory of the WDC community that aren't around anymore. It's a nice way to remember those who aren't around any more. I'm sure they would be appreciate the gesture if they were still around. Good luck with this.
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Review of Booster C-Notes  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like your booster c-notes. Life can get over whelming and effect your writing. Sometimes it seems easier to just give up. And having someone cheer you on, is a great help. It wasn't so far long ago I did my own cheerleading with some GOT people. It's a good feeling to know others are thinking of you. Keep up the great work!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was awesome. I like how it's something that stands out and grabs your notice. You're responsible for whether or not your life has any meaning in it. There's truth to it of course. We can choose to be miserable or make the best out of our circumstances. Make the most out of what you have while you got it.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This sounds very Dr. Seuss-like to me. I enjoyed reading it. I appreciate how easy it was to read. Thoughts can come and go. It can be hard to pin them down and utilize them. You have to jump on an idea when it pops up before it's gone again. I like how this was structured. I do appreciate a good rhyme.
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Review of The Wanderer  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
That does really scary, especially if it's raining. That only adds tot he atmosphere. Might have been a prowler, could have been somebody just trying to get out of the storm. I don't know. One time at night, there was a silhouette of a person outside my window. I didn't breathe till it moved on. Might've just been a neighbor walking around outside, didn't care to find out. Totally get you.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the font for some reason. ''With the roll of a drum, writing.com latch open;'' , I'm not sure but it seems like a word was missed. I like how the poem comes together. I like the descriptions that go into this. It's easier to imagine it myself. I like it and think you really nailed it with this poem.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's good that you have that happy moment to look back on. A lot of times we don't know what we have till it's gone. At least you were able to share this one moment in time to have a bonding moment. We don't know how long we have and should therefore make the most of every moment we have with our loved ones.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I guess that's one way of putting yourself out there. That last interactive seems kind of interesting actually. Is it actually based off the Guardian movie with Jack Frost? I just may try that one out. It sounds interesting. Is it still on-going? I can't tell. Good luck!
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Review of Make People Do  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I saw ''Make people do'' and automatically thought- excrement. The set up is a bit off putting. It's almost vase shape. It seems like an interesting poem. It's almost like a person that gradually gets heftier as it goes along. It was interesting to be sure. Maybe some spacing would help.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I guess this technically counts as a snippet. You don't need the quote marks on she, you can put them before I. Maybe an exclamation point on that last sentence. I think it would be interesting to see how this would progress. Maybe that's something you might look into.
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Review of Anxiety  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
First I'd like to thank you for sharing something personal and that may be hard to talk about sometimes. You share an experience about something that others can relate to and may feel more comfortable sharing their own experiences as well. I do like the occasional rhymes in this as well.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I think is a very heartfelt address to a soldier fighting a war. It makes me think of ''The things they carried'', about the things physical/mental a soldier carried with them during and even after war. How it inevitably changes a person. I've had family who are retired and who is still enlisted. I think it's important to remind ourselves why we have the rights we do and to honor those who have and still fight for those rights.
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Review of Of Water  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the little pic that comes with the poem. It seems very calming. The idea of being tainted and then becoming new from the water, I think is quite fitting. Water keeps us hydrated, it makes up a good portion of our bodies, so it's of import to us. I like how this is set up.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
This sounds like poetry, I feel like maybe you might expand it. When you wake up. I get some of my best ideas in the evening. Sometimes early morning or even in the afternoon. You have to run with inspiration when it hits you. I think writing's different for everyone since we all have different experiences.
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Review of Cage of Death  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really liked the title first off. It sounds like it could be a thriller book/movie, ect. I think the words fit in well with what the word search is based on. I had to make the odd word search in school which sometimes turned out-interesting. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Battling Myself  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The title reminds me of a Pink song ''Hazard to myself'' I believe. I think you really touched on what PTSD is. Also how war can cause mental harm besides just the physical. It's a terrible thing that a number of vets that come back from a warzone may experience.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Poetry gives you more room to go outside the norm I will say. I like how neat and organized this poem is. The pictures brought to life here are vivid. There's a deeper meaning tot he poem besides what is being said. I just like writing that makes me think.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really liked this from the beginning. Some of the rhymes come up short but I also know it's trying to rhyme and how hard that can be. I forget exactly what this would be called. Something those medieval minstrels would sing at a feast maybe. Or one of those cautionary tales with a point. I really liked the fairy tale element here; as well as the lesson that comes with it.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
It's different I grant. The poem is something I don't see all the time, it's good to see some variety. Rhymes, I do have a thing for rhyming poems. I once checked out a book on haikus that I really loved reading. The last part of stanza 8 gets my attention.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This looks like something I'd like to partake in. Maybe I can join for a different month. It definitely sounds interesting, so maybe I should join another time it's being held. It seems to be quite popular at the moment. Congratulations. I hope you do well this month and we may see each other again sometime in the future. I think music is a great bonding tool.
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Review of Awaiting My Love  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like visual things in general, especially when it comes to art. They come in a vast variety. I admire those that can actually make them. I am content to appreciate the results. I think the light background helps to leave the center as the main attraction. Congratulations on a job well done. I really like the overall effect. It's not your conventional lovey dovey theme. I like it.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Ah memories,I can relate a bit to this. It seems to be a common theme to ask someone to do your homework or copy it. My own college professor admitted to doing a paper for a friend before.I've probably been in the same spot too. Whether hastily getting the answers before class was underway or just not caring if a friend wanted to get something down.
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Review of Captain Slash  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hah!I wasn't too sure what direction this was headed.I halfway expected to see a way pop out somewhere. But I like how this turned out. It gives it a humorous turn in the end. It is written in a fairly rapid fashion. The conclusion still gets me. A twist can make or turn about a story.
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
So true, it definitely requires an active role. I can't say for my own love life. It takes commitment and other things that can make it challenging. I think it was structured well but I may be more used to a bit more spacing. But I liked your take on what love is.
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Review by BlueMoon Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The closest I can say I've ever come to that is the rock wall. I don't care for heights at all and I can't see myself doing that at all. A good story about trusting others and not jumping to conclusions. The thing about the log sounded pretty scary. Glad everyone was okay.
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