Nicely written details and Chelsea and Phoebe sound cute. A plump dog and her sister a smaller dog. The one dog likes to dig under the gate. Easy to follow and cute with a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Smoke and fairy dust. Different. A nice style and good word flow. Smoke and fairy dust together. An interesting concept. Looks like this was fun to write. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This bought back memories. Nicely written details and my parents and I lived by Washington DC when my father was in the Air Force. We saw JFK in person a few months before he was shot. I come home from school and heard the news JFK was shot. We went to the White House 2 years later and it was closed. We didn't know why. This holds the reader's interest and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
It is nice how flowers relax you and make you think happy thoughts. Nicely written details and food for thought. Courage. Flowers can represent courage, friendship, love and sweet thoughts and dreams. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Lovely reflections and well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Imagine paradise. That would be nice. Some colorful concepts and a good scenario. Creative.
Paradise. Music. Dance. Paradise can be all these things. A good imagination and nice style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It seems like memories in our minds like movies we play over and over in our minds. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Pretend is always nice. Some good reflections. Creative and well defined. Well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and memories of Christmas past are the best. The picture link included is interesting as well. Good descriptions of the house and lovely reflections. This holds the reader's interest and you feel like you are here going from room to room and remembering Christmas. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good fantasy elements. Easy to follow. Some references to The Lord of the Rings. Blissful dreams. Lake. Ancient and bitter wisdom within the wonders. Some good lines. This holds the reader's interest . I am happy to read your work. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a turkey disaster. Been there. A snow storm changing your plans. A stove breaking down on Thanksgiving Day. This story. Naming kids after animals. Cute. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good storyline that holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
I seem to be finding your items. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some sad romantic overtures and sentiments. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and wraps this up with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Lobster pots. Bridges collapsing. Oil spills. Sometimes, the world isn't very nice. Some sad reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I always enjoy reading your writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man telling his plans to a fourteen year old girl about wanting to marry a woman. The girl witnessed a bad moment between the woman he loved and another man who was the ex-husband causing problems. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and creative as the story got a happy ending. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word. A coin can bring good luck and sometimes it can be one we collect that is special. Creative and colorful. A nice style with good reflections. Heartwarming. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Blood Mountain sounds sad. Good descriptions. Native Americans had a rough time of it.Easy to follow. Well chosen words and a good scenario. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I believe ghosts haunt the places they were killed. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we need to find solitude and sanctuary when we can. At an Inn sounds nice. It would be serene. A place to write and reflect on God. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A good style and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We can't say enough nice things about Santa. Some good descriptions and neat imagery about the big guy we all love at Christmas. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and wraps this up with a good flair. Story of love. Good concept. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good descriptions about this person is special. A treasure wrapped in magic. Saturday morning donuts. Quiet mornings deep in the forest. Sound of drums. A lot of nice lines. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and you seem to admire the person you wrote about. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is sad when a town ages and we age with it. We go back to a tiwn we haven't seen in years and oh whatva change. You captured these details well. We miss stores and houses we once knew. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Our county fair has no rides for three years. Wildfires. Sad. Covid canceled the fair one year. Lightning strikes. Good title. Some good reflections and some sad. Easy to follow. A good style. A nice use of word prompts. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I was not an Obama Fan. Easy to follow and looks like you kept notes about him and kept up with the news. He was bo King. I don't think our politicians will improve. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a kitty can be a shadow. My kitty will purr at me. They can be so sweet. Well rounded character and good descriptions and nice reflections. Shadow is a nice name. Creative and colorful as well as heartwarming. Well defined and easy to relate to. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is spooky. A dark woman, paranormal or something brings bad things to a village and doesn't seem capable of love or is interested. A grandmother telling the tale and looks like the force is coming back. A good style with well rounded characters. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded words. This has words of wisdom. This is uplifting, inspiring and uplifting. Food for thought and good reflections. Life is like a roller-coaster. Times of true trial.This, too shall pass. Words to live by. A good style and a nice devotional and we do need God's help. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It wouldn't be a good idea to hunt prehistoric animals. Easy to follow. Sam Adams seems to be everywhere and lives more then one life it seems. Going back in time. A saber tooth tiger awaits him. This holds the reader's interest. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is always nice to start a new day with new hooes, dreams and plans. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. A neat scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Words to live by. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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